AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was Very very Interesting Part,I just Loves this Twist.😊
Mayrah sent His Boy friend Rehan to Zoya's house and he was also close friend of Zoya,it was so interesting.😊Mayrah plan was Just Awesome.😊
Asad(KSG) jealous was so nicely explained.😊
Asad(KSG) knew that Mayrah was not in Bhopal but he was confused that who arranged everything according to his taste,I think Asad(KSG) find out this.😊
Percap was very interesting,Asad(KSG) was going to dance with Zoya.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PriyaCherry.



Thanxx😃
Glad that you like the udate and the twist😊
Will update as soon as possible..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

amazing...

love it...
precap is awesome...
thnxxx for pm...
cont soon...
do pm me...


Thanxxx😃
Will try and continue soon...😊
Will surely pm you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmm so Finally their plan worked. Loved it. But precap is more interstn!! Thnks fr the pm
Edited by H.e.n.a - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loving this
please pm me when u update
and u have 36 likes now 😉
update it please
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Hmm so Finally their plan worked. Loved it. But precap is more interstn!! Thnks fr the pm


Hii😊
Yeah the plan is working😊
Thanx glad that u loved it..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

loving this

please pm me when u update
and u have 36 likes now 😉
update it please


Will pm u 4 sure😃
I know😆
I will update it as soon as I'm free that wll be on the 4 december...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Will update it tomorrow on 4/12/2014
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: loveassh


Will update it tomorrow on 4/12/2014

yeaaa super excited
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys really very sorry for the late update I was very busy with exams and school functions so couldn't update finally exams and school functions are over so I'm updating another chapter ok I'm sure you ppl must be bored with my nonsense so here's the update ENJOY...
Chapter 10
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Asad- (self thought) mayrah mumbai gayi mujhse bina mile how can she just go like that hum 10 saal se ek dusre ko dekh ney kay liye taras gaye thei aur woh bina kuch bole mumbai chali gayi , kyun,

(Aggar mayrah 2 din pehle mumbai gayi toh kal subah woh gobbi kay parrathe kissne banaye, mera room mera according kissne set kiya jaise mujhe pasand hai sab woh sab kuch woh sari details jo maine mayrah ko email mai batai thi kay mai kiss type ka room prefer karta hu woh books, old songs collection dhoni ka poster and the dark blue giutar woh sab kissne kiya kyunki aunty ney saaf saaf kehdiya tha that she didn't do it koi mera intezaar mai subah jaldi utt kar woh sab kar raha tha koun tha wo)...

Asad was confused as to who did all the staff for him because no one in india except for mayrah knew about his likes and dislikes

Zainab's voice broke Asad's chain of thought's

Zainab- chalo bacho ghar chalo kafi der hogayi hai

Gaffur- haan aur ghar jaakey party ki tayari bhi toh karni hai

Rashid- kaisi party

Zoya- aap logo ki welcome back party dost

Dilshad- in sab ki kya zaroorat thi

Rashid- haan yeh welcome back party ki kya zaroorat hai aap sab say mile masti mazak kiya wahi humare liye welcome back party hui

Zainab- Rashid bhaisaab yeh saab zoya aur humaira ka idea tha

Zoya- haan dost sab log aap se milna chate hai, sab log ek ek karke ayenge toh bohot time waste hoga isliye humne party kay bare mai socha ek baar milke kaam finish

Rashid- wow dost tum toh waqai bohot bari hogayi ho

Dilshad- woh to hai aur pyaari bhi

Zoya- abb meri tareef karna band kijye aur ghar chaliye

With that khan and farooqi family left for their house
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At night farooqi mansion

Asad was sitting in the garden on the swing that Rashid and gaffur made for Asad zoya and mayrah...he was thinking about the time when all three of them used to play have fun and was thinking about the emails

Asad- self thought- what is happening why is everything so confusing I and mayrah made so many plans about our meeting so why is she not here who is doing all the staff for me what should I do whom should I ask...

He was so lost in his thoughts he didn't even realise somebody standing right next to him...

Humaira- Asad bhaijaan

Asad looked up to see humaira standing there

Asad- sorry was lost in my thoughts I didn't realise your presence come sit...

Humaira- its ok kyaa baat hai aap pareshaan lag rahe hai

Asad- humaira agar mai tumse kuch poonchu ga to tum mujhe sab sach batao gi

Humaira-of course bhaijaan...poonchiye

Asad- humaira khala ney bataya kay mera koi intezaar kar raha tha aur mera intezaar mai kisse nay mere pasand ka breakfast banaya mere according room set kiya par mayrah toh yaha nahi hai toh yeh sab kissne kiya

Humaira- mayrah appi yeh sab kyun karegi yeh sab toh zoya appi ney kiya tha aap kay aney kay 3 hafte pehle say woh yeh sab tayari kar rahi hai zoya appi always talks about you she thinks about you in every moment of her life and why did you even think mayrah appi will do this as far as I know she didn't even remember you people

Asad- zoya did all those staff

Humaira- yeah she did it anyways I guess I should leave it's quiet late goodnight bhaijaan hope now you don't have any confusions...

Asad-self thought- zoya did all those things for me how did she know my likes and dislikes isn't I'm supposed to feel sad that mayrah did not do all those staff for me then why do I feel like nothing is wrong and everything is right...anyways maybe because she is my best friend
Yeah...

With those thoughts Asad went back to sleep

Next morning...

