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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: ashiii333

thank god...
u r here...

jaldi res karo mujhe jana hai😆😳

I was waiting thought u'll updt early😳

btw Hum aapke hain kyun movie aa rahi hai meri fvrt hai 😉😆

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Heena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: jas91
main bhi aaa gya😃
hello moma Ashi😛

don ki tarah tereko pakadna mushkil hogaya hai

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Ashii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Adhoori Mohabbat

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Part 16 A:

Asad was feeling nervous and scarred at the same time... he was unsure of the results but he can only hope for the best... he was waiting for his PI in his office... each second was making him more desperate... as soon the PI enter in his cabin he jumped on him by asking several questions... he knew that he was acting stupid but he have to after all its related to his Zoya only...

PI: Sir relax... app aram se bethieye main sab btata hoon...

Asad: just tell me where is she... is she fine??? Kahan thi wo etny saalo tak... he asked with teary eyes...

PI: Sir... as I told you earlier, your wife was in Mumbai... she wanted to go to US but...

Asad: yeh sab mjhy pata hai... tum btao wo is waqt kahan hai... mjhy us se milna hai...

PI: Sir... wo apki wife jis taxi se ja rahi thi uska... uska accident ho gya tha or...

Asad's mind went numb on hearing about accident... tears made their way...

PI: Sir plzzz... app khud ko sambhalieye...

Asad: accident??? Now where is she??? She is fine right???

PI: wo theek nahi hain Sir...

Asad: what do you mean??? Kahan hai Zoya??? I know yeh sab tum Zoya k kehny par keh rahy ho na... us ne tumhy kaha hoga k mjhy jhoot bolny ko... wo abhi bhi mjhy se naraz hai na... I know I m too bad but plzzz for God sake tell me she is fine... she is safe... right???

PI felt really bad for him but he have to tell the truth...

PI: she is safe sir... nobody can harm her anymore...

Asad: huh??? His mind was not working at that moment...

PI: sir she is not angry with you... in fact wo kisi se bhi naraz nahi ho sakti...

Asad: tum yeh sab kya keh rahy ho... you are scarring me... stop playing with my emotions and tell me where she is???

PI: she is no more...

Asad stood rooted on his spot... "She is no more"... these words were ringing in his ears... no no that's not possible... he is lying... Zoya can't leave him... she can't die...

PI: sir uss accident main apki wife ki death ho gayi thi... issi liye wo app k pass wapis nahi aa saki...

Asad was hearing him out with tearful eyes and when he again stated about her death, he made his way towards the door...

PI: sir app kahan ja rahy hain... let me inform your family sir wait... but Asad rushed out from the office and drove in his SUV...

Asad was driving like a mad man... he was crying on his fate... Allah had always punished him like that... first his dad left him... then his little brother... then his ammi... and now Zoya too left him that too just because of his damn ego... he cursed himself and drove away from the city...

Kab Se Usko Dhondta Hoon
Bhegi Palko Se Yahan
Ab Jane Woh Kahan Hai
Tha To Mera Ashiyan

Kab Se Usko Dhondta Hoon
Bhegi Palko Se Yahan
Ab Jane Woh Kahan Hai
Tha To Mera Ashiyan

Rabba Mere Mujhko Bata
Haaye De Mujhe Kyon Yeh Saza
Ab Sare Bandhan Chod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rishta Jod Ke Jau Kahan

Ayesha was feeling restless... she was sure that something bad is going to happen... she was crying without any reason and prayed to Allah for Asad's safety as he was out... she didn't knew that why she prayed for him but her heart was aching for him... she just wanted him to be safe nothing else... she was unsure of her feeling but she knew that he was in pain...

Ek Chhota Saa Jahan
Chand Khushiyon Se Bhara
Usko Mujhse Cheen Kar Hai
Mil Gaya Tujhko Bhi Kya

Ek Chhota Saa Jahan
Chand Khushiyon Se Bhara
Usko Mujhse Cheen Kar Hai
Mil Gaya Tujhko Bhi Kya

Abb Hai Fakat Sirf Jaan
Kar Dun Mein Woh Bhi Aata

Ab Sare Bandhan Chod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rishta Jod Ke Jau Kahan
Ab Sare Bandhan Chod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rishta Jod Ke Jau Kahan

Asad remembered his lovely moments with Zoya... he smiled with teary eyes... his thoughts drifted back to their last meeting when he made her to sign those divorce papers... now he just wanted to finish his life... without Zoya he can't imagine his life... he spent these years with the hope of her safety but now when everything is ruined that too with his own hands he can't live... he has to die... he close his eyes an increased the speed of the car so that death can took over him easily... he was moving towards the far end of the road with closed eyes when Aman's face flashed in front of his eyes... he hit the breaks of the car... he just wanted to finish his life but Aman was stopping him... he don't know why he took a u-turn an made his way towards his home... only for Aman...

