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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

😳😳Ok So I finished plotting and I have a problem.

My update is super duper LONG!
Very very long! And I am thinking where to cut scenes and I can't cut any...
And to top it I wrote a verse at the start that I am not sure if I must add to the already extended update...
Damn I am super excited...humping the pillar kinds. 😳😳😳


Dont cut a single thing out please !!

Give all!
Gosh this is so exciting! !

After an epic century buzz kill of an epi last night...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sageflower7


Dont cut a single thing out please !!

Give all!
Gosh this is so exciting! !

After an epic century buzz kill of an epi last night...

Buzz Kill really!
You are saying that.
I heard the Aaher thing happening.. second marriage and all but seriously don't you think they wont follow Zoyaan. or will they...
OH I am writing Mush and trill btw, The first confession night. The first part is Goo Puddle and Marshmallows!😆😆😆
And then some hot sex, Only if there is a demand for it...and you know our collab is dying with sadly any readers at all, infact I think we have what like 15 readers in total...and Sex sells always.😛😛
lets up the reader number hopefully to 16😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
A Teaser!
A verse from my update..

Crestfallen He trembled. She caressed and soothed..

Tell me your dreams

I am afraid of the dark.

Tomorrow brings Forever.

What if tomorrow never comes.

Then we make today happen,

Ploy n' pray that it lasts

"The Sands of Time."

Love
Juliet.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

A Teaser!

A verse from my update..

Crestfallen He trembled. She caressed and soothed..

Tell me your dreams

I am afraid of the dark.

Tomorrow brings Forever.

What if tomorrow never comes.

Then we make today happen,

Ploy n' pray that it lasts

"The Sands of Time."

Love
Juliet.


Me be making googly eyes now. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sageflower7


Me be making googly eyes now. 😃


Woo Hoo!
You And Me Both, Sagey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part!
You wrote Sanam and Ahil's emotions beautifully!
Can't wait for the next part!
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

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Faruuu!!!! 🤗

Aalooo!!!! HUGS!!!!

The Riddler you at her Best!!

Aww m darling!!! Riddler at her best?!! But! There was no riddle! Or was there? Heee!

Didn't I tell you...you are going to nail it????

You sooo did tell me!!

See!!

Am seeing it now!! Oh Aaloo me shyyy!!!!

Thank youuu for having faith in me even when I was sure I'D ONLY MAKE A FOOL OF MYSELF!

I mean crazy it was...and crazy I have become after reading this. Fantastic. \m/ 👏 !!
!!!!!!!!!!!

Really??!!!



YOU THINK CRAZY WORKED??? WOOHOO!!! OMG I USED THE WORD CRAZY LIKE A GAZILLION TIMES!!!


And look! You too have become crazeyhhh after reading! I LOVE YOU AALOO!


YOU FANTASTIC, okay? YOU!

And this part:
Crazy was my day when you first entered it.
Crazy in love I was that dayyouput a ring on my finger.
Crazy it is that I'm the reason for your every smile.
Crazy I am every day without you.
Crazy I am everyday. Without you.
Crazy I'm sure you are too...without..me.
Yup...this part...

I have no words. I seriously don't. 👏 Love , love this part so much. One day of home alone and we got this. ;) And Sanam too reached her HOME.


!Aww yeahhh home alone and you got this!

Otherwise you guys would be waiting still!!!

I DON'T KNOW HOW IT HAPPENED...BUT IT JUST DID!


I am freaking out now. Hehehehe. You have taken this to another level...and my brain seriously needs to relax until my turn comes. 😛

Awww AALOO JAAN!!!! Stahhpp!!! And really. YOU? Freaking out? PUHLEASEE OKAY! i MEAN YOUR SIDE DISH! kuch yaad aaya??

And what level man. You gimme wayyy too much credit! ANOTHER LEVEL??? WHAT EVEN!!



Hehehehe yes yes my shweetu meetu baby boo! Relax and chill till your turn comes!

Then we see...who takes what to another level!


Hayyyee!!!

And like Sagey said...I too have questions in my mind. 😆 But before that I am gonna read this again.

!!!!!!!! Omg. READ AGAIN???? I dunno to feel good or bad. You reading coz first reading you didn't understand anything?


Oh mannn.





Mwaaahhh!! Love you. :)

Awww~!!!!! I LOVE YOU TOO ALIAAA!!!! YOU'RE THE SWEETEST!!!!!



HUGSSS~!!!!






Replies in green!!!


Thank you so very much my sayang. What a comment this is! Incredibly thoughtful and so warm and loving!


Hayyyee!!


You pamper me!


AND I LOVE YOU!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

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Farz!!

That was a brilliant update.

Loved the use of crazy. Those lines were so phenomenal.

Honestly, I was expecting this great an update from you. You are really a talented writer.
I actually had to read it twice to get a good grip of it and I simply loved it. Loved the flow.

You took the story to a different level. There are still many questions in my mind and I am curious how this is gonna unfold.

Wow, Sunehri!! Oh my my !! Tanveer is a master... Loved the twist.

My interest has piqued as I am having so many questions.

Great update babe.👏


Juliet darling...Its Home... Update soon. Soon soon soon.😃






Oh my darling Jasmine!



So much love I'm getting here!

I mean.


BRILLIANT???

PHENOMENAL??

GREAT??

TALENTED??


Oh myyy!!!

Thank you so very much love!



I'm so very glad and thrilled that you loved the update!! AND THAT YOU TOOK THE TROUBLE TO GET A GRIP OF THE STORY!



And really!!!?? You loved the flow?


I wasn't sure. But it just happened all of this. So I guess I too went with the flow! Hee!


I hope the length was fine too!



Oh Jasmine!



Love you babe!!!




AND YES!




Juliet. Take us home, kayyy!!!




Mwahhh!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Juliet, your teaser has me sitting on the edge, awaiting the update..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Juliet, your teaser has me sitting on the edge, awaiting the update..

Tomorrow !
Most Definitely. I only hope it is half as interesting as I made it sound.😛
Thanks Love for wanting to read.😳

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