#1 - AsYa/KaBhi SS : A Hidden Love... Chap 1-4 - LINK TO NEW THREAD !! - Page 96

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Well after all they r Mr. Khan and Ms. Farooqui, kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hain ! 😆
I love the glass too ! It aleast it brought some sense into them ! 😕 😆
Ego issues of not being weak ! 😆
Thank you ! I'm glad to make my sissy proud ! 😆
If u would have seen his blood washed face u wouldnt had seen that handsome under the blood ! 😭 😆

Arey he has been rude toh at least he deserved to lose his shirt ! 😆

Ego issues i tell u ! 😆

He would have had a heart attack seeing ur floor !! 🤣 🤣
HWSC !! OMG !! U cracked me up !! 🤣 🤣

Thank you so much ! I know u reprimand me again and again for saying that ! But i cant help seeing ur lovely comments !! 🤗

That 'thing' cant happen ! 😆

Yeah afterall they are Mr Khan and Miss Farooqui !
No way ! I would have known it's him ! 😉😆
Hmm yeah I agree ! Be rude and your shirt is gone ! 😈
His loss but Zoya's gain ! As she gets to see 6 packs 😉😆
Well i'm getting to see the floor again !
well not fully though 🤣
Thanks again ?!


And the thing is definitely happening ! 😃
And and and


I'm always proud of you ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres pg 97 and pg 126 😃❤️
Edited by zola007 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zola007

Res for chap 3

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Yet another amazing part !
Absolutely loved it !
Really well written leaving us wanting more😳😆

It was high time for them to introduce themselves😆
But what happened to Zoya ?!😕
She goes sad with her own name !?😕
But at least Asad can see she's not comfortable and changes the topic 😳
My dear nurse ! It's so normal to blush for the first in front a a patient !
Saw who's in front of you ?! A damn HWSC !☺️🤣
And that's our Zoya ! Always getting in when he's changing !😳😆
Aaaw but she's so sweet ! Caring about him this much !
And feeling bad he has to sleep on the couch in this state😳
Asad like always Akdu ! *facepalm !! *
Come on yaar ! She's being nice here and you're asking so many questions !😆
But at least he's also concerned about her !
But but but ... No worries when Mr.Pepper spray is here !😎
But he's right again ! Zoya it's the damn time to know what he was doing in this thing !
But you and you sleep !😡😆
Humi and a Psycho !?🤣🤣🤣
Mr HWSC ! What happened to your " I'm not weak ?! " uhh ?!
Afraid of Humi uhh ?!🤣
But indeed she seems weird😳Poor him !😆
Oye hoye ! Already concerned if she has a bf or not ?! *smirking*😉😆
But what 's her problem !?😕😕
Finally we are getting to know what happened to HWSC !
Rushing to the next part😳😆

👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏


❤️


Awww !! 🤗 i wont say 'Thank you' 😳 😆

Finally introduced ! 😆
Well she has a reason to why she doesnt like her name
HWSC in the place !! ☺️ 😎 🤣
Well i changed few things in Zoya's character but few things r still the same, including barging in when he's changing ! 😆
Pepper spray rocks always ! 😎 😆
Arey bechari never gets some sleep and for once when she's feeling sleepy toh sone do bechari ko ! 😆
Aisi ladki se kaun nahi darega ? Looking with binoculars in ur house ! 😲 😆
Jealous Mr. Khan ? 😉 😆

Mwah ! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zola007

Res for part 4

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Ok ! Now I seriously have to know what's wrong with this girl
Asad seems to know her so much already😳
Knowing she has to be left alone for some times and all
Zoya's explanation so reminded me of myself !😳
Living alone indeed turns you into a paranoid !
All little noise makes you be on your guard
Maybe I should have a baseball bat like her too near my head🤣🤣
Zoya seems so confident about his personality😳
That he himself is intrigued about it😆

Asad's past is always ... something
He went through this much to handle his family😭

Then comes the because to the why he was in the almirah !



The visa issues I tell you ! Such a nightmare !🤢
Always asking of this and that😡😡

Haider !


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<div>Such an a** you're😡
Stupid guy !🤬🤬

Now indeed it's more logical to why Asad didn't want to contact anyone
Zoya is angry about it while Asad is sad
Ring left !?😳
Something tells me it will be useful later ( later which is really soon 😉)😳😆

And I agree ! "Mothers I tell you !!!!!! " -_________________________-

Poor Asad !Not giving a damn about the decor and just nodding😆
And here is our akdu AAK ! Always complaining about junk food and all🤣

"Of course i can cook ! But the fact that i don't like to cook is another fact !"
👏
You've got all of it right baby ! That's so me !😎.🤣
And the blue shirt is back !!!!!
What ?!?!!?!😲
1 day they know each other and already a hug !!😲
Thank you blue shirt ji !😆

Should I tell you again how amazing this part is ?!🤔
I'm so in love with this SS !
Ok more with HWSC😉😆

🤗❤️





Bechari has been through a lot ! 😭
Its not an easy thing to do to live alone and i respect u even more for that !! 🤗
Keep baseball bat but dont smash Mr. 2nd floor's head with it !! 🤣 🤣
Asad also had to struggle a lot but nothing of these was aware to his family back in India !
Immigration officers r the most annoying ones !!
bas***d Haider ! 😡
A ribg is always useful !! 😳 😉 😆
Well what do men knowabout decoration ?! *rolling my eyes* 😆
Well lets say that this was a Shona special story !! 🤗
Haan blue shirt ! 😉 😆 it did its work ! 😉
Let me tell u that even i'm in love with HWSC ! ☺️ 😆 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Bechari has been through a lot ! 😭
Its not an easy thing to do to live alone and i respect u even more for that !! 🤗 Aaaw !😳 you just have to get used to it !
Keep baseball bat but dont smash Mr. 2nd floor's head with it !! 🤣 🤣 Arrey ! What is this !?! Your mind is stuck to Mr.2nd floor ?! 🤣
Asad also had to struggle a lot but nothing of these was aware to his family back in India ! Yeah I believe when someone goes abroad he/she shouldn't bother families too much 🤔 cause it makes them way too much restless than they already are
Immigration officers r the most annoying ones !! Yeah always 👎🏼
bas***d Haider ! 😡
A ring is always useful !! 😳 😉 😆 Aaaw !? 😳😆
Well what do men knowabout decoration ?! *rolling my eyes* 😆 Yeah well true ! Nothing 👎🏼
Well lets say that this was a Shona special story !! 🤗 Aaaw ! That's so sweet 😆🤗
Haan blue shirt ! 😉 😆 it did its work ! 😉
Let me tell u that even i'm in love with HWSC ! ☺️ 😆 ❤️ Our perfect dream guy ! *Drool ! *

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Awww !! 🤗 i wont say 'Thank you' 😳 😆 Good then 😡😆

Finally introduced ! 😆
Well she has a reason to why she doesnt like her name
HWSC in the place !! ☺️ 😎 🤣 *drool* ☺️
Well i changed few things in Zoya's character but few things r still the same, including barging in when he's changing ! 😆 Anyway , what's Zoya without these ?! 😉😆
Pepper spray rocks always ! 😎 😆 You know I have one ?! 😛😆
Arey bechari never gets some sleep and for once when she's feeling sleepy toh sone do bechari ko ! 😆 Yeah 🤔 anyway sleep is SO precious ! 😆
Aisi ladki se kaun nahi darega ? Looking with binoculars in ur house ! 😲 😆 well yeah psycho indeed !
Jealous Mr. Khan ? 😉 😆 🤣🤣

Mwah ! 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

Haan itna stuck ke main tum dono pe TS likhne wali hoon !! 🤣
*sigh* wonder where they r hidden ?! 🤔 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Haan itna stuck ke main tum dono pe TS likhne wali hoon !! 🤣
*sigh* wonder where they r hidden ?! 🤔 😆



TS or SS ?! 😕

They've lost their ways trying to find us ! -_________________- ! 😆🤣



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zola007




TS or SS ?!😕

They've lost their ways trying to find us ! -_________________- !😆🤣
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Oops mini SS ! 😆 seems like u r eager to read ur own story ! 😉 😆 🤗
Yeah they really got lost and will be even more once they'll find us !! 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Oops mini SS ! 😆 seems like u r eager to read ur own story ! 😉 😆 🤗
Yeah they really got lost and will be even more once they'll find us !! 🤣





My story !?! *eyebrow up*
Actually it's just an idea of mine
As you said you don't mind writing but just in lack of ideas 😉😆
But yeah so excited to read it ! 😆
Anyway it's more interesting when it's about Miss Musibat and Jahapanah

Yeah true !
Gods forbid they don't run away once they find us though ! 😳🤣

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