Asya OS : Tum Se Hi!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello everyone!!
here is an os , on the second anniversary of Qubool Hai!! it is not so good, and I hope not to poor even...completely on you!! hope you enjoy!!
Asya OS : Tum Se Hi!!
[ banner by me, again a lame try 😆]

Khan Villa was beautifully decorated, members of the house checking the end time preparations, few guests already arrived munching on the snacks, some gossiping about the decoration , and some gossiping about the occasion while some on expenses... guests after all u see...while the elder lady and her husband, i.e., the owner, Mrs. Dilshad and Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan.

Dilshad : Rashid mein yaha guests dekhti hu, please see na where is Ayaan and Najma!! And Asad ko bhi bolo, please make it fast, and also her, sab mehman anewale honge and they are taking so much of time, infact kuch to yaha already h!!

Rashid : relax relax!! I will se, oho now don't blame her, she is like that you now right? She will finish the whole work and then concentrate on herself, so that was so obvious...and I will see for all other monkeys.

He was proceeding when he saw his daughter, Miss. Najma Ahmed Khan, coming out of her room , looking beautiful as ever while she was coming settling her bangles when she winced as someone pulled her long braid, she turned around angrily to meet her naughty brother Ayaan Ahmed Khan, elder than her just 3 years. He ran while she tried to catch him, they ran away teasing and wincing , laughing and whining at the same time. He ran and bumped into someone, his elder brother Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan , his savior, and hide behind him, while Najma whined like a small kid tapping her both legs noisily while he just chuckled and he also pulled her braid and high fived his brother. They both laughed when someone gave a small yet tight blow at their heads and went and stood beside Najma and wrapped her arms around her shoulder , while Najma was just poking her tongue out and giving a thumbs down sign, while they both high fived this time ignoring the angry looks, when suddenly the boys started running and Najma and the other one shared a we are gone' look and ran with boys chasing them.

This scene was witnessed by the couple , who was rejoicing these moments, the happy family moments, Dilshad was almost crying witnessing such a blissful scene, while he just patted her shoulder. They were broken out of their reverie when all the children came upto them. The girls hiding behind the parents while the boys trying to catch them.

Dilshad : oho kya kare rahe ho? Kyu pareshan kare ho tum dono meri bachiyo ko!!

Rashid : ha dilshad sahi keh rahi h, c'mon go now, guests are about to be here!

Asad : ye kya Abbu? Jab se ye ayi h , aur najma ke sath team up hhui h apt go hum par dhyan hi nahi dete, pure time indono k sath rehto ho!!

Rashid : ha to! Meri betiya meri jaan h, so??

While asad and ayan pout , najma and other one just hugged then poking their tongues out.

Dilshad : acha acha!! Bas bhi karo!! Chalo jao, sari taiyariya dekho, ayaan recording wagarah dekhlona ek bar phir, and najma, go and check the final things again and again, asad please beta, see if all the guests are comfortable.

All went and dilshad and Rashid turned towards her raising their brows, while she just gave a sheepish smile, while they glared.

Her : main zara Najma ki help karke ayi!!

Rashid And Dilshad : ZOYA!!

She turns around, She is none other than , zoya, Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan, daughter in law of this house, making it a beautiful home, a loving daughter, a beautiful sister, a sweet SIL, and an amazing wife. She is selfless, caring, kind and a PERFECT for all girl.

Dilshad : zoya!! Aj tumhara din h, its your 2nd anniversary and you are not getting ready properly, chalo go!!

Zoya : ammi!! Bas na!! aur kya?

Rashid : nahi zoya beta!! Varna phir vo mujhe uss beautician ko bulana padega n...

Zoya : nahi nahi abbu!! Please no!! acha ok, I am going, but that proofs, k m bina make up bahut buri lagti hu

Dilshad : nahi zoya, its just that tum aur achi dikhogi , ok?? So now go!!

Zoya went to room to get ready while all the guests arrived a while later, and the function went on with full swing. Everything was just perfect, after all it was the 2nd wedding anniversary of the eldest son of Khans...everything should be perfect, should not be it??

Everyone was busy with the guests attending them. A while later Najma and Ayaan went on the stage nd announced that as it is for the couple , Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan will sing for his wife, bringing a shock to everyone...Asad just glared but no use of it, they didn't care, while zoya also tried but later gave in resulting asad going on the stage .

Asad : like every other couple humari bhi arranged marriage thi, vo to hote hote love hogaya. Kai mushkile ayi but zoya, she stood like a pillar for support for me, we all may loose hopes , but for zoya hope is the survival, sometimes circumstances were there which brought 50% sorrows because the other 50% was the happiness and the jolly in the house, by zoya. Zoya is the best thing happened to me, meri humsafar, meri humkadam, meri humrah, meri zindagi...zoya... each and every step she was beside me , my family, for everyone. I am very bad at words zoya, only thing I can say that main tumhare ehsaan kabhi nahi chukka paunga. Zoya, I LOVE YOU! Thank you so much for everything!! So zoya, here you go!

By the time zoya was crying , while others cheered her up, she wiped her tears and stood there blushing. While asad started his song...

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

He closed his eyes and started sing, while she just peeked out as she was behind ayaan. She slowly started moving the other side keeping her eyes lock with his.

