A SaHil SS: Kismat - PART 4 ON PG10 20/12 - Page 6

Awesome update! I love all of the detail and the description of each character's thoughts. You're an amazing writer!

Thanks for your plug. It drew me here. You have a great SS going. I usually just concentrate on the two I like, Aahil and Sanam, but you have done all the characters very entertainingly. I liked Lateef in particular.

My favorite parts about the writing were the vivid descriptions of Aahil's feelings. One was the heart dragging line, then the lump in Aahil's throat and his thoughts about him dying while Sanam is out with Rehand and the other is Aahil's way of sayin Sanam's name. These are little details that really put a new texture on the story. I also loved that you noticed and wrote about Aahil's lips, that was a good touch. Keep writing!

It's really nice.Thanx a lot for your hard work. Pls update and waiting for next...

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Great job!

Latiff is so funny. You nailed him.

Glad you didn't make sahil confess yet...they need few more fun scenes then they can focus of serious stuff like admitting they're in love

Excited to read more ... Thanks

Originally posted by: AnjumP

Awesome update! I love all of the detail and the description of each character's thoughts. You're an amazing writer!

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Thanks for your plug. It drew me here. You have a great SS going. I usually just concentrate on the two I like, Aahil and Sanam, but you have done all the characters very entertainingly. I liked Lateef in particular.

My favorite parts about the writing were the vivid descriptions of Aahil's feelings. One was the heart dragging line, then the lump in Aahil's throat and his thoughts about him dying while Sanam is out with Rehand and the other is Aahil's way of sayin Sanam's name. These are little details that really put a new texture on the story. I also loved that you noticed and wrote about Aahil's lips, that was a good touch. Keep writing!

Originally posted by: udenigamage

It's really nice.Thanx a lot for your hard work. Pls update and waiting for next...

Really liked this part! Especially the bit about Seher and also Aahil's lashes! :)

I am so sorry... Sweetheart, I thought I had replied. Then today I realised I have not commented after Part 1. But I read both... I loved them... Lovely update. Continue soon.