Scroll down for next part... but after Jas's post 😉

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

mera bhi res😆

unres

yeh kaisa PI tha adhi news leke aa gya agar Asad last moment pe decision nahi badlta toh😡

Ayesha was feeling restless dil se dil ka connection😉

Asad said Dillu ki badua lag gyi usse my poor baby Rona aaya usse dekhke😭

Aman ne yeh wish mangi i thought direct mrg ke bare main bolega😆

Aman kya keh raha tha i know he has heart problem but ilaaz chal raha hai phir marne ki baat😕 kyun bol raha tha sirf Asad ko mnane ke liye😉

Ayesha got flashback i want her 2 remember 1st😊

Ayesha Aman KV main rehte hain😲 ab ayega maja Asya wahin hain jahan pyaar shuru hua😉

Asad ko pehle pata chale ga toh maja nahi ayega😆

I think Ayesha ko yaad aana chahiye phir woh judge kare cuz she saw Asad's pain 4 Zoya & his breakdown also after knowing Zoya died but Asad ko pehle pata chla toh chances r she won't believe him or if she will she will get angry & won't accept him. So my vote goes 4 Ayesha knowing 1st but i know its not gonna happen😆

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Ashii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Part 16 B:

It was past 9 when he entered his house with blood shot eyes... his sleeves were up... his hair were totally messed up... all were having dinner but after seeing him in the state they stopped... Ayan was the first one to rush towards him...

Ayan: bhai what happened???

Asad: -------

Ayan: bhai you are scarring me... app PI se milny gaye thy na...

Asad didn't bother to answer him and came to Dilshad was worried for his son... he just kneeled down before her... she knew that something bad is happening...

Asad: sahi kaha tha app ne...

Dilshad: mene kya sahi kaha tha???

Asad: yehi k Zoya ko mjhy maaf nahi karna chahieye...

Dilshad: tum... tum Zoya se mil kar aa rahy ho... kesi hai wo... kahan hai wo... she said reaching to his level...

Asad: app us se nahi mil sakti...

Haider: Asad wo tum se naraz hai hum se nahi... mjhy btao wo kahan hai...

Dilshad: haan Asad kahan hai wo... she said cupping his face...

Asad: ammi app ne acha nahi kiya...

Dilshad: Asad tum kyun purani bato ki vaja se...

Asad: app ne apny bety ko hi bud dua dy di... he said looking at her with teary eyes...

Dilshad: Asad sab thek hai na???

Asad: sab khatam ho gaya ammi... sab khatam ho gaya...

Haider: Asad main janta hoon wo tum se naraz hai but plzzz tell me where is she??? I promise main ussy mana kar laon ga... she will be here with you I promise Asad...

Asad: nahi Haider... wo nahi aa sakti... ammi ne sab khatam kar dia...

Dilshad: Asad tum hosh main ho kya bol rahy ho??? Mene Zoya ko mana nahi kiya??? Yeh sab tumhari galtiyo ki saza hai... achaa tum btao Zoya kahan hai... main ussy wapis ly kar aongi...

Asad: app ne kaha tha k mjhy maafi nahi milni chahieye...

Dilshad: haan par mene gussy main kaha tha... main Zoya se bat karongi tum mjhy us k pas ly chalo...

Asad: app ne gussy main mjhy hi bud dua dy di ammi...

Dilshad: Asad mjhy pata hai mene boht galat kiya hai tumhary sath par...

Asad: ammi wo mjhy kabhi maaf nahi kary gi... kabhi bhi nahi...

Dilshad: aisa nahi kehty beta... mjhy pata hai main boht buri maa hoon par main Zoya se bat karongi wo wapis aa jaye gi or...

Asad: wo kabhi wapis nahi ayegi... he screamed...

Ayesha and Aman were also there... when he screamed Aman got scarred... Ayesha took him his arms and said sweet nothings to calm him down...

Asad: she... she left me ammi... she left me forever... he cried in front of his mother...

Dilshad and other family members got the shock of their life... all were crying on his lose... Ayan rushed to his brother...

Ayan: bhai yeh sach nahi hai Mona...

Asad: she is no more Ayan... she left me... she left me... he hugged his brother but he was chanting "she left me" again and again...

