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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#681

Waiting fr asad's POV.. Plz do continue soon

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#682

Read ur note js now.. So d update is coming tomorrow n dat too morning tym.. Waiting waiting :) :) too desperately

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marcoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#683

Anjali!!!!!

Where r u????

Updateee!!!!😭😭

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: astonm
HELLO! Sorry for the lateness, as much as I would love to post the chapter right now I can't. It's my cousin's wedding today and idk when I am gonna get home, so sorry. Will post it first thing tomorrow morning though! Sorry again my lovelies! :(

its ok 😊 enjoy the wedding.. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#685

will wait but still update soon... 😳

Edited by --SHERY-- - 10 years ago

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astonm

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Posted: 10 years ago

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#687

res for me😃

unres...

yaya

at last they confessed ☺️

amazing...👏

i lovrd it...

thanks for pm n cont soon

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-GaussianNoise-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#688

Oh my god :'D

This is by far, my favouritestest chapter. It had the perfect tinge of just everything. From romance to suspense to comedy.

Why is Asad so so SO nice? I fall in love with him all over again at the end of each chapter you write.

Zoe is so lucky to have him😭

She confessed first. Such a simple yet beautiful confession.

"I've been in love with you for so long that I can't remember what its like not to be in love with you." He whispered making my heart skip.

Haaye❤️ It made my heart skip too. They are so perfect

Nikhat is such a darling.🤣 I love how she teases them so cutely.

Let's see what the raaz is. Definitely something related to Zoya's mother?

Update as soon as you can. Pretty pleaaase. Waiting eagerly😳

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Sabrina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#689

RES

I saw it first. You hadn't even edited the topic name then. 😭 I saw THAT time!

But my internet. 😡

Probably that's my punishment for not UNRESing my previous comment. 😒

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UNRES

I, being a writer myself, know what a GOOD LONG comment means to an author. I'll try to provide you with one. Since you are oh-so-amazing!

First things first.

I know I have said a gazillion times and today I say it again that you are one of BESTest writers on I-F.

Matlab seriously, this FF is the ONLY story which I'm currently reading.

I had stopped reading AsYa stories long back.

But I just happened to see a post made by you and then I saw it's an FF and then I just went like 'Okay, I'm reading it.'

Secondly, I'm extremely sorry for not UNRESing my previous comment. I have already got my punishment for that, you see. I don't think I'll be UNRESing it anyways. Cause I'm very lazy ATM. I'll just end up in writing some 2 line bullshit which I don't want to.

Coming to the chapter.

Hayyeee.

My Asad is just so so SO lovely. Allah Miyaan. I wanna hug him.

I'm so jealous of Zoya. 😡

It's so cute. He's hugging to comfort her. My Kichdooo. I love you. 🤗

Asad picking Zoya up, bridal style Akram Nikaah Feels. Mangalpur Feels. All amplified. Sigh...

Thank God that lady isn't dead. I want her to give evidence against those idiotic dumb heads and then we can get AsYa romance. [Not that we aren't getting already, but still] And thanks for clearing it up, even I thought it was Mariam though I was confused ki woh toh lapata thi. Anyways.

The kitchen. I remembered that Post-Tanveer's Exit Kitchen Scene. What a mess he had created then! 😆 But THIS is my Asad, the one you portrayed. Neat and clean and PERFECT in every freakin' sense of the word.

I slid into the small space between the counter and his body and wrapped my arms around his waist and placed my head on his chest, hugging him.

Fangirling Moment. I could imagine that scene. Allah. Help. Please. Kuch kuch hota hai, Anjali. [OMG what a coincidence!! 😆 😆 ] Tum nahin samjho gi. 😛

And the confession ke liye bas ek gif:

No.

words.

will.

ever.

EVER.

be.

enough.

to.

describe.

the.

beauty.

of.

that.

scene.

And the way you described the KISS. I applaud you. I just went like, 'Please don't stop kissing. Please don't. DON'T!'

Hmm...ab ye kaun saa Satraah Saal Purana Raaz hai?! Probably her dad is really a serial killer. 😲😆

Hahaha. Nikhat's reactions 🤣🤣🤣She's so cute. You should've gotten Najma too. They make an amazing tease-pair!

and my mind was suddenly conjuring up images of him undressing in there...I seriously needed help because my mind was so preoccupied with his sexiness in the middle of a crisis.

🤣

OMG Zoya! Control. Dekho ham sab bhi aise hi hain. Lekin ham mein kitna control hai! Kuch seekho hum fangirls se. 😛😆

Asad holds Zoya's hand. Nikhat's AWWW. [very much similar to mine] and he still doesn't let go.

And THE END. 😭

Damn it! I can never get enough of your stories.

Update jald se jald. Me waiting on toes! Sachhi.

Take Care Di.

Much love,

Isha.

Edited by SabrinaMalik - 10 years ago

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astonm

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik
RES

I saw it first. You hadn't even edited the topic name then. 😭 I saw THAT time!
But my internet. 😡

Probably that's my punishment for not UNRESing my previous comment. 😒

Awww, it's okay, I'll pretend you were first ;) YOU'RE SO CUTE MAN.