SS - Just One Glimpse #2: Chapter 21 & 22 Pg 110

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: ak020203
Lovely update. .
I really like this Zoya... the way she sees life is beautiful. .
Loved it..
Thanks for updating

Thank u so much, I really appreciate it 😊

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Beautiful update di
I love it so much
Continue it ASAP
Thanks for pm

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Wow I never thought I would have such a perfect ending to my day

Reading about their first kiss😉And zoya perfect day

She learn she could see again she came to his house

She talked to his ammi who thank her for coming into her son life 😊

So the day all together was perfect because it was with him

Oh she blurted she got her first kiss his reaction was so cute

You did with who and then he actually did give her her first kiss

Well she asked for it and she was funny too

Continue

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Awesome + Cute Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Mind-blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Wonderful update
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Superb update

he took her home !!!

love how she familiarized his home

talk with dilshaad was lovely

Kissed by who?????? hahaha cracked me up

asad so cutely demanded his first kiss !!

the kiss was beautiful 😊

loved it 😊

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

awsm update.
Cont asap.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm
T.c.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

wonderful part di

Asya had there 1st kiss

Zoya is always very confident

love her spirit

thanx 4 PM

Love u😃

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Salaam Saima di...what a lovely and beautiful update it was..have to read it again...to get that loving feeling which they are experiencing..iam a young man and while reading this kind of updates i really wish,I also find someone like Zoya as my partner...but nevertheless a wonderful update and continue soon , you are spoiling us by giving such beautiful updates...and then suddenly a sad part plz...don't make it scarrier..thanx for the P.M.

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

1st Kiss! ❤️ 😆

"'Zoya there is one more place I would like to take you to' 'where?' 'My place, would you come?' Zoya started smiling 'of course I will'."

Him asking her, I found that very endearing.

This was truly a beautiful chapter, Zoya's attitude and confidence is amazingly commendable. That counting steps scene was just stunning. Dilshad is really just a beautiful as the other characters in this story.

And finally the kiss, was a wonderfully written scene, liked the wit added to it. - You write these scenes gracefully. 👏

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago