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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

OMG! That was just fabulous..I just adore AsYa so much.. That was a great piece of work.. Hats off to you!Do pm me if you write more..

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

can't describe it in words...
so beautiful!!
last scene...marvelous!!

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Mitwaaa

@Mitwaaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

This os is amazing! I miss our asya! I was smiling reading the entire thing
great job and thank you for reminding us of thos great asya scenes! 😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hi...😊 that was a very sweet and a beautiful os...liked it a lot...these kind of o.s make you crave more for ASYA ...loved the whole thing between ASYA in the bedroom...

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This os was fantabulous..
it made me miss asya more😭 😭
Beautifully penned...
do write more...
I loved reading it...

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

This was a beautiful read. The couplets were a charming addition. From the moment Zoya existed the bathroom, it was an ethereal read.

Look forward to catching up on your index.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Fabulous os dear...
Sooo beautiful. ..
Each emotion is beautifully penned down...
Loved how asad cherish each and every memory spend with zoya...
They are indeed the best couple. ...
Loved their bedroom scene...
So serene so blissful ..
Asad didn't need words to express how muvh he lpves zoya...his actions are enough. .
Loved it...
Do write more...
Thanks gowtu gor suggesting me this os...I m glad that I read this 🤗

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wow... It was beautiful...
Kaha thi yaar abhi takkk..
I loved ittt...

Mann karta hai ki poora os copy karke paste karoon...
It is one the best OS's I hv ever read...
I HD a Sweet smile on my lips al the way when I read it...
it was awesomeee...

Ll plz write more...
We hv few ASYA writers only here..

Oh god I miss ASYA so much...

Its a such a lvly mrng for me :-)

Amu (amulya9).. Thanks for the link...
Miss aiyyedhanni nai tho..
I love uuu...

thanx kyun bey...I love u too toh 😳
last scene superb..kada...
after reading this first thing is I cried ...n next last scene imagining ASYA... its a wonderful feeling which cannot b expressed in words n thirdly u n jas came into my mind.. so I thought u should also experience this wonderful feeling...
u know I read it fr more than 10times... I'm crazy ..n u know that 😳 😆

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karani

@Miss.Mischief

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

this os is truly brilliant..😳
feeling nostalgic

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Amulya9

thanx kyun bey...I love u too toh 😳
last scene superb..kada...
after reading this first thing is I cried ...n next last scene imagining ASYA... its a wonderful feeling which cannot b expressed in words n thirdly u n jas came into my mind.. so I thought u should also experience this wonderful feeling...
u know I read it fr more than 10times... I'm crazy ..n u know that 😳 😆

10tymsss 😲
I knw u r crazy but this muchhh 😆
Ohh amu... Nd yes I totally agree with u... Its a wonderful feeling cnt b expressed in words...
Thy r a magic...