AsYa FF ~ Zehnaseeb [Thread #4] *COMPLETED*

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@A.Kh_20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#681

First of all it ended so sweetly there was no bad things which are in other words called twist!! But anyway this is really good!! And I am sorry I wanted to give a long comment but couldn't make it!! And with anymore delays I'll even forget to reply!! So coming to end it was really fantastic!! Their baby's wow!! And they get married too !! That's something so fast!! Anyway u have made this story so fairy tale!! And waise toh I haven't read much fairy tales except Cinderella story so I would say for that this was actually highway walk!! I know cake walk is the word but honestly who walks on the cake n even if u do won't it be all smudged to u!!:D:D thanks !!<3<3<3 I loved it thoroughly!!

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@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#682

Wonderful update & epilogue
Asya had 2 kids zaroon & Asmara
Zaroon married to kashaf who were daughter of haider & sanya
Ayaan & humeira happy with their son.
Beautiful story comes to an end. Sad but happy.
Thanks for pm

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#683

lovely update...

wonderful story with a happy ending hope u will start a new one soon...

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Zoya is expecting wow...

now there is going to be a happy ending...of this beautiful tale...

Congo for this lovely journey Mrina

-Aditi

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#685

wonderfull n amazing...

beautifully written...

asad n zoya have 2 wonderfull children...

haider n sanaya also have 2 lovely children...

luv it...

mindblowing...

fabulous...

thx fr the pm...

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#686

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

"She was wrapped in an oversized towel with her heavy baby bump making her look cuter than ever. Asad got out another towel and wiped her damp hair and ruffled it. He then removed a gown from the cupboard and slipped it over her head and untied the towel. The gown lifted from the front and only reached her knees. Asad smiled at the sight."

*long deep sigh* Emotion on another tangent - Beautiful! - He certainly is an amazing husband.

"It's superman. Not princess."

Loved this reference!

"Zaroon Ahmed Khan!"

Thankfully a friend recommended ZGH, I knew where the inspiration came from. 😉

""We still have a lifetime of togetherness. And you were destined to be mine. My love, my luck, my soul mate, my better half!", she whispered and dropped a kiss on the crook of his neck.

"Zehnaseeb!", he whispered and pecked her lips and then her forehead lost in the warmth and love in each other's embrace still thinking about the blissful years to come."

A beautiful journey finds a culmination! ❤️ This has certainly been an inimitable and wonderful love story.

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago