Asya SS 'Be With Me' II epilogue pg 37 [19/09] - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
unress

Well it was a perfect ending
I love it ❤️ 😉
Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Heyyy...first of all we should be thanking you more because you write such interesting and lovely stories that makes us smile & emotional at a time and making us a part of your work...coming to the epilogue...well a very good and well written update , you covered all the important characters in this FF...liked how yaseen and aliza were teasing ASYA...finally they got married after a long hardship...still that scene were zoya was worried about bad omen was funny you know and it kind of happend like when rashid entered...but as Asad said nothing can go wrong now as they have passed all the hurdles for the lifetime...and now they just have to love and cherish their future which also contain their princess now...lovely epilogue, and TERI ORE is one of my the most favourite songs, got reminded me of my schooldays.lovely and apt choice .. ..continue soon with you other works...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Arooo


🤗

Mwah


Beautiful ending little Api, it was perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi...again well first of all i have to thank you for P.M'ing me and making me your buddy on this forum...you know sincerely when any story goes through a twists it always scares me but then as you said we all do what our heart says...we still read it to know when will it be becoming normal...but iam also glad..about your reply...and.From what name i should call you...? continue soon with your other work...and P.M' me.plz.. :-P
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee

Ishq main yehi karna baki tha.. Acha khasa Business Tycon Spider man ban gaya 😆

Asad Zoya se chup ke se milne aaya 😉

But sab ko pata tha vo aaya 🤣

Issliye uss ka popat hogaya 🤣

Vo har din wahan aaya

Awsum answer deke dono ka muh ban karvaya 😆

Qubool Hai bhi bol diya

Dance bhi ho gaya

Rashid ko bhi karara jawab mil gaya 😈

Ending ke bare main kya kahna

Aise hi update dete rehna meri behna 🤗

Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome + Cute + Intresting Epilogue...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Amazing...👍🏼

Going To Miss This Story...😔

Update Your Other Stories Soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written
Loved this happy ending...

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb and perfect ending loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for your other work
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story culminated with a superb ending! Loved it so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey aroo thannx for pm dear...
i really really enjoyed ur story...
and it is such a beautiful ending loved it <3
hope u start a new story sooonish...

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