SaHil OS : Manmarziyan... - Page 2

Originally posted by: navk

surperb os

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Beautiful... hope it happens like this in the serial too. But I don't want Aahil punching or even attempting to punch Rehan...

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

You didn't mention her wiping the food off him :( would've been nice to hear ahil's side during that scene
Plus violent ahil seems out of character

But otherwise loved the story!!! Now if only story goes this way too :)

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha

Lovely

Originally posted by: -RohitMaxwell-

lovely OS dear

Originally posted by: zan101

Veru nice OS

Originally posted by: Tannakstar

This was amazing! The writing was great, Aahil was great, the confrontation was great - it was a splendid read my dear!

And OMG this is so weird, we both wrote a piece of fiction based on Sanam feeding Aahil, Aahil confronting Rehaan and then finding out that Sanam was absolutely clueless about Rehaan's feelings! HIGH FIVE DUDE!

We must be of one mind. Or better yet, we might be long lost twin sisters - do you wanna be Sanam or Seher LOOOL? 🤣

Fantastic writing - I loved Aahil's stubborness with Sanam, my god he's so hot.

Originally posted by: Komalgraphix

Just perfect
I want this to happen asap

Originally posted by: sahil333

Nice OS. But don't want Aahil to be physical against Rehan 😔.