Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74 - Page 47

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Omg

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Wow Juliet !!

You really know how to send people on a heck of a rollercoaster ride !!

From where it started on 5a to the end of 5b!!!

Insane !!

Although I was initially a little miffed you totally cancelled out my emotional high point in Chapter 3...

*narrows eyes*hmmm...

But I got over that!! *grins*

But WOW !!

First I thought Ms Muffet was Tanveer, playing really psycho creepy with Aahil's mind causing really crazy hallucinations...

But his FATHER !?!

What a twist !!

And boy was that phone call creepy !!!!

You are a gifted storyteller my friend !!

You took a story, karate chopped it into pieces, and put it back together again totally different !!

Amazing stuff !!

Some of my favourite parts...:

" You listen to me Aahil. You hurt me Aahil. You are this gorgeous broken man, But you were mine. I thought I could mend you, But you broke me instead."

"Dark is punctured with something sharp, Sunlight seeps in through that hole, another puncture then another, many holes of light one after the other... Dark is sent away, Bright takes it's place.."

But you preferred to run and hide, I was responsible for hurting you, what I didn't know was I had changed you for worse."

" Sanam, Give me back what is mine. Come back to me... Because if you don't then I have nothing left to fight for." His eyes looked defeated and tired."

And I adore how you pieced everything together from all the updates !!

Sorry this is so late...

SORRY!

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Juliet !!

The miff didn't even take off! !

Sorta got swallowed by the awesomeness!

Pssst...

shall we pretend to fight so ppl would flock our thread to see what's going on??😆

🤣

See that's a great plan. Lol.

You guys are so lame.

I can totally see my calling here..

Cat fight. 😆
Now wait for the rest to join in...

http://rvgersbucky.tumblr.com/post/103532101050/i-feel-so-useless-sitting-here-what-can-i-do-to

a black twelve y/o was murdered by a white cop because he was playing with a fake gun.

Unfriendly reminder that in America it's reasonable to say an unarmed black kid deserved to be shot six times because he might have robbed a convenience store, but a white kid shouldn't be kicked off the high school football team just because he violently raped a girl. and filmed it. and shared it online.