~Destiny~ // Sahil ❤️

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~Destiny~

It's coming out in the distance
I'm moving down from the clouds,
The easiness ceasing every heartbreak
It's crossing limits, so I'm walking out.

It's nowhere near to frankness
The veins of my blood rupturing,
With the thought of every breath shared
And every guilt we crushed.


It's not like we pleaded for a 'pause'- we never began
But the damage control was on fire,
Fire of lust and anonymous resemblances
Framed with a no 'start-again'.


I'm falling off a cliff, don't come to see
I'm glowing in the dark, vulnerable in the night,
I'm having obscure thoughts, losing sanity
When all this time I thought that you were my clarity.


I was wrong, please forgive my
Enthralling thoughts that thrones my heart,
That killed my heart, crushed it to ashes
So it's my err, I thought you would save me.


You see it's not possible for us,
To be what only I imagined us to be,
My entity--You of course
But you'll always be my guilt ridden destiny.

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Hey people!! This is written from Ahil's perspective. Running late so gotta go! Tell me how it is :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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This I am guessing will be exactly what Aahil will be feeling some time down the lane and you've penned it down so brilliantly. So hauntingly beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Darling Sparkle!!!!



I've missed you!


Destiny! What a title!


And the piece?

Brilliant!


You do this every time. Every single time! Give us amazingly beautiful words...and out together? A heartmeltingly amazing piece.


So.

He wants out huh!


The easiness ceasing every heartbreak
It's crossing limits, so I'm walking out.



For her. He's walking out...because...


I was wrong, please forgive my
Enthralling thoughts that thrones my heart,
That killed my heart, crushed it to ashes
So it's my err, I thought you would save me.



She couldn't save him!


And it crushed him.



You see it's not possible for us,
To be what only I imagined us to be,
My entity--You of course
But you'll always be my guilt ridden destiny.


:'(



Guilt ridden destiny.


Oh wow oh wow!


You leave me awed! As always.


This time though. That very line. Guilt ridden destiny. Wow. That. THAT.



Truest thing ever.



Hugs my darling!



Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki.171

This I am guessing will be exactly what Aahil will be feeling some time down the lane and you've penned it down so brilliantly. So hauntingly beautiful.

Thank you!!

That means alot to me! Yeah, I bet Ahil feels that, I could fee it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Darling Sparkle!!!!



I've missed you!


Destiny! What a title!


And the piece?

Brilliant!


You do this every time. Every single time! Give us amazingly beautiful words...and out together? A heartmeltingly amazing piece.


So.

He wants out huh!


The easiness ceasing every heartbreak
It's crossing limits, so I'm walking out.



For her. He's walking out...because...


I was wrong, please forgive my
Enthralling thoughts that thrones my heart,
That killed my heart, crushed it to ashes
So it's my err, I thought you would save me.



She couldn't save him!


And it crushed him.



You see it's not possible for us,
To be what only I imagined us to be,
My entity--You of course
But you'll always be my guilt ridden destiny.


:'(



Guilt ridden destiny.


Oh wow oh wow!


You leave me awed! As always.


This time though. That very line. Guilt ridden destiny. Wow. That. THAT.



Truest thing ever.



Hugs my darling!



Mwah!


Farz!!!!!! I'm soo glad to see you!

Well, this time my time and internet is limited! ARGH! Im in India *yay*
It's hot as hell and fun fact-- I came up with this poem while watching Game of Thrones;during my flight, 35,000 ft. above ground - now that you mentioned about the line which says "...that throned my heart..." throned/throns/throne , get it? :D

Phew! A though--I have a few chords in my head cuz this would make a legit breakup song which I would sell to Taylor Swift and get rich (daydreaming much? Oh well.)

Jokes apart, I miseeed you so much!!

Geez, I'm using a laptop that doesnt even have legit keys in the keyboard!

Thanks Farz!! You're seriously the best ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you <3
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Woohoo!!!


You're in India!!


And you wrote this while on flight!? Watching Game of Thrones!



Wowzer!!!!



You don't sell it Sparks! Taylor Swift gotta credit you!


Okay fine sell it. So rich!! $$$$


Heee!!



I love the poem, truly!



You're quite the gem you know that? Yes you are! What flow of beautiful words!



I heart Destiny.



I heart you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Woohoo!!!


You're in India!!


And you wrote this while on flight!? Watching Game of Thrones!



Wowzer!!!!



You don't sell it Sparks! Taylor Swift gotta credit you!


Okay fine sell it. So rich!! $$$$


Heee!!



I love the poem, truly!



You're quite the gem you know that? Yes you are! What flow of beautiful words!



I heart Destiny.



I heart you!

And I heart you!

Muah! And stop flattering me, will you ever Farz? 😆 :* muah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you :)

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