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Wow... Nice two family reunion pending..
nice update..
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Shocking news... poor asya... all in sad moment
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Such a emotional speech from sanam...

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poor sanam...

asya sad...

seher life changing...

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Originally posted by: beautyl

i read few updates of ur story i am likeing it well written


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Salam...

I know i m too late...
but i m here to thank all of you for your wonderful response... i really loved ur feedback... thank you sooo much for encouraging me... so i m back with an update... hope u like it... but i will update next part till next week as studies are demanding more time so hope u understand... and i know u r wnderful readers so plzzz be with me thanks again...
Ashii...
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Chapter 17 A:

Next Morning, Sanam wake up to find Aahil besides her and who was sleeping in a sitting position... she felt bad for her hubby but also she felt happy bcox he had always proved that he will be next to her through thick and thin... Aahil stirrd in his sleep and wake up to find his beautifull wife atarring at him...
Aahil: how are you feeling now??? He asked creasing her hair...
Sanam: I m fine... kal kuch hua tha kya??? I was in hall but now I m in night dress and all...
Aahil: you fainted... he stated with worry visible in his eyes...
Sanam: oh I m fine now... she assured him by kissing his cheek...
Aahil: but achanak aisy behosh hona...
Sanam remembered her reason of fainting but she lied to Aahil for the peace of the home...
Aahil: I m going to get your breakfast here... or haan mjhy aj out of station jana hai...
Sanam: but why??? She said getting up from bed but he made her sit forcibly...
Aahil: I will be back in 2 days... or bed se uthney ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
Sanam: but??? He placed a finger on her lips and shushed her...
Aahil: wait here... I m coming... saying so left...
In the hall, ladies were serving breakfast and Mini India was having breakfast except Asad as he was busy with some work... he reached there and poured a glass of juice for himself and took a sip...
Seher: kesi hai apki jaan...
Aahil: she is fine...
Haya: Dil Ke Armaan Aansoon Mein Beh Gayee...
Aahil: yeh kya tha???
Seher: daju wok al Sanam behosh hui to...
Haya: haan mjhy laga k...
Aahil: kamal hai meri biwi faint ho gayi or tum dono ko apni pari hai...
Seher: haan to humy laga achy kaam se faint hui hogi...
Aahil: matlab???
Haya: jiju mjhy laga k shayd... she hesitates...
Dilshad: Haya Seher... stop teasing him...
Aahil: badi ammi apko bhi pata hi k yeh dono kya baat kar rahi hain...
Zoya: haan ammi mjhy bhi btaiye yeh sab kya chal raha hai...
Seher: mom humy laga k Jiya aa rahi hai...
Zoya: haan to Jiya k aany se Sanam ka kya connection???
Haya: mami wo Jiya na...
Aahil: oh now I got it... Jiya abhi se no way... meri biwi mjhy jaan se maar dy gi...
Sanam being Sanam freshened up and came downstairs and heard her hubby's views about her...
Sanam: Aahil...
Zoya: Sanam... how are you feeling now... all good...
Sanam: ji ammi main theek hoon... or yeh Jiya ka topic band karo tum log...
Zoya: don't tell me k tum phir jealous ho rahi ho... wesy ab to mjhy bhi Jiya se milna hai... kesi hai wo...
Dilshad: Zoya tum abhi Jiya se nahi mil sakti...
Zoya: kyun ammi... Aahil I wanna meet her... call her at home...
Aahil: ammi wo abhi... its not possible...
Haya: haan mami abhi apko 2 3 saal wait karna hoga...
