SAHIL OS - A Passionate Confession

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok, guys I'm here with an another OS on SAHIL...i know I have an os pending but today I felt like writing a romantic OS..This is a long OS.

So here all the characters are the same but the situation is different...This happens after a few weeks of ahil's accident...

sanam is aware of her feelings now but din't show any of its sign as she felt ahil hated her even today and all those he did for her badi ammi is just for the sake of humanity..Sanam's respect for ahil increased ever since that day.

Ahil on the other side came to know that it was only rehan who was having feelings towards sanam and she is innocent, also he came to know that sanam agreed for the marriage for her badi ammi...since then Ahil's respect for sanam also increased becoz she sacrificed her life for her badi ammi...

SO HERE IT GOES...

Ahil in the office: What the hell is problem with you...Mr. Mittal...I have told you that I'm not interested in a deal with you...Isn't that clear for you...i have promised AK construction that i will be doing this deal with them...so I hope you got my point...

Mr. Mittal (in his mind): ahil, you just wait and watch...You are going to pay for this and you are going to sign this deal only with me...i know what to do

Meanwhile rehan enters the cabin and informs ahil about the party which was hosted by AK group of companies which was overheard by Mittal and he thought this was the ryte opportunity for him...

Suddenly ahil remembers that they had invited him along with his wife to the party but ahil was feeling very awkward to ask sanam about it. ..This was his feeling ever since he came to know that sanam didn't love rehan...he was soo happy that she din't love rehan but sad because she din't love him too...he was guilty as doubted her character but was soo proud that she was having a pure character...he was happy that now she is his wife (she is only his) but sad that even though he doesn't have any ryte on her...with all these mixed feelings he made up his mind to call her...and he called her to her Mobile...

Sanam : seeing the display...ji...kahiye ahil

Ahil : woh Sanam, actually I called you to inform you that tonight we have to go to a dinner and they have invited me along with my wife... I don't want to make any false excuses in front of them about your absence...so get ready till 7...saying this ahil cut the call immediately fearing she would say no because he doesn't want to miss a single chance to be with her...

It was 6.30 ahil decided to go home to pick up sanam...

Ahil reached home expecting that sanam would be ready and he goes directly to their home...he finds the room opened and was none inside it...Seeing this ahil was hurt becoz he expected sanam to be in the room getting ready...so ahil turns around dissapointedly and was about to leave the room when he finds the knob of the bathroom turning and it opens...there comes sanam dressed in the same dress which was gifted to her by him...For haya s wedding...sanam was having a special feeling towards it becoz she wore the same dress when she realised her feelings for him...

Ahil was looking at his wife like he has never seen before that too in the dress which he has gifted her...sanam wore that dress in wedding too but due to their differences, fights between them, he din't noticed her...but now when she is standing in front of him in their bedroom in that dress, he doesn't want to take his eyes off her...They were lost in each other and now the feelings are also mutual...

Sanam understood that he was staring at her and to break the silence she spoke first. .you gifted me this dress so I thought I shld wear it for the party. ...Sanam Said Innocently...

Ahil was soo happy hearing what sanam said...he felt like going and hugging her tightly and say her that he loved what she did...but remembering what his limits are...he controlled his desire and just said ok...

Both sanam and ahil got ready and approached the car...ahil opened the door of the car for sanam but later felt a little embarrassed by what he did...sanam slightly blushed and smiled a little...

Rest of their journey was filled with awkward silence...neither sanam talked nor ahil...meanwhile their car came over the bridge of the lake...as it was evening the lake was looking soo beautiful with lights surrounding it...sanam wanted to get down and feel the beauty of the lake but kept quite as they were heading to a party and she din't want to be late moreover she din't know how would ahil react to it...so she kept quite and looked at the lake dissapointedly...

This action of sanam din't do unnoticed by ahil...he knew sanam always found happiness in small things like this...nowadays sanam and ahil understood each other even without proper words...ahil said sanam to get out of the car and view what she wants to...he also answered that they will not be late...

