Master of disguise seher FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Summary: seher is a wanted thief in Delhi with the money that she stole she bought herself a new disguise and move to Bhopal. Prem an officer assigned to catch and arrests her must put her behind bars. But there's a problem, no one knows her true identity. Now seher will find out who she really is and also find love?

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part 2 on page 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice
Plz pm me
Who is prem? Waiting to c him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally, a story wid heroine as a grey, ruthless, arrogant, beautiful character😊
Give CS n Prologue soon😃
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Part 1

Prem was sitting in his room,thinking about what happend today.He was so concentrate on what happend that he didnt here his Dadi knocking and calling his name.She walks to him put his hot milk on the table then she gently puts her hand on his shoulder. " prem whats wrong?" she says, making him look at her. Not wanting to worry his grandma, he got up and touch her shoulder. " nothings wrong Dadi,by the way where is pooja?" he asks avoiding his grandmother question.

"you know her, shes partying again." she says frowning

"Partying? with who?" he asks

" her friends" she says then says "I wish she could settle down and become more responsible." she says shaking her head. Prem drinks his milk and chuckle then he looks at his grandmother "Maybe you should arrange her marriage." he says

They talk for a while until Dadi decides to leave him, giving him time to think more on the case. After drinking his milk he changed and lay down,with his face facing the ceiling and his hands under his head. He thought about today and how the thief played him

FLASHBACK

Seher was sitting in her car while popping her gum. She waited until she saw officer jenny before she made her move. getting down from her car, she quietly snuck behind her and hit her neck,making her go unconcious. Then she drags her into her car and ties her up,After that she made her disguise and puts it on,A few minute later she walks out of the car and enter the police station. Looking around she search for the conference room where they held their meetings,When she found it she was about to head inside when an officer stops her "Jenny?I thought you were heading home?" he said

"Ah yes, i was but when i heard about the meeting i couldnt miss it." she says, not knowing that she was actually right.

"ok,but i still think you should go home, I dont want you to get more worse." he says

seher roll her eyes in her head,then she thought, this is why i hate police their to nosy. She looks at the officer and said " I'm fine, i wont get sicker." she says before some one told them to head inside because the meeting is about to start. They walk inside follow by the rest of the crew,Then the boss walks in and start discussing some issues "As you all know, there has been a robbery going on not once but twice by the same person." he says then says " This robber is no ordinary person, He's been going around stealing a lot of money either from the bank, or from the rich. So We're having this meeting because the prime minister daughter sheela." he says,showing her picture

"Is getting married today, so guards will be everywhere, but the prime minister thinks his guards wont be enough.So he called on us to guard each area of the mansion." he says making seher smirk and lick her lips. This is easier than i thought, I will just get some information on where they will be blocking and i will make some marks and find a different way to enter and steal the jewellery,she thought.

"I wont be in charge of this case,so i'm leaving it to our new officer Prem Ali Mehra." he says, Surprising everyone even seher. Well this sucks, she thought,We had so much fun together,him chasing me on the highway, me fooling him, and him falling in the water when he thought i was on the boat. she thought remembering the good times she had with him.

Prem walks in front of the room getting everyones attention. Then he explain he's ideas to the crew and divide the teams into fives. Once everyone knows their station the meeting was over. Seher on the other hand staid and wrote something,then she walks to him while he was writing and marking the mansion area. She cleared her throat getting his attention, then she says "your really confident that we will catch the thief." she says

"Yes, with my plan. we will definetly catch him." he says

"I dont think this will work" she says,making him look at her. He was going to ask her what she mean by that when she cut him off "I mean they tried everything but they still couldnt catch her.. i mean him." she says correcting herself before he could question her slip up.

Prem smiles and put his hand on her shoulder,"dont worry,Even if this doesnt work i wont stop until he's behind bars." he says staring in her eyes. seher felt her heart beat for a second,not by his words but by his confidence and gentle smile. It was soon gone when he advert his eyes away from her ,getting back to work. She looks at him and says " Then catch me if you can."

"what was that?" he says confuse

"Nothing officer prem, Good luck." she says smirking, before leaving the room.

She left the building and went to her car. Then she drives to the mansion.When she reached their she disguised herself as a guard and snuck inside, looking for hiding cameras when she found them she put a small X mark next to them. Next she search for the bathroom when she found it she climbs on top of the toilet seat and opens the air vent.

