asya sanseh ff dil ke dhaage Updated chapter 2 with banner(12-4-15) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update and thanks for pm...
looking forward for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaarasateddy

HELLO PEOPLE...

AS I HAVE UPDATED THE CHARACTER SKETCH FOR MY STORY...

HERE IS THE PLOT...

ASYA , NAJMA AND SEHER SURVIVE THE FIRE AND TANVEER GETS CAUGHT IN THE FIRE AND IS DEAD.

BOTH RAZIA AND GAFFUR ARE DEAD.

EVERYONE THINK THAT NAJMA , HAYA AND DILSHAAD ARE DEAD .

NIKHAT ,NUZZHAT ALONG WITH AYAAN ARE HAPPILY MARRIED AND HAVE CHILDREN.

SEHER AND REHAAN LOVE EACH OTHER AND ARE GOING TO GET ENGAGED .

DILSHAAD ,SANAM AND HAYA SHIFT TO PUNJAB AFTER THE INCIDENT AS DILSHAAD THINKS HER CHILDREN ALONG WITH SEHER DIED IN THE FIRE.

AFTER TWENTY YEARS SANAMS DHABA CATCHES FIRE AND BURNS SO AS SHE DOESN'T FAVE A JOB SHE SEES AN ADVERTISEMENT IN NEWSPAPER THAT A COOK IS NEEDED SO SHE GOES TO BHOPAL WITHOUT TELLING DILSHAAD AS SHE WILL NOT ALLOW HER.

IN BHOPAL SHE WENT TO THE PLACE WHERE SHE HAD TO COOK AND AS SHE ENTERS SHE GETS THE BIGGEST SHOCK OF HER LIFE.


@bold black Shouldn't it be Sanam, Haya n Dilshad instead of Najma, Haya n Dilshad?

Nice plot

So Sanam goes to maybe a hotel owned by Asad

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice plot
Sanam reached her parents home as a cook
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting plot
So did sanam come to work for her parents

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting plot. Hope sanam's shock is about her family. Dont want any other hero for sanam. I hope u understand what i want to say. Update part 1 soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Chapter 1

LOCATION : BHOPAL

A LADY OF 40 YEARS COMES DOWN...

ARRE AHIL ACHHA HUA BETA TUM AA GAYE DEKHO TO KITNI SAARI TAIYAARI BAAKI HAI ,AUR HUMARI SEHER MADAM KIDHAR HAI.. asks the lady.

VOH MUMANI MUJHE NAHI PATA SEHER KIDHAR HAI ...PAR ITNA ZARUR PATA HAI KI MAINE ABHI TAK REHAAN KO BHI NAHI DEKHA...PAKKA DONO SAATH HONGE...says ahil.

UFFO ,YEH DONO BHI NA ...JAB DEKHO ROMANCE KARTE HAI... MAI INKA KYAA KARU...says the lady going to kitchen.

ZOYA...ZOYA KAHA HAI AAP...shouts asad.

HAA AA RAH I HUN MR.KHAN ...says zoya

YES THAT LADY IS NONE OTHER THAN ZOYA.

BOLIYE MR KHAN KYA KAAM HAI...asks zoya .

ZOYA AAPKO SHAYAD YAAD NAHI BUT ROJ TIE AAP HI MUJHE PEHNATI HAI...says asad.

ALLAH MIYA WHAT'S WRONG WITH U ...ITNI SI BAAT KE LIYE AAPNE MUJHE BULAAYA...asks zoya gritting her teeth.

Nahi zoya maine sirf isiliye aapko nahi bulaaya...chaliye mere saath...saying so asad takes her towards the portrait

PATA HAI ZOYA AAJ MUJHE SANAM KI BOHAT ZYAADA YAAD AA RAHI HAI...KAASH AAJ VO ZINDA HOTI TO MAIN DONO BEHNO KI SHAADI EK SAATH KARATA...while saying this tears drop from asad's eye.

HAAN MR.KHAN SAHI KAHA AAPNE ...KITNA ACCHA HOTA NAA AGAR DONO EK SAATH HOTE...before she could say anything najma enters the room.

ZOYA CHALIYE NEECHE BOHAT SAARE KAAM HAI...saying so najma drags her down.

ZOYA TALKS TO SOME ONE IN THE PHONE...

KYAA KEH RAHE HAI AAP ,AISE SUDDENLY AAP KAISE KEH SAKTE HAI KI AAPKA COOK NAHI AA SAKTA ...AAPKO PATA HAI NA KI AAJ HUMAARE GHAR MEIN ENGAGEMENT FUNCTION HAI...TOH PHIR AAP KAISE AISA KAR SAKTE HAI...MUJHE NAHI PATA AAP KUCH BHI KIJIYE...YELLS ZOYA ANGRILY ON THE PHONE .

SCENE SHIFTS TO PUNJAB:


SANAM GETS A CALL ...HELLO says sanam.

BUT THE NEWS SHE GETS MAKES HER HAPPY.

YA ALLAH TERA LAAKH LAAKH SHUKAR HAI HAI KI MUJHE YE JOB MIL GAYI PAR MUJHE ABHI BHOPAL KE LIYE NIKALNA PADEGA.

FLASHBACK OF THE PHONE CALL:

HELLO says sanam.

HELLO MADAM MAI XYZ CATERERS SE BOL RAHI HUN,AAPNE YAHA AS A COOK KE LIYE APPLY KIYA HAI NA ...says the person.

JEE HAAN , BOLIYE...says sanam getting excited.

JEE VOH AGAR AAPAAJ HI BHOPAL SHAAM 5 BAJE SE PEHLE AA SAKTE HAI TO HUM AAPKO YEH JOB DE SAKTE HAI... VOH HUMARE EK COOK NE AAJ SUBAH HI RESIGN KAR DIYA...says the person.

JI HAAN MERA ZARUR AANA CHAHUNGI PAR AAJ HI,MERA MATLAB ITNI JALDI MAI SAB KAISE KARUNGI...asks sanam.

USKI AAP CHINTA MAT KIJIYE , AAP BAS AAJ KE LIYE AA JAIYE FHIR AGAR AAP CHAHE TOH EK BAAR PHIR SE AAP APNE GHAR KUCH DINO KE LIYE JAA SAKTI HAI...says the person.

KYAA...SACH ,THIK HAI MAI ABHI NIKALTI HUN...PAR MERI SALARY KITNI HOGI...asks sanam.

AAPKI MONTHLY SALARY 30,000 HOGI ...BOLIYE AAP AYENGI..VARNA MAI KISI AUR KO BULAAUNGI...says the person.

NAHI NAHI AAP KISI AUR KO MAT BULAAIYE MAIN AAJAUNGI...says sanam cutting the call.

END OF FLASHBACK.

SO GUYZ THAT'S IT FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER.

LEAVE YOUR VIEWS AND COMMENTS.

AND GUYZ PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON .

AND I WANT ALL OF U TO SUGGEST A TITLE FOR MY STORY.

THANK U IN ADVANCE.😛

Edited by pyaarasateddy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...
so sanam is going to enter her home as a cook sounds good...
waiting for reunion and their expressions...
thnks for pm and plzz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nice update
Sanam got a job in asya house
Waiting for family reunion
Asad & zoya scene was good & emotional
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice part
waiting for the family reunion
continue soon

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