Zoya: kyun wo kya Mars se aa rahi hai???
Seher: mom Mars se to nahi but abhi usko permission nahi hai... she winked at Aahil... and Sanam smacked her head...
Sanam: shut up...
Seher: daju kahi permission to nahi mil gayi...
Aahil: kahan yaar???
Sanam: badi ammi...
Dilshad: Aahil...
Zoya: ammi app Aahil ko kyun dant rahi hain... Aahil tum mjhy uska pura naam or no. do main khud bula longi...
Seher: paka na mom... app usy bulao gi...
Zoya: haan na... Aahil I m waiting...
Aahil: Jiya Aahil Raza Ibrahim...
Zoya: huh???
Seher: mom daju apko naam bta rahy hain...
Zoya: par yeh to...
Dilshad: Aahil ki future daughter ka name hai... she smiled...
Zoya: eska matlab tum dono iss liye Sanam k faint hony pe etna khush thy... she said looking at Seher and Haya and they nodded in agreement...
Zoya: Allah Miya... mjhy pehly kyun nahi btaya tum dono ne... eska matlab Sanam may be...
Sanam: ammi plzzz aisa kuch nahi hai...
Aahil: haan ammi abhi to 2 3 saal wait karna hoga...
Haya: haan mami yeh apki beti hai na hamara or jiju ka khayal nahi karti...
Seher: mom apko pata hai Sunny k time pe jiju ne sab plan kar lia tha par last moment pe Sanam ne cheat kar dia...
Sanam: is main meri galti nahi thi...
Aahil: arry aisa kis ne kaha... you gifted me with such a beautiful gift that too with surprise... he said pecking her lips...
Seher: daju mom is here... go to your room...
Aahil: hmm very funny... but yaha or koi nahi hai na so relax... he said placing a hand on Sanam's waist...
Meanwhile, Asad finished his work and came downstairs...
Asad: Good Morning... he sat and started reading newspaper...
Hearing Asad's voice Aahil choked on his juice and leave Sanam...
Aahil: Good Morning abbu... he said composing himself...
Seher: daju kya hua???
Haya: haan jiju abhi to app Sanam ke sath... she teasd...
Zoya and Dilshad smiled at seeing Aahil scarred of Asad... Aahil's cell rang and he excused himself...
Aahil: Hello...
Lady: kesy ho beta???
Aahil: apki himmat kesy hui mjhy call karny ki...
Lady: apny bety se bat karny k liye sirf pyaar matter karta hai beta...
Aahil: don't you dare call me again... he was going to hang up but he stopped...
Lady: Sanam ab kesi hai raat wo bat karty karty pata nahi kahan chali gayi... kahi kuch hua to nahi ussy...
Aahil: app ne Sanam ko phone kab kiya???
Lady: kyun tumhy tumhari biwi ne nahi btaya kya???
Aahil: listen I don't have extra time so plzzz save it for another time...
Lady: haan wesy bhi ab tumhy apny in laws ko pamper karna hoga na jao beta jao... apna khayal rakhna... saying so she cut the call...
Aahil was mad at Sanam for not telling him the reason of her fainting... he came back to dinning area...
Aahil: Sanam kal koi phone call aya tha kya??? Party k bad???
Sanam: nahi kyun??? She lied...
Aahil: okay but tum faint kesy ho gai...
Sanam: Aahil btaya to tha mjhy bas chakar aa gya tha kaam ki vaja se... she said avoiding his gaze...
Aahil: look at me and answer damn it... He yelled at her...
Seher: daju relax...
Aahil: Seher stay out of this...
Seher: okay...
Sanam: Aahil yeh kya tareeqa hai... ammi abbu bhi yahi hain...
Aahil: I don't care... he said holding her upper arms...
AsYa were watching all this but remained quite as per Dilshad's instructions...
Aahil: so jhoot bolna kab se start kr dia...
Sanam: kyun app jhoot nahi bolty kya???
Aahil: who was on the call last night Sanam and I m asking for the last time...
Sanam: kisi ka phone nahi tha...
Aahil: okay then no problem... I will handle the caller myself... saying so he left her and walked from there...
Sanam: Aahil stop... app kuch nahi karengy...
Aahil: kyun tumhy kisi ka phone thori aya tha... leave it... ami abbu I m sorry... saying so he left the house...


