|AsYa FF: Clueless| [Thread 1/3 - Chapters 1 to 14] (Complete)

Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Awesome update Loved it <333 Thanks for the pm

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Js read all d chapters in one go... today
N wow not a single word can describe it how beautifully u wrote... I js got smitten vid dis FF
I found zoya's n her subconscious chit chatting a way too adorable, quite sexy n d best among all :)
Bt really loved asad's POV too n m so so sooo happy to know dat he loves her n had always loved her. N above it his sisters n even rashid dilshad know everything.. Quiet smart haaan
Love u a loott fr writing dis amazing n plz do continue soon.. M eager desperate n what not to read d upcoming chapter.. Waiting :) :D

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Nice update
Family figured it out abt ayaan & humeira already & they have no problem with that. Rashid told asad he was ok with humeira as well as zoya. He was shocked & said them not to discuss that topic again. Asad got a call from prasad & he left everything in hurry. He saved zoya & their convo was wonderful. Everyone figured it out who was with asad except ayaan. Asad points abt case was strong. His analysis & zoya instinct which he believed was good. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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marcoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Missing the confused zoya

And adorable asad

Update soon😳

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Amazing n fabulous...
Luv it...
beautifully written...
asad is so cute...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Amna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Update 😊

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thefangirllife

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Res Chapter 8 and 9, wow, so many updates! :D

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Chapter 8:

LMAO, he gets hard as soon as he sees her. Woot woot, I can't wait till their relationship progresses and they have amazing sex. I am so besharam omg.

Awww, Nikhat is a cutieee! J

Omg, Anjali, the way you write Asad's POV is making me fall for him, he is so sweet and so in love with her. I am going to cryyy, ughhh. But then he's also sexually attracted to her, and I love how you work that into the story. Most stories focus on either the emotional or sexual aspect but having the two makes it so much more real. Like "yes, I love you and want to cherish you. But I also wanna push you up against the wall and f**k you." PERFECTO.

LMAO. Dilshad + Najma + Nikhat interoggating and fangirling over Asad + Zoya = amazing! Hahahah, I loveee this!

Chapter 9:

Oooh, I like that Asad + Rashid have a good relationship in this, they seem close and it makes me happy. The Ahmed Khan family is so amazing, I love them. Seriously.

AHHH! Asad panicking over Zoya was the best, he seems so desperate to find her and make sure she's face. AND THAT OUTBURST. My poor bby is so in love with the oblivious girl.

LMFAO, Ayaan is so stupid, I love it.

OOOH, this case is so interesting. Loved how you wrote out that part using facts and how Zoya worked herself into the list, ahahaha.

Ahhh, Ayaan + Asad at the farmhouse. THE SEXY CHAPTER IS NEXT.

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astonm

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amna

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Anjali

This update was amazing

loved it

cant wait for the story to move forward

i miss Zoya's sub conscience

but Asad's is equally good

update soon

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Awesome update. .:)
I love asad's pov. !!
He's so in love with zoya..!!
Lovd the whole chapter..!!
Excited for what will happen next..!!
Update soon. .:)

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