Pulling herself up she search for the brides room, she mades a lot of turns until she heard a female voice. she moved to the direction and could hear a young voice talking. "These jewellery was mine,but now i'm giving it to you." her mother says while giving it to her. her daughter grabs the jewellery and opens it, she was amazed and so was seher " This is beautiful mother." she says making seher agree, These will make me fortune she thought

She took her string and ties it next to the vent then she went back the way she came from, leaving trails behind. Later on at night, cops where everywhere surrounding the area and inside. Prem was closer to sheela room guarding and protecting it suddenly the lights turn off and everyone panick. quickly the prime minister ran up stairs with his daughter, they ran to her room and prem opens the door. quickly she went in her closet and opens her jewellery box, what happend next shock them. "Its here." she says sighing with relief

"this is strange, if the robber isnt after the jewellery then what was it?" he asks,suddenly the prime minister remember something "MY MONEY!!" he says quickly running downstairs to his safe,follow by everyone else.When they came downstairs the prime minister puts his pass word and opens his safe, when he checks his money was there.

"What is going on here?" asks the prime minister

"Maybe the power just when out" his daughter said

"No,we were sure the thief was gonna strike here." prem said "unless" he says confusing them,quickly he ran back upstairs and enter her room " this was a decoy, to get the jewellery." he says opening the box to see the jewellery gone. shocking everyone.

"MY JEWELLERY!" she screams before fainting


Fifteen minutes Ago, Seher puts her disguise on as a maid then she walks to the door entrence where they were checking the people who come in. thinking fast, she search for the backway and saw one of the cheff throwing the trash away. She walk towards the open door and quietly snuck in. Once she was in she search for the generator, that generate the lights when she found it she cuts of the switch turning the lights off. smiling to herself she use her small flashlight and head to the bathroom she was in earlier. When she reached their she opens the air vent and pulls herself up,Then she follow the string she left earlier, heading to sheela's room.

When she reached their she waited until they arrive, she could see their faces when they saw the jewellery their. This made her chuckle inside, "now this is where the misconception starts." she whispers enjoying the drama. She watch as the minister talk about his money, and ran downstairs follow by everyone else. Once they were gone, she came down and took the jewellery out of the box and puts it in her bag before she left she place the note she wrote earlier on the bed then she pulls herself back up and head to a different direction which leads outside.


Present, prem was confuse and amuse. The thief stole the jewellery right under our nose and he could still be here in the house. he thought quickly he contact team one and two to search the mansion and block every exit. he was about to head out when a paper fell on the floor. Picking it up he opens it and reads it "Catch me if you can" he says thinking back to when jenny told him that and even her slip up about the robbers gender.

Quickly he ran downstairs and head to his car,calling everyone to meet him at jenny house. Elsewhere, Seher took jenny car and search for her address then she drives to her house and untie her. She got out of the car and ran away, a few minutes later jenny woke up only to see police cars surrounding her. confuse she got out the car feeling dizzy.

"Put your hands in the air and dont move jenny." prem says confusing her

"What do you mean?I havent done anything wrong." she says, with her hands up

Prem and five officers walk to her and arrest her " your under arrest for stealing the prime minister jewellery and other robbery." he says

End Of Flashback


Prem stood up, and sighns "turns out it wasnt jenny who stole the jewellery. it was someone else." he says suddenly realization hit him like a brick wall. We've been played,he thought, we we're part of her magic trick, Now you see it and now you dont. he thought, She made us believe that she wasnt going for the jewellery(now you see it), As soon as we went downstairs, she came and took it and when we came back up it was gone, he thought "but she wouldnt be able to come up, because we would have heard it and their were security everywhere.So that means she was already upstairs." he said while getting some water.

"but where would she hide, that wouldnt be to obviouse?" he says suddenly he smiles and laughs " clever girl" he says before going back to bed "you might of fooled me once but that wont happen the second time." he says before turning of the light


Elsewhere, Seher was in her car driving somewhere. She looks at the jewellery and smiles then she says " this will be enough to save the orphanage."

To Be Continue...

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Seher is seen giving money to the orphanage she grew up with, suddenly she saw officer prem coming their, she quickly hides and watch as he talks to the imam. she also saw the children running to him and calling his name which confuse seher.





Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update. seher is really intelligent. as i expected she was robbing corrupted people only to save orphan kids. prem which actor is potraying prem? is prem too an orphan? update next part soon. also pm me.

Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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who is prem???pls update her picture
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept
Please continue and pm me please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kindly mention d name of d actor playing Prem😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting
Please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The guy playing prem is amit mehra his an Indian model. Also prem is a made up character.

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