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Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Chapter 17 B:

Sanam sat on the chair near Asad...
Asad: Sanam... kiska phone tha...
Sanam: abbu wo...
Seher: Sanam jaha subha se jhoot bol rahi ho vaha 1 or jhoot sahi...
Zoya: tum 3no etny secretive kyun ho...
Dilshad: Sanam yeh sab kya hai...
Sanam: badi ammi apko pata hai phir bhi...
Seher: Sanam listen to me carefully... tuney daju ko qasam di hai mjhy nahi... or agar uss ne kuch kiya to main chup nahi bethon gi...
Asad: Seher yeh sab kya chal raha hai... koi btaye ga k yeh sab kya ho raha hai...
Seher: dad I don't know Sanam apko bta rahi hai ya nahi but mjhy daju ne mana kiya hai so I can't... she went towards Sanam and placed a hand on her head...
Sanam: yeh kya kar rahi ho...
Seher: jo tummy daju k sath kiya tha... well my dear twin if something happened then I promise I will kill her... and you know nobody can stops me... saying so she left from there...
Sanam held her head in her hands and Dilshad came to her...
Dilshad: relax beta...
Sanam: badi ammi apko pata hai na Aahil ko control karna mushkil hai or ab Seher...
Asad: ammi yeh sab kya hai koi btaye ga... he said with frustration...
Sanam: abbu wo tanveer...
Hearing about tanveer his eyes went wide... he had never imagined in his wild dreams that the same lady who had destroyed his life years ago can affect his daughters...
Asad: tanveer ko tum kesy janti ho...
Sanam: abbu she is Aahil's step-mother...
Zoya: matlab wo abhi bhi hamary ghar k peachy pari hui hai... Mr. Khan do something I can't bear her anymore...
Asad: Zoya calm down... Sanam mjhy sab kuch btao or Aahil abhi kya poch raha tha???
Sanam: kal mjhy tanveer ki call ayi thi or mene yeh bat kisi ko nahi btai par shayd Aail ko pata chal gya hai...
Dilshad: Sanam tumhy usy btana chahieye tha...
Sanam: badi ammi main nahi chahti thi meri vaja se sabko tension ho or...
Rehan: to tummy socha k Aahil bhai ko na btaya jaye... he said coming towards her...
Sanam: Rehan I lied but for Aahil...
Rehan: tum janti ho na last time kya hua tha...
Sanam: issi liye to nahi bta rahi thi par...
Rehan: or ab Aahil bhai ko koi nahi rok sakta Sanam...
Sanam: Aahil kuch nahi karengy...
Rehan: par Seher...
Sanam: usko main sambhal longi...
Asad: Rehan tum aik kaam karo Aahil ko wapis bulao... we need to talk... or Seher ko main handle kar longa...
Dilshad: nahi Asad... tum en dono ka gussa nahi janty... Aahil to tanveer ko marny vala tha but yeh Sanam ne usy qasam dy kar rok dia... or Seher wo abhi abhi qasam khaa kar gayi hai...
Asad: ammi main aisy apny bacho ko nahi dekh sakta...
Sanam: abbu app aram se meri bat suno... kuch nahi hua hai... Aahil abhi gussy main hain wapis aa jayen gey or Seher wo to ghar pe hi hai na...
Asad: par Sanam wo aurat...
Rehan: wo kuch nahi kar sakti... agar us ne koi step lia to usy mjhy or Aahil bhai se ho kar yaha tak aana hoga...
Dilshad: Rehan tumhy kesy pata chal phone call k barey main...
Rehan: badi ammi wo mjhy 2 din se call kar rahi hai... meri shadi attend karny k liye or phie Sanam ko target kiya...
Sanam: to Aahil ko bhi unho ne btaya hoga...
Rehan: Sanam wo aurat izet k qabil nahi hai...
Sanam: I know but...
Rehan: ab uski side mat lena warna main bhi chala jaonga...
Sanam: tum 3no aik jesy ho... just go away Rehan...
Dilshad: ab Aahil aayega to tum usy sorry bolo gi...
Sanam: kyun mene koi galti nahi ki...
Zoya: ammi app Sanam ko kyun keh rahi hain... us ne sab k achy k liye bat chupai...
Asad: ammi Sanam or Aahil ki shadi kesy hui thi???
Dilshad: shadi... arranged marriage thi...
Asad: or app ne tanveer ki family se rishta kar dia bina kuch sochy samjhy... he argued...
Sanam: abbu... meri or Aahil ki shadi majboori main hui thi...
Asad: aisi kya majboori thi jo tanveer k ghar shadi kar li...
Sanam: badi ammi hospital main thi... mjhy operation k liye 20 lakh chahieye thy to tanveer ne contract marriage k liye kaha or main maan gai...
Asad: or phir??? He felt bad for his daughter who sacrificed her life for her badi ammi...
Sanam: phir contract marriage pyaar main badal gayi or Aahil ne hamary rishty ko ek or moqa dia or humny badi ammi or Seher k samny dobara shadi ki...
Asad: or tanveer???
Sanam: Aahil ne hamesha tanveer par aankh band kar k bharosa kiya par jab uss ne hamara rishta torna chaha to Aahil ne mera sath dia or us se sab rishty tor diye...
Asad: par wo uski maa hai???
Sanam: aik aisi maa jo sirf paiso k liye Aahil ko use kar rahi thi...
Dilshad: haan Asad yeh sach hai... Aahil ne sachai jan'ny k bad tanveer se koi rishta nahi rakha or wo to usy jaan se marna chahta tha par Sanam ne rok dia...
Rehan: uncle Aahil bhai Sanam k liye kuch bhi kar sakty hain app plzzz un k barey main galat mat samjhieye...
Dilshad: Aahil k iss ghar main boht se chahny valy hain... including me...
Sanam: haan abbu Aahil ki koi galti nahi hai...
Asad: mene kab kaha Aahil ki galti hai... but you have to tell him truth na... he said creasing her hair...
Sanam: ji abbu par mjhy laga k na btany main hi bhalai par app aram se nashta karo Aahil abhi aa jayen gy main un se bat kar longi...
Rehan: yeah wish her luck uncle... ARI ka gussa ufff...
Sanam: Aahil k chamchey... mera gussa bhi kum nahi hai after all I m Mrs. Ari... she winked at him...
Rehan: or wo moti???
Sanam: ammi gayi hain usy bulany...
Asad: aik sath etny logo ka gussa...
Dilshad: sab tum se hi seekha hai... dono ka gussa har time naak pe rehta hai...
Asad: haan par Aahil to mjh pe nahi gya...
Dilshad: uska gussa sab se unique hai...
Asad: wo kesy ammi???
Rehan: wo apko abhi pata chal jaye ga uncle... he said winking at Asad...
Precap: Aahil ka gussa... Engagement Party...


Sooo that's it...
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with love Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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