Sanam got out of the car and the cool breeze of wind from the lake made her hairs dance to their tunes...The light around the lake was reflecting on her face and it was glowing which made her look more beautiful and ethereal...Ahil was just mesmerised and stood rooted to the place staring at his beautiful wife who was enjoying the cool breeze and the beauty of the lake...Ahil just wished to touch that beautiful face of hers and he was about to move forward...sanam turned around and said to ahil that they can leave now...ahil just came out of his thoughts and it was now when he realised what was he going to do...he immediately took back his hand and proceeded towards the car along sanam...

Sanam and ahil both entered the car and ahil was about drive, when two cars suddenly over took his and just landed in front of his car...then Wat happened was something which they din't expect...

They were surrounded by goons with hockey sticks in their hands...with in seconds the windows of the car broke in to fine pieces...One of them dragged ahil out of the car and hit him on his face...ahil being ahil could nt resist now, ahil's patience now crossed every limit...Now it was ahil's turn to return what he got. .he bashed the head of one of the goons on the bumper of his car, hit other one on his chest...aahil became a typical action hero through out the fight but one thing he din't understand was for what are these goons behind him...

As soon as ahil thght that everything is cleard ,he found himself in a bigger trouble...Now their target was sanam, now of the goons held sanam as his gunpoint...ahil was in a situation where he was helpless and he couldn't do anything and received everything that they offered him...even sanam was not able to withstand that. ..she just tried to run to ahil but she failed miserably, all this while ahil was badly beaten up threatening him that they would kill sanam...

Meanwhile one person gets down from the car and approaches ahil. .it was none other than Mr. Mittal...aahil was not shocked becoz he knows how much extent can this man go to achieve what he want but now he was scared becoz he was not alone, sanam was also there with him, what if he does something to her...he was not even able to think about it...he silently heard whatever he said for the sake of sanam, he just doesn't want to put her life in danger.

As ahil thought the demand for freeing sanam was to sign the deal with him which ahil rejected in the same morning...It was a deal of 10 crores and he was not willing to leave from his hand but what to do , sanam was on the other hand., and the way the goons were holding sanam holding her hair with one hand and gun at her forehead was making ahil's blood boil but he has to calm down for her.,for his sanam...

Ahil agreed to sign the papers. ... Seeing this sanam understood that he was doing this for her...she tght he shld not loose this deal becoz of her...sanam tried to free her self from the goons, she just hit the hand of the goon with which he was holding the gun and the gun fell far away from them...This made sanam to run away from them and ahil also returned to his form when sanam was free from them espescially that gun...

Ahil started hitting everyone with all his might and sanam tried to run away them but she was caught soon as soon as she reaches the edge of the bridge, trying to free from them sanam just slips over the bridge and was about fall in to the lake, one of the goons just get hold of her top coat and sanam just held it tightly as there was no other way...

Now this was a bonus for them as ahil could not do anything becoz as soon as he leaves the top, she will fall into the lake...ahil remembered that sanam was not able to withstand the water in the pool then what would she do if she fell in to the lake...moreover she doesn't know swimming. ..All these thoughts were haunting ahil and he thought there was no other way rather than signing the deal.

As soon as ahil signed the deal, the coat with which she was hanging just tore and she lost her grip and within no seconds sanam fell in to the lake with a big ''SPLASH''...ahil just stood dumbfounded not knowing what to do...he just dnt even know when his legs started moving and within seconds he too jumped in to the lake screaming ''SANAM''

He swam across the lake from right to left but could nt find sanam...It was more than 10 minutes that he was screaming and searching for her but he din't get any reply...he felt his body loosing power and he knew anyone who was under water could nt survive...he cursed himself for not protecting sanam and cursed himself for knowing swimming or else he would have drowned like her...Ahil was not able to give up as he was not even able to go back without sanam leaving her here all alone...

