AsYa SS- BROKEN WINGS #2 - imp note on page 71(8/10) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update
Zoya tried everything to make asad feel better. Asad promised her to learn quickly as he doesn't want zoya to stopped living. So Ayaan or ghafoor came in. Hope there is no seperation now.
I want asya together plz.
Continue soon
Thanks
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update Kausar. Am loving the way you are developing the story. It's just too good.
Am happy that Zoya was able to make Asad realize that their physical intimacy is something that will not change. And after her explanation he too saw things from her viewpoint.


Loved the way Zoya cares for him and is looking after him.


I hope she doesn't have to go back. Please don't separate them again.
Edited by ChocoBerry - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kaussar😳
As always i enjoyed reading the update a lot⭐️
zoya has a meeting with asad's physiotherapist who assures her that there are 95% chances asad will be able to walk ..😃
firstly she helps him in gaining confidence to do simple tasks himself..Asad cuts vegetables n helps her in the kitchen😳
she decides to make him swim as it would be the best exercise for his muscles..
zoya wearing bikini during their honeymoon😳 she blushes at the memory😳
the romance☺️
when asad realizes that zoya is wearing a bikini ..they share an intimate moment with a passionate kiss☺️ but the next moment he pushes her away
asad has become scared of physical intimacy due to his disabilities
but she decides to bring asad out of his shell..n initiate intimacy😳
although asad is a bit hesitant but the duo finally make love☺️

"You still play with my body like you play the piano."

"I promise you Zoe... if you can never fly unless I am flying beside you, then I will do everything in my power to learn how to fly again because I cannot bear it if you remain for the rest of your life as a bird that cannot fly... so I promise you that I will try Zoe."
oh god there is a visitor at their place😲 it can either be ayaan or gaffur😲
n zoya still hasnt told asad abt ayaan there can be misunderstandings😒


Super HOTTT update☺️ ur description of their physical intimacy was not at all disgusting..i rather found it beautiful😳❤️ the way u've described their love for each other is beyond words!👏 Beautiful Story👏⭐️

update soon!!
love yah❤️

Maha

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was Just Awsome Update
I enjoy reading it&also love it!

P/s: I got PM&thank-u for it
PM me next time too
Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful chapter, love Asad's renewed confidence courtesy to his wife.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
hope they will never i mean even a lil bit win in their plan to make them seperate now
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another amazing update ,,
I love how the story is progressing !!
specially Zoya is undoubtedly brave and story !!
the way she is helping him out is awesome :D
Loved the swimming pool scene ,,
and the moments afterwards (:

Continuing from the last comment ,,
Thanks for your kind words it means a lot to me :D
the name of the story is 'Asad and Zoya in Italy' !!
I was kinda bad in titles back then LoL
Anyways ,, continue soon and no need for thanks (:

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update. .
Very intimate very intense.. well written. .
Loved it..

Thanks for updating

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Lovely update Kausar. Am loving the way you are developing the story. It's just too good.

Am happy that Zoya was able to make Asad realize that their physical intimacy is something that will not change. And after her explanation he too saw things from her viewpoint.


Loved the way Zoya cares for him and is looking after him.


I hope she doesn't have to go back. Please don't separate them again.

Thank you Dear... really happy to know that you are loving the way the story is developed.

for couples in such situation, many times physical intimacy becomes a real problem.. and here Asad and Zoe are not just any couple.. they were so much in love and they just got married when the accident happened and they got separated.. so for them the ability to express their love physically is very important for their relationship to sustain.

Zoya will not leave Asad... don't worry... but they cannot yet live together in peace because of what the antagonists does.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
i want to know few things...

is this sad ending...

how many chapters more...

coz... is sad story... i need time to read...

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