ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15 - Page 19

Originally posted by: cutie15

That was awsum..!! Lovd it ..!!
Update soon..:)

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Choco,

I am so so sorry for being the last one to unres.

Now lets start with the story's title. It is Perfect! Seriously reading the title gives you an inside of the story.

The banner is sooo beautiful. I had to stop to stare at it for more then a few minutes when I read it on my cell & now also.

Coming to the story, it was Awesome. I wish it would have bee this way in the serial too & we would have been saved from the stupid billi crap. I'm glad you've decided to write on this scenario. One of ,y favorites. I had always wondered what it would have been like if they had got married during the challenge, & now you've given it to me.

The part was emotional, just how I like it. I could feel the pain and sadness that Zoe felt. She seriously is so hurt with all this farce thing Asad keeps repeating just to protect his real self from exposing. His heart is hurting too but he hasn't got the words or courage till yet to proclaim his undying love for her. But yes he knows how to hurt her even more with his stupidity.

Divs, danda nikalo.😉

I loved Dilshad's convo with both of them. She knows both her kids love each other and haven't confessed yet She has left it up to them to grow attached & declare their love in this journey of wedding. She's right, they should do it on their own, not with someone pointing a gun at their head.

Sach mein Asad ko ja ke maarne ka dil kar raha tha when he let her sleep on the couch. I hope he amends all this soon.

Looking forward to the next part.

Love lots..

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Hey choco...
So happy to see u with another story...
Was eagerly waiting to read ur another fabulous story...
Fabulous start dear...
Beautifully written...
Always wanted to read what will happen after the completion of the 10 days challenge...
Dilshaad is soo mature and nice women...
She know that asad and zoya both have feelimgs for eachother bt they themselves are not aware of it..
Love the way she talked with asad and zoya and made them aware of what their heart wants.. 😳
No matter what asad try to show people that this nikah is nakli bt he wants to see how zoya looked as his bride as Mrs. ZOYA ASAD AHMED KHAN.. 😳
Zoya thinks that this is all fake for asad and he has no feelings towards her... 😭
Both are trying to adjust and understand eachother...
They are way to formal with eachother and have awkwardness..
Asad hurt her unintentionally and again made her think that this is all fake 😭
My poor zoya..cried sooo much 😭
Again zoya took asad action wrong and thought that he is unhappy with this marriage 😕
Both needed to speak up and should clear the misunderstanding...
Loved it choco...
Update soon...
Very nice title. .. 😃

P.S. sorry for unressing soo late...was really busy due to clg exams...
Extremely sorry 😳

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Sis, bata bhi do kab hain next update.. 😕😆

PS: You won't believe but I started reading Love Happens again.. Was kinda missing it..😉😳

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Mujhe update chaiye

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Aww will do soon 😃

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

You are too sweet Shravs. Phir se 😲, mujhe laga ek read hi kafi hota hoga to jhelofy my story 😳

Weekend very busy, coming week pakka. I think this story also following the same pattern, weekly updates 😆

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

No not at all, no language problem here😆I might be late in replying to your comments but won't miss them. As I am in India and my sis is in Paris so depending on when she reads an replies to me. But I will definitely reply.

Old Zoya, ummm don't know about that as this story moves in a slightly different direction and and and... Oh I won't say no more or I will end up revealing the plot😆

P.S. IF YOU READ STORIES BY SBANO MALIK, YOU CAN COMMENT THERE IN FRENCH, SHE'S THE ONE FROM PARIS AND IS HELPING ME. SHE WILL LOVE TO GET FEEDBACK FROM YOU😃

Originally posted by: pinks2911

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No jhelofying..🥱 I can read that a 100 times and not get bored..😃

Having a hectic weekend I guess... Saima Di bhi busy hai..

Weekly updates??😲😲 Sis, you know I can't wait that long..😕😲