Suddenly ahil noticed something floating which seemed like hair.He swam towards it quickly and his happiness grew no bounds when he found out it was sanam...he felt as if he got his life back...he carried her to the bank and lay her down on the sand...she was wearing a sleeveless anarkali as the top was torn and the straps of it was also torn a little bit...he started to wake her up but she dnt respond to it...his tension was arousing with each passing second,her body was was becoming so cold...Ahil was not knowing what to do at that moment...he held her closer and hugged her tightly to provide her body as much as heat that he could...he felt that she might have drank a lot of water as her tummy was full...he lay her facing him and slowly started pressing her tummy so that the excess water can be out...

After doing all this she was not regaining her conscious, ahil's panic now turned into fear, fear of loosing her...he felt his eyes were becoming blur...sanam was becoming more and more pale...her hands and body were becoming more colder...ahil started loosing all his hope...Now the only hope left for ahil was Allah, whom he started following lately...ahil knew that now only Allah can do anything for him...he started praying to Allah holding sanam tightly in his arms as if someone would snatch her away from him...he was not ready to give away sanam, he holded her in his arms as if she is the most fragile thing...he remembered all those wonderful moments he spent with her holding her hands in his assuring her that he will never let her go...

Slowly after few minutes he saw sanam moved her lips and then hands followed by eyes...she slowly opened her eyes with great difficulty and saw herself wrapped up in ahil's arm's, at first she was not able to understand anything but lately reality hit her...she just slowly moved away from his chest and ahil also slowly moved her hands With out breaking the eye contact with sanam...

Ahil slowly lifted her up and made her to sit on the rock nearby...he slowly started moving away from her thanking Allah for giving him back sanam...he felt his life was incomplete without sanam and as he was thanking Allah, he felt sanam was trying to say something from behind...he lisned to her...

"Shukriya ahil, aapne Ek baar phir meri jaan bachayi...Agar aap nahi hothe tho mein aaj zinda nahi hoti hogi...aapne aapki jaan ki parwa kiye bina meri jaan bachayi...aap ko tho aisa kare ki koi zaroorat bhi nahi thi...phir bhi aapne kiya...Yeh sab kuch kare ke liye mein hu hi koun aapki"...said sanam gratefully

The last sentence which sanam said made ahil loose all his conscious...he just couldn't control this anymore, after all this... she felt she meant him nothing...

Ahil lost his control over his senses and what he did the next moment shocked sanam to hell...ahil just came towards sanam like a storm and hugged her tightly that all her bones would break into pieces...not only that ahil started kissing her on her forehead ,on her cheeks ,on her neck every where except lips...he hugged and kissed her as if there was no tomorrow,his passion of love was clearly visible in his doings...here every was not willing to leave sanam and continued kissing and hugging her as if his world depended on her...

Ahil answered for everthing that sanam asked him I'm one go without even taking a breath...
''shukriya, kyun sanam...tume bachane ke liye,
Agar mein nahi bachavunga tho phir aur koun bachayega tume sanam ???,
tumhe bachane keliye mein khud ki jaan ki parwa kyun karu ??? jab tum hi meri jaan ho,
aur tum jaanna chahte ho tumhe bachane ki meri zaroorat kya thi...kyun ki mein tumare bina nahi reh saktha...tumhare bina meri zindagi kabhi poori nahi hogi sanam...tho phir mein kyun na bachavu tume ???...
aur tum jaanna chahte ho tum meri koun ho ???...tho suno sanam...tum meri biwi ho aur hamesha rahoge... mein tumhe aise marine nahi de saktha...pyar kartha hu mein tumse sanam...i love you soo much"...saying this ahil continued hugging her...

Suddenly reality hit ahil and he moved away from sanam with a sudden jerk...he felt he did wrong and also cursed himself for letting out the truth out his heart...he felt guilty for what he did...This time he was even ready to apologise...

