SaHil OS. Hamdard. Must....

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Heya guys.. im Rabi, in case u dont kow me.. i wrote many os on many couples n 1 ff on asya.. this is my first OS on SaHil.. do comment n hit like.. its busy scedule still i wrote.. so apologies if any mistakes..

HAMDARD...
Ahil thought 'selfish' how could she just tlk to me like that I am selfish according to her.. just becuz I didnt take her to badi ammi yesterday.. my ammi fainted she is my ammi.. i have to take care of her, I said we will go tomorrow n she said selfish you are aahil.. n also hurt her oen foot.. Now i am taking her to badi ammi but I wont talk until she does.. He left for taking out car..


Pal do pal ki hai kyun hai zindagi..
Iss pyar ko hai sadiyaan kafi nhn ..
Tou khuda se maang lun mohlat mein ik nayi..
Rehna hai bus yahan ab door tujh se jana nhn.. jo tu mera hamdard hai.. suhana har dard hai.. jo tu mera hamdard hai..


Ahil noticed sanam n then looked at her foot, which had bandage. So He couldnt help but was ready to help.. He silently moved out of car n carried her in his arms to the car.. He made het sit n their noses touched..
A silent silence was there in the car. Both were so close yet both didnt talk.. Ahil still couldnt believe she addressed him selfish.. There Sanam was finding words to apologize.. but couldnt.. she knew she was wrong
Ahil moved to driver's seat n started driving..


Teri muskuratein hain takat meri.. mujhko inhi se umeed mili.. Chahe kare koi sitam ye jahan.. in mein hi hai sada hifazat meri.. zindgani bari khubsoorat hui janat ab aur kia hogi kahin..
Jo tu mera hamdard hai.. suhana har dard hai..


She trief to break that awkward silwnce scenario but couldnt.. As she thought something came in her mind that will surely melt ahil.. aahil noticed that smile n smiled too..
She just keaned n rested her head on his shoulder.. n passed a gentle smile to him.. may be asking for a huge sorry for that little word that had great meaning.. Ahil in return just smiled.. assuring her his forgiveness.. then all of a sudden the car stopped..

Teri dharkano se hai zindagi meri.. khwahishen teri ab duaen meri.. kitna anokha bandhan hai yeh.. teri meri jaan jo aik hui.. lotoonga yahan tere paas mwin hann.. wada hai mera marr b jaun kahin.. jo tu mera hamdard gai.. suhana har dard hai..


Ahil qent out of the car.. trying yo identify the problem.. but nothing came out.. sanam came out too.. n just stared at aahil.. In that season of winter, his pinky skin was like a piece of cake.. suddenly the cold breeze of air made her come out of dirty thoughtts running in her mind. She felt cold n.. not to lue her foot hurt too.. but was silent.. cuz ahil was a pleasure, in return.. aahil looked at her n understood her state.. he left the car there n afain took her in his solid arms. She silently questioned through eyes.. he placed a soft kiss on her forhead, assuring her of his state.. of course now the home was on a walking distance. When he started walking, snow fall was all over the ground. Both looked at each other n smiled n she rested her head on hos shoulder again.. wraping her arms around his neck bringing her more closer to him.. as he was walking the crowd just stared n wondered at the cuteness of the couple..
Okay so now all joota chapal anda n tomatoes are welcomed.. Though im busy these days but whenever i listen to hamdard, all i xan think is of this scene so thought to share wd u guys too.. hope u guys enjoyed.. please hit like n comment tou zroor krna otherwise i will break ur legs lol.. have good tym guys.. enjoy reading..

P.s. do listen this song n imagine the scene i described above.. n then let me know how it was... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was lovely...
it was short and sweet...
I love that song .. and it fir perfectly in their situation
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Originally posted by: Annie_AsYa

That was lovely...

it was short and sweet...


I love that song .. and it fir perfectly in their situation


Thanx alot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thankyou so much...
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Only 3 replies...??? 😭
So much views n likes.. but no comments..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gorgeous OS! ⭐️ Please continue...
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Originally posted by: .Serendipity.

Gorgeous OS! ⭐️ Please continue...


Thankx...
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Thanx a ton...

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