Asya TS-kaise connection hai mrKhan- imperfectly perfect part5@14-21/9

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@BelleAme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Hunger...

Oooh...17 the century Asad intimating the first kiss 😆

I loved this line...afterall a man is a man..

N lioness kicks in and completes their first kiss

I liked the part when he starts regretting n then she says no...n everything after tat which follows...n tat cute msg was chooo cute 😊

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Part 4

I think the best part was the starting paragraph...

Not just Asad's acceptance but his salute to her bravery...it was very well explained...

And the rest of the part was super hot 😳

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Part 5 was just perfect...,.

Zoya saying no n then agreein after five mins...a little sugar in the coffee...n the best part was Zoya in Asad's bed already asleep(like a wife of-after one year if marriage 😆 )

Just perfect...I had really wished for Zoya n Asad to somehow happen this way..,it was soo nice reading it 😊

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

👏Kalyani,

I am so so sorry My darling!

I am terribly late. I often wonder how all you writers update so easily and quickly.

I am seriously struggling to write mine.

Oh well I am late but I am here.

That update was some Heat overload.

Fanning myself. Phew! I need to get a room Hun.

Excitement and thrill put together. I loved how you kept shifting POVs back and forth. It could get confusing for some readers but this was simply engaging, I really wanted to know both Asad and Zoya's thoughts together.

And bloody hell all those Blossoms😛 had we blossoming like never before.

You call me your guru eh?😳 But really darling the credit is all yours. You wrote a few before too.

So you are in the league, In your comfortable zone now. I am sure you had heaps of fun writing it...

Chapter 4- Thank god Najma left. Oh Zoya just got bold and Asad just proved to her, Tameez is left outside the bedroom😆.

Loved it My dear. Enjoyed it too. Yes I read the next chapter too. Like wine the more you write the more delicious your writings become...

👏👏👏

Love Juliet!

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@aarzoo50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

beautiful story kalyani ...
read in one go...
loved it... specially the first part...
keep writing..
sorry fr not being able to comment
earlier...

thnx fr pming me fr all parts inspite of my nt beibg able to get back to u...

Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago