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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Loved the update Anji..

Wonderful..

Amazing..

Superb..

Splendid..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#792

Anjali, I just love this story..🤗

You describe each and every scene so well.. I can actually see it playing in front of me..👍🏼

Feel so sorry for Zoya.. The men she had come to love and respect were criminals.. I was shocked hearing that her Ammi had committed suicide all because of her Abbu..😲 And Imran.. How can he behave like that..😡

I don't want Zoya to forgive them ever..😔

I love the entire Khan household.. Dilshad and her teasing is really cute..

And I love the way Zoya constantly blushes.. SO adorable..☺️

So Asad now has a plan to surprise her.. Aww I loved their conversation..

Fabulously written superb update..👍🏼👏

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..😳

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#793

awesome update

khans r so sweet man ..

loved d way asad supported her all d time ..

aww the mobile chat convo is so lovely😳 ...cant get enough of these two ..

excited fr asya date ...

continue soon

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LANDER

@LANDER

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#794

Just love this story.
Amazing update
continue soon

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#795

Awesomely awesome chappy!!
beautifully penned!! :)

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#796

A very intriguing story...completely mesmerized with Zoya's subconscious!! loving it!!

waiting for the next...

please PM me for the next updates... have sent you a buddy request... 😛

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#797

Ved the update. .:)
I felt bad for zoya..
bt den asad was there.. he is soo good yr..
I love how well he cares for zoya..
dilshaad's teasing was super cute..
awesome update. .:)
Nxt part seems soo interesting..!! ;)
Thank for the amazing update. .!! :*
Waiting for the next one. .:)

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#798

update was as usual wonderful...

loved how asad supported and comforted her...

so date is on the way...

bring it on...

thnxxx for pm...

cont soon...

do pm me for nxt update...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#799

I want an update already! 😭

Your updates have become like drugs! 😭 😲 ❤️

So damn Addicting!! ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ ☺️

SO i'll still say update soon!

🤣

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#800

Hiii...Anjali...well thanx for the P.M dear...so well you are leaving us spellbound and speechless with all this extraordinary piece of writing, Zoya's reaction to the whole situation was expected...from..her ...all her life she believed a lie but suddenly if she is hitted by such a truth then she is bound to be little broken and little sad about her mother...her confrontation with her father and brother was also written well...Imran such a douche bag of a person...Dilshaad and Zoya's convo was logical and adorable at the same time with all those teasing...you know i really like the sound when they say THE AHMED KHAN'S ...Asad is like the only one here who has to keep up with his emotions and give Zoya the support and courage and yes love which she needs right now...so we are going to get a CUTE AND ADORABLE update 15 ...can't wait for it...continue soonish...like really soon..