Zainab- bhaisaab zara jaldi party mai abb zayada waqt nahi hai

Asad- khala apne zoya ko dekha hai

Zainab- woh apne kamre mai hogi

Asad- okay...

In zoya's room

Zoya was sleeping peace fully in her room when somebody opened her curtains and whispered sweet nothings in her ears zoya smiled and opened her eyes

Zoya- hey good morning

Rehan- goodmorning princess breakfast in bed for you since I woke up early I thought of making your favourite breakfast

Zoya- that's so sweet of you and she hugged him...

Rehan- I made breakfast so I will feed you waise bhi kisi aur kay haath say khane ka maza hi kuch aur hai

Asad came in the room with breakfast but what he saw hurt him a lot and he didn't know why he saw zoya hugging rehan and next thing rehan was feeding zoya breakfast he looked at his tray and then at zoya and quietly left the room...only one person noticed this and smiled it was humaira...

Asad's POV

Why am I feeling like somebody is sabbing my heart when I see zoya with rehan if zoya likes rehan then I should be happy for her why am I feeling so bad...

Evening...at the party

Guy- mashallah sidiqui sahab kya decorations hai

Gaffur- woh toh hona hi hai aakhir meri beti nay jo sare decorations kiye hai

Woman- zoya kitni talented hai kash mere pass itni pyari aur talented beti hoti

Dilshad- waqai zoya jaisi koi nahi

Najma- jisski itni bate ho rahi hai woh hai kaha...

Humaira- woh tayaar ho rahi hai

Asad- wait I'll go check

Humaira- okay...and she messaged someone

In zoya's room

Zoya finished put her yellow sari with red borders and golden backless blouse she put her hair in a bun and put on her glasses

*knock*knock*

Zoya turned around to see rehan standing there with a box in his hands

Zoya- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

Rehan- tumhe kuch dene ayaa tha par tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai maine yaha aake bilkul theek kiya

Zoya- kyun acchi nahi lag rahi hu

Rehan- bohot achi lag rahi ho par kuch kami hai

Zoya- abb kaisi kami hai

Rehan came close to her and opened her hair that was in a bun and fixed it with hands and took out her glasses ... and said abb koi kami nahi hai and left the room while smirking

Asad was at the door he saw all this and fisted his hands tight as soon as rehan left the room asad entered...

Asad- only one word came out from his mouth..."Beautiful"

Zoya- blushed... She said thanx what are you doing here you were supposed to be at the party

Asad- I know but I came to fetch you

Zoya- why I think I'm old enough to come on my own

Asad- I know but just you were taking long so just came...

Zoya- okay...so Let's go now

Asad- okay..

AsYa were decending the stairs together zoya's yello red and golden sari perfectly matched with Asad's golden sherwani yes everyone was wearing indian traditional outfits as it was theme

The party was full on swing people dancing and playing around

Ayaan and rehan danced on batameez dil and bang bang (title song)

Humaira and najma danced on ghagra (yeh jawani hai deewani) and lovely from (happy new year)

Everybody cheered for them it was time for couple dance

Rehan- come on zoya sing something kitna waqt hogaya hai tum hari awaaz sune plzzz sing something

Najma- yess zoya humne sunaa hai aap bohot achaa gaati hai plzzz

Zainab- abb saab itna insist kar rahe hai toh gaado na...

Zoya- okay...finee and started humming the music and started singing

Ooho ooho hmmm hmm heye aahha lalalal
Namkin Si Baat Hain
Har Nayi Si Baat Mein
Teri Khusboo Chal Rahi
Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein
Halka Halka Rang Beete Kal Ka
Gehra Gehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho JayegAadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

As rehan was about to take her hand for a dance Asad grabbed her hand and took her to the dance floor and started dancing with her on the romantic beat...

He placed his hands on her bare waist and looked in her eyes

Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega

Beshumaar raatein behisab baatein
Pass aate aate gum ho jaati hai
Bekhudi mein dhal ke bekali mein jal ke
Sau hazaare yaadein nam ho jaati hai
Phika phika pal bitay kal ka
Mehka mehka kal ho jaayega ho jaayega
Aadha ishq aadha hai adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega
Aadha ishq aadha hai adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega

She sang each and everyline looking deep into his eyes and asad twriled her around and pulled her back she collided with his hard rock chest

Aadha ishq ...

He twirled her again and now they were standing face to face again

Intezar sa hai imtehaan sa hai
Itmenaan sa hai kya hai na jane
Itra rahi hai itna hui hai
Inteh hui hai kaise na jaane
Chalka chalka pal bitay kal ka
Tehra tehra kal ho jaayega ho jaayega
Aadha ishq aadha hai adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega
Aadha ishq aadha hai adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega

Aadha aadha aadha Ishhqq

He twirled her around and dropped her and was holding her in an RK pose everyone else was long forgotten as they looked into each other eyes deep and were lost but who keeps a perfect moment alive the sounds of clap broke their starring session...
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Precap- dilshad- zainab mai tumse kuch mang na chati hu
Zainab- jo mang na hai mango sab kuch tumhara toh hai
Dilshad- zoya...

Right guys that's the end of chapter 10
Well I guess it was very horrible piece I have ever written
Still give me your opinion wheater it was nice or not
Well I was thinking of turning this story into SS and ending it in few chapters plzz give your opinion on that as well

Love Aarushii❤️


Edited by loveassh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving it its so cute to see asad jealous

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