Ahil continued..."I know sanam you don't like me...infact I don't deserve a girl like you, I doubted your relationship with rehan...but in spite of knowing all my flaws, I fell in love with you sanam...i know you married me just for few months that too for your grandmother, and that 3 months will complete within few days and you will be free from me...and I know u will be the happiest person...and I'm ready to even leave you for your happiness"...

Tears started flowing down her cheeks after hearing him but his last two sentences broke her heart in to pieces...she couldn't believe that those words of her hurted him soo badly...

Ahil turned to sanam saying that "I know sanam that you cannot ever love me and will defenitely make you free from this fake...''

Ahil Couldn't Complete The sentence and what he saw shocked him to the core...sanam just came running and hugged him tightly not leaving a little space between them...sanam questioned ahil
"How can you call this a fake nikaah ahil ???
How can you say that everything will be over after three months ???
How can you say that you don't deserve a girl like me ???
How can you say that i will be happy after leaving you ??? and
How can you say that i will never love you ???,
I love you ahil...i love you soo much...i cannot live without you and I can never be happy with out you"...

All these words of sanam were like a soothing song for ahil...ahil couldn't believe that sanam also loved him like he loves her...

Ahil just cupped her face in his hands and asked her looking into her eyes...''do you really love me sanam''...
Ha replied sanam...This time ahil was able to find the same passion and love in Sanam's eyes too which he had been longing for...

Sanam hugged ahil tightly and in between asked him... ahil, woh deal ka kya..you lost it ryte that too for me...Ahil looked down at sanam who was resting on his chest and said ''Nothing is more important than you Sanam''

Saying this ahil hugged sanam even more tightly and that night including the lake , the stars and the beautiful nature witnessed a ''PASSIONATE CONFESSION''
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-Malavika7CLT- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome story.. I loved it. Especially that confession.. OMG! Itz really amazing.. If it happend in hospital, it'll be boring. But, itz so different and beautiful..!
You proved that, you are an amazing writer. Waiting for your another beautiful story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful post. keep it up.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice but do they live poor as Ahil signed deal of 10 cr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god! That was beautiful! I loved the circumstances where it all happened.
It was just beautiful how they confessed. <3
Loved his dialogues and how he couldn't control himself from admitting and then her breakdown :')
Gorgeous stuff! Loved every bit of it!
It would be so good something like this happens in the show!
Keep writing! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great job

You took mittal and ak construction from pavitra rishta right? I love that cus then I can put faces on all the characters.

Loved the idea. Let's hope we get to see ahil the action hero soon after this whole almost dying from gas explosion is done.

Thanks! Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malavika7CLT

Awesome story.. I loved it. Especially that confession.. OMG! Itz really amazing.. If it happend in hospital, it'll be boring. But, itz so different and beautiful..!
You proved that, you are an amazing writer. Waiting for your another beautiful story..


thankyou malavika...it means a lot for me...
i will defenitely write more on sahil
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Oh my god! That was beautiful! I loved the circumstances where it all happened.
It was just beautiful how they confessed. <3
Loved his dialogues and how he couldn't control himself from admitting and then her breakdown :')
Gorgeous stuff! Loved every bit of it!
It would be so good something like this happens in the show!
Keep writing! :D


thank you prags...but how much i try i cannot become a writer like you...
actually there are many situations which i wished would happen in the show...im just trying to fullfill it through writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Wow great job

You took mittal and ak construction from pavitra rishta right? I love that cus then I can put faces on all the characters.

Loved the idea. Let's hope we get to see ahil the action hero soon after this whole almost dying from gas explosion is done.

Thanks! Look forward to reading more of your work.


actually i tooh mittal from APHG and AK,i dnt have any thought..it suddenly came in to my mind...

Thank you so much that you really liked it...

I think ahils confession will happen at such situation only...until then the ego of these two people will never let them confess
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sylvia99

Nice is, beautifully written



Thank you dear

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