Waqt Ke Kitne Nishaan Hai
Zarei Zarei Mein Yahan
Doston Ke Saath Ke Pal
Kuch Hasen Kuch Gumjyda

Waqt Ke Kitne Nishaan Hai
Zarei Zarei Mein Yahan
Doston Ke Saath Ke Pal
Kuch Hasen Kuch Gumjyda

Sab Hua Abb To Fanna
Bas Raha Baki Dhuan

Ab Sare Bandhan Chod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rishta Jod Ke Jau Kahan
Ab Sare Bandhan Chod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rishta Jod Ke Jau Kahan

Tears were rolling down from Ayesha's eyes... she was crying with him... Dilshad was cursing herself for speaking ill about her own son... she had ruined his life by her silly words... she was drifted back to reality by Asad only...

Asad: I don't want to live... I wanna die... I wanna die Ayan... I was living with the hope that she will be back to me but now everything is finished... there is no reason left Ayan...

Dilshad was hearing his non-sense... he was talking about death and death only... she had enough of his blabbering and slapped him... all were shocked by her move but being a mother she can't let him allow to take his own life...

Dilshad: boht bol liya tummy... kya keh rahy ho tum... I want to die... aj Zoya nahi hai to sab khatam ho gaya haan... par tumny kabhi hum sab k barey main socha nahi... maa hoon main tumhari main chahti thi k Zoya tum aasani se maaf na kary par mene kabhi tum dono k liye yeh nahi chaha tha Asad... main apny bety k haq main etna bura nahi soch sakti... main manti hoon mene boht bar tumhy hurt kiya par kabhi tumhy is haal main nahi dekh sakti... I m sorry beta.. I m sorry...

Asad: app kyun sorry bol rahi hain ab Zoya kabhi nahi ayegi... there is nothing left for me ammi... main jar aha hoon ammi... main ja raha hoon Zoya k pass... he stood up with determination and turned to go but he felt a tug on his hand... he turned around and found Aman...

Aman: app ne kaha tha app meri wish puri karo gey...

Asad: Aman I can't???

Ayesha: Aman no bacha... its not the right time...

Aman: Mr. Khan app ne kaha tha app apni wife k bad sab se zaida mjhy pyar karty ho...

Asad: haan but... he was avoiding eye contact due to his red eyes... he didn't want to scare him more...

Aman: Mr. Khan I don't have much time... can you be there for me???

Asad: I didn't get your point???

Aman: I m a heart patient na... may be next birthday tak...

Ayesha: Aman... aisa nahi kehty beta... she was going to stop him but Ayan stops her as Asad had stopped crying and paying attention at Aman's words...

Asad kneeled before him...

Asad: Aman app aisy kyun bol rahy ho... you will live a long haapy life...

Aman: app k sath??? He asked...

Asad: I can't Aman...

Aman: plzzz Mr. Khan just for me... I really like you...

Asad: Aman main iss jaga se dor jana chahta hoon or...

Aman: app hamary ghar aa jao na... wo bhi to apka ghar hai na...

Asad: no Aman... us ghar se Zoya ki boht si yaadein judi hain...

Aman: haan to acha hai na... hum dono vaha rahengy... app kehty ho I m like your wife... apko acha lagy ga plzzz Mr. Khan...

Asad: okay but...

Aman: thank you Mr. Khan... he kissed his stained cheek...

Asad: but...

Aman: no but... app hamary sath ho rahy ho bas...

Asad: okay Mr. Khan...

Asad asked Najma too pack his bag as he is shifting in KV... Asad was avoind his family but before leaving he came to Dilshad...

Asad: ammi I m sorry... but Zoya k bagair mere jeena ka koi maqsad nahi hai but Aman ko main mana nahi kar sakta... shayad Allah ko yehi manzoor hai k main Zoya k bagair jeena seekh loon... or mjhy Allah ki raza "Qubool Hai..."...

Ayesha was hearing him when he said "Qubool Hai..." she got a flashback of a couple who said "Qubool Hai..." to each other with teary smiles... and she opened her eyes bcox the male's voice was same like Asad's voice... she was unable to understand what was happening to her and she felt dizzy... she was going to fall but Ayan catches her on time... she assured them she is fine... she took Aman in her arms and made her way out of the house... Asad along with Najma bid goodbye to Khan Family and left...

Precap: Arman forcing Ayesha for marriage with Asad...

Ayesha left KV with Aman...

Asad read the letter written by Ayesha's late father...

Sooo that's it...

kesa laga????

ignore my mistakes plzzz...

leave ur feedback and likes...

next update till 50+ likes an 30+ replies...

with love Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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Heena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

res...
unres...
ashii u r so bad yar...
although having the insight of wts coming up here, still vn u put it in the words it makes me emotional n i feel lyk crying... 😭 😭
ye PI to good fr nothing nikla... aadha sach dhoondh k laya... mera bas chale to iska license cancel kardu... he made bechara asad much more bechara...
thanx fr aman's presence warna locha hojata...
ayesha is getting flashbacks ... hope she remembers all soon...
precap to is as interesting as ever...
plz continue soon yara

Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago