Th#6 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 18 to 20

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jas91

@jas91

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha no leave it 😆
haaww I never meant it that way
I was just trying to prepare u ,,
Aww its ok u should deffo read it 🤗

Bablu ki bachi jara sa bhi hint nahi deti😡😆

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice part.

The conditions of Asad(KSG) to Zoya,it was so nice.

The conversation of Asad(KSG) and Zoya was so nice.

The gifts which Asad(KSG) and Zoya gave to each other was so nice.

Zoya sleep on couch and Asad(KSG) carried her to bed and said "I love You" to her in germany,it was so cute.

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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anu040

@anu040

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Superb one... Thanks for the pm...

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

that was one awesome update...

the darkness is gone and sun has tarted shining...

i am sure it will be zoya u breaks the deal...

asad is mr perfection...

waiting for more😉

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Love the update ...Fabulous <3

Thanks 😳

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

in that case i better get the stuff ready... 😭 😭

haha yeah be prepared 😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: -Genelia-
🤣
behavng as if thy wrnt entring a relationship. Bt sm agency!! 😆
Lik srsly rules😲😆
Damn intrstng chappie...
Uv gt 158 likes olready sooo... B quick

haha yeah AsYa are always different 😎😆

Thanks !!

Yup just writing it 😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: -Genelia-
Kr ri h updt. Ya m kraooon???😈

haaaww u will update or what ?? 😲😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: Amin21
When reading the rules part I was just thinking that maybe one of them is going to be break it but after reading the note so its for sure going to be so 😭
But I just wish it wouldn't be zoya's last rule cause reading it here made me to cry but dont know why I think there will be some misunderstanding and both will think that they break their last rules but at the asad will punish zoya by marrying her .
For waiting for you to know what are you planning for them 😆

Aww but rules r made to be broken na

haha lets see ,,

u will get to know sooon 😉

Thanks !!

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: BeYourself
Res
Unres...

Bubba...meri jaaneman!! 🤗

what an awesome update!!

I LOVED the rules!!! ☺️
i wish the first rule of Asad and Zoya weren't contradictory ☺️😆

and i really don't know who is going to break the rule first...is it really necessary to 'break' the rule anyway? can't they just 'violate' it?? 😭😆

i wanted to read on and on and on and on...but you stopped!! 😡😆
you didn't even make Zoya sit in his lap when they were on the couch 🤣

please make the breakfast scene like that if you are planning to write one ☺️🤣

now coming to some serious points...🤓

the rules did scare me a little..but i know they will work it out for sure 😳

and then they both gave gifts to each other...😳
i hate it when boys are the ones to give and girls only take from them...there should be be an equality in everything!! 😳😛

but he will have to wear his competitor's watch!! 😆🤣
now i would say, "ye pyaar kya kya karwata hai insaan se!!!" 😳🤣

and i loved it how Zoya felt his touch and opened her eyes immediately!!
that was so so expected from her owing to her horrific past...

SUPERB update!!! 👏👏

Love ya darling!! ❤️🤗