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

He again closed his eyes and sang remembering the way she wakes him up, scolds for getting late, forgetting his things, how she makes his breakfast, her stupid antics, how she forgets what she was doing, how she talks kiddish...how she helps him when he gets home, how at the dinner they enjoy

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi


He remembers how beautiful the scene is when he returns from of office, and see's how she takes care of his family in a kiddish way, how she fights with and then cutely make up for it and how she cheers up when he is sad...how his life and happiness revolves around her


Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai


Automatically his face is adorned with a smile, he opens his eyes to see zoya blushing and standing behind dilshad hiding her face while everyone is smiling and chuckling. His eyes met hers and stayed locked for moments.

[instrumental music]

She moves from there serving everyone , while everyone gets awestruck the way she is blushing, anyone would say that she is just a red tomato or even worse , a red apple...


Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya

She walks looking down fumbling with the bangs falling on her face when she collides with him. She looks up and again an eyelock. She blushes and looks down while he tugged her bangs, and she keeps her hands on his shoulders, when she isn't able to look up she walks from there, talking to Najma while she just controlled her laugh.


Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya

She is talking animatedly to najma, about here and there avoiding everyone or else she will burst out blushing. Asad walked up to her while Najma left silently. He took her hands in his and wrapped his other on around her waist and sang asking the question to her, while she innocently shrugged.


Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

She again tries walking but he held her and pulls her in a roll, so that her back and his front touching and he kept his chin and on her shoulder, while she just smiled.

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

They danced to the tune enjoying the song and relishing all the moments they spent in these 2 years.

Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka

He looked in her eyes promisingto be with her always, to give her everything he can, to give her all the happiness she deserves. A silent tear rolled down her cheeks , feeling she is too fortunate to deserve so much love. While he just wipes them away. She smiles and moves forward when her pallu gets stuck into his watch.


Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

He moves towards her and brought his hand up showing that she and he is tied for eternity now and will always be there together. He slowly removes the palllu while she just hug him and he plants a small kiss on her head.


Mein Tera sharmaya hoon
Jo mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

While he leaves the embrace suddenly, while his whole family is now standing with zoya lovingly. He just moves back and sit on his knees and points towards his family singing the lyrics.


Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

He is still kneeling down and pointing towards them, and slowly stands up and everyone shares a group hug. After a while everyone proceed towards the place where the cake was kept and cut the cake happily.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Everyone is busy later while she takes Asad to the terrace, and hugs him. While he hugs her back still confused why she brought him there.

She slowly parts away.

Zoya : asad you gave me such a wonderful gift so even I should give something na!!

Asad : are par zoya, there is no need of it.

Zoya : are but I want to give and I know you will like it.

Asad : really? What is it?

Zoya : acha I will mimic and you catch...

Zoya first pointed towards him and then her and then she entwined her hands, and then she kept her thumb in her mouth.

Asad : okay okay I got it, u are saying ki you and me together will drink milk, so zoya whats the surprise in that?

Zoya gave him a disbelieving look and tried again , she tried endless times but he never gave the right answer. She got angry and glared him and crossed her arms on her chest , he was about to answer when dilshad's voice interrupted

Dilshad : ya allah!! Ye kesa bevcuf beta peda kiya mene!!

Rashid : ab tak to koi bhi bata deta!!

Najma : bhaijaan kitne budhu h!!

Ayan : bechari meri bhabi , she is so tired explaining him!!

Zoya : exactly ye budhu ram kuch nahi samjhne wale!!

Asad : aplog kehna kya chahte h??

All : yahi ki app abbu banne wale h!!

Asad : oh acha!! Wait ...what?? main abbu , means main ,main ...abbu!!

He just went towards zoya and picked her up and twirled round while everyone laughed whole heartedly!!

Asad : this is the best gift ever!! I love you!!s

Zoya : I love you too!!

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so how was it?? I hope not boring...

do leave your reviews appreciation and criticism , both welcome!! do hit like button and happy 2nd anniversary of qubool hai!!
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy 2nd Anniversary Qh !

Loved this so much ..

AsYa 2nd Anniversary ...

Beautifully Penned..

Asya are adorable ..

Asad Singing for Zoya ..

and his Confession was lovely ...

Awesome ,

Amazing ..

Cute one ,

Adorable ,...

And Zoya's gift for Asad .. was very great...

Feelings and Lifestyle was well Explained ...

Keep Writing ..

Thanks for Pm ...
Edited by Aishwa09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was fab,lovely ..beautifully written👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye ridz, tum kya aaj marna chahte ho?
Kya bak rahi thi
It is not good etc. etc.
EK thappad marungi
Sach mein
This OS was awesome blossom!!!
Reminds me of our beloved AsYa
Miss them so much!
Best return gift of QH's 2nd B'day!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome

Zoya first pointed towards him and then her and then she entwined her hands, and then she kept her thumb in her mouth.

Asad : okay okay I got it, u are saying ki you and me together will drink milk, so zoya whats the surprise in that?

love this part..asad is so cute

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely is
Thanx for pm
Plz pm me for other work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Doll its so cute update
I love it yaar

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice story doll.
So sweet and cute.
I loved it.

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