New ASYA OS : Life's Second Chance - Page 12

Beautiful OS!!! Loved it !!!...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

oops!!! i forgot to comment...after i read this 3 days back...

this was something really pleasant to read...i recalled how i waited for such confession after mangalpur !!!

truly beautiful...

write some more asya os...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

why is zoya so child-like ???

i just love the innocence that u portrayed in her...so fearful yet asad's presence calmed her...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

asad...u r sensible... loving...caring...kuchie muchie !!!!

i love u choco !!!!

this asad did make my heart do flip flops!!!!

his concern for zoya was so genuine and touching...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

last thing...

u r awesome!!!!!

🤗

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Beautiful OS!!! Loved it !!!...

First of all i'm te worst Choti Bajijaan ever ! i'm so sorry for taking so long but i guess that i myself was so much caught in everything with college, family, pending assignments and exams... 🤢
Seriously ask Badi Aapi, once i was so pissed off with an assignment that Aapi did it for me despite my objections and at the end i got a 20 out of 20 ! Let's just say that our Badi Aapi rocks ! 😎
Anyway i'm the worst but then also i'm ur only Choti Bajijaan 😳 (i better be the only one becase i'm very possessive of the titles given me ! 😡 😆 )

Ok now i want to thank u for writing on AsYa, seriously i miss them like crazy and IF is not the same anymore ! 🥺 now i want to Thank you for writing on that specific matter because i myself found that CV didnt explored that part because seriously, being buried is NOT a random thing that happens to everybody andthe fact that though Zoya was a strong woman kinda faked the thing for me because no matter what Zoya was a foreigner who didnt know that such things happened and after she was butied, it seemed like the next day was that nothing happened ! 😳 so this was to say Thank you ! 😆 i'm sorry it seems like I'm going back into my 'bakwaas mode' but well i shouldnt apologize since i know that u like it and enjoy it ! 😉 😆

Now coming to the OS ! 😳
U reminded me all these things... ❤️






And then this one with which u took my breath away... ❤️


Remembrance of golden memories ! ❤️
Here my heart broke for Zoya's pain and swelled for Asad's 'being there' ! 👏
I loved the OS because u portrayed the emotions beautifuly and perfectly, the way Asad keeps on checking on her makes me awe ! ❤️
But then the way Zoya cries at night for not wanting to die beeaks my heart ! 🥺 thankfuly she had Asad as a comfort but still and then her pleads for him to be there with her at night and then his thoughtfulness at bringing a chair 😳 but then going i. Her bed and holding her in his arms ❤️
And then finally the confession ! 😳 ❤️
Beautiful OS Badi Bajijaan ! A wonderful piece of writing !

Love u Badi Bajijaan ! 🤗 and missing u as well ! 😭

PS :
🤣 sorry but my comment couldnt be completed about Mangalpur if i hadnt mentionned this scene which cracked me up ! 🤣

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

First of all i'm te worst Choti Bajijaan ever ! i'm so sorry for taking so long but i guess that i myself was so much caught in everything with college, family, pending assignments and exams... 🤢
Seriously ask Badi Aapi, once i was so pissed off with an assignment that Aapi did it for me despite my objections and at the end i got a 20 out of 20 ! Let's just say that our Badi Aapi rocks ! 😎
Anyway i'm the worst but then also i'm ur only Choti Bajijaan 😳 (i better be the only one becase i'm very possessive of the titles given me ! 😡 😆 )

Ok now i want to thank u for writing on AsYa, seriously i miss them like crazy and IF is not the same anymore ! 🥺 now i want to Thank you for writing on that specific matter because i myself found that CV didnt explored that part because seriously, being buried is NOT a random thing that happens to everybody andthe fact that though Zoya was a strong woman kinda faked the thing for me because no matter what Zoya was a foreigner who didnt know that such things happened and after she was butied, it seemed like the next day was that nothing happened ! 😳 so this was to say Thank you ! 😆 i'm sorry it seems like I'm going back into my 'bakwaas mode' but well i shouldnt apologize since i know that u like it and enjoy it ! 😉 😆

Now coming to the OS ! 😳
U reminded me all these things... ❤️






And then this one with which u took my breath away... ❤️


Remembrance of golden memories ! ❤️
Here my heart broke for Zoya's pain and swelled for Asad's 'being there' ! 👏
I loved the OS because u portrayed the emotions beautifuly and perfectly, the way Asad keeps on checking on her makes me awe ! ❤️
But then the way Zoya cries at night for not wanting to die beeaks my heart ! 🥺 thankfuly she had Asad as a comfort but still and then her pleads for him to be there with her at night and then his thoughtfulness at bringing a chair 😳 but then going i. Her bed and holding her in his arms ❤️
And then finally the confession ! 😳 ❤️
Beautiful OS Badi Bajijaan ! A wonderful piece of writing !

Love u Badi Bajijaan ! 🤗 and missing u as well ! 😭

PS :
🤣 sorry but my comment couldnt be completed about Mangalpur if i hadnt mentionned this scene which cracked me up ! 🤣

Hey Choco

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Hey Choco

I finally got to read it, thank you for the mention but seriously you give me more credit than I deserve.

It was a simple and beautifully written OS with real emotions that describe how two people have connected.

Her pain, his reassurance, how she got him to stay with her and then their confession...Mwah

Absolutely loved it Sis 🤗