AsYa & SaHil OS: Mr. Dhurandar Bha-Bhatarwadekar (Part 2 - Pg 4)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Lovely update
Airport scene was all time favourite scene. The way asad shouted, was amazing.
Aahil told sanam that we have to find out abt her family & especially her parents.
Waiting for next part soon
Do pm me plz
Thanks

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Mel

@ms.ObseSSeD

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

😭 😭 these old memories...

It may be short but your forgiven because of this beautiful update!!!!

#AsYaforever ❤️

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Great story

First part - nice seeing mr bhatavdekar again. Guys do old now but still hasn't changed hehe funny guy

Second part - so cute that ahil was all interested in Sanam's parents . Sanam's feelings were so well described

Overall - liked both parts. Nice to see an old face again. Bhopal airport couple

Hmmm if they had Facebook back when zoya asad were around hmm wonder what year we're in with sanam ahil...hehe...only soap operas get away with strange gaps in time

Great story
Thanks

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imy321

@imy321

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

ooohhh that was great

u r gna continue rite

its sooo awww

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

AHH YOU DID A PART 2!!! YAYAYA!

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Okay aside from Aahil being such flipping cutie and cutely asking more and more about AsYa I loved how Sanam narrated AsYa's love story hayeee.

You know this would make a really good SS 😛

Edited by mochhug - 10 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

awesome update that was!!
i really loved it!!
penned beautifully!!
would love to read more from you!! :)

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Oh how sweet. I was just reading on a rival forum whose trps were usually high,some members said that when the other shows twists go stale then they will be top again.

But reading your os, QH twists can never go stale, so much potential, if only the cvs can pop into this forum regularly...