#1 - AsYa/KaBhi SS : A Hidden Love... Chap 1-4 - LINK TO NEW THREAD !!

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@navk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

awesome update
omg psycho part was too good lol

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@navk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

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indu333

@indu333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

read the three parts in one go...

this is awesome.. i am already loving it...

so asad is a chef and zoya is nurse...

how did asad end up there in the cupboard???

humeira is so funny...🤣

so asad is already attracted to zoya and zoya too is feeling a pull towards asad..

why is zoya so sad??is it something related to her past???

cont soon...

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@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Oh these two talk a lot and Zoya blushes a lot. Poor Humera what did he call her Psycho? Very bad. Now that she is Zoya's friend. Funny!

waise you hardly use any french words in your writings. Is that a deliberate attempt?

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Badi buri ho tum Bano...! 😡
Ye bhi rokne ki koi jagah thi! Huh!
Likhti tum behtareen ho, bas jaldi-jaldi update nahi kar rahi ho aaj kal... 😛
Abhi toh story kaafi blurr mein hai, since u have not cleared the story yet, but very eager to know!
N what does thi Humaira has to do popping every now n then... 😆
Now jaldi se post d new chap... Wanna know Asad as well Zoya's story...
Fabulous update... Waiting for more n more! 😉
Take care!
Love,
Ur Aapi! 😃

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Res for chap 3

Unres

Yet another amazing part !

Absolutely loved it !

Really well written leaving us wanting more 😳😆

It was high time for them to introduce themselves 😆

But what happened to Zoya ?! 😕

She goes sad with her own name !? 😕

But at least Asad can see she's not comfortable and changes the topic 😳

My dear nurse ! It's so normal to blush for the first in front a a patient !

Saw who's in front of you ?! A damn HWSC ! ☺️🤣

And that's our Zoya ! Always getting in when he's changing ! 😳😆

Aaaw but she's so sweet ! Caring about him this much !

And feeling bad he has to sleep on the couch in this state 😳

Asad like always Akdu ! *facepalm !! *

Come on yaar ! She's being nice here and you're asking so many questions ! 😆

But at least he's also concerned about her !

But but but ... No worries when Mr.Pepper spray is here ! 😎

But he's right again ! Zoya it's the damn time to know what he was doing in this thing !

But you and you sleep ! 😡😆

Humi and a Psycho !? 🤣🤣🤣

Mr HWSC ! What happened to your " I'm not weak ?! " uhh ?!

Afraid of Humi uhh ?! 🤣

But indeed she seems weird 😳 Poor him ! 😆

Oye hoye ! Already concerned if she has a bf or not ?! *smirking*😉😆

But what 's her problem !? 😕😕

Finally we are getting to know what happened to HWSC !

Rushing to the next part 😳😆

👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏

❤️

Edited by zola007 - 11 years ago

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Nice update

So the two strangers taken by each other

So she helped him to change and she retired to bed

So humeria the psycho had asad running to hide for her

Can't believe she was looking in the man house with binoculars

So zoya has a pained pass and asad want to know what it is

He is so taken by her when she was laughing at him on humi ways

So humi is pushing and bubbly and zoya is a little reserve

So they share breakfast boyfriend # he cringes but she is sadden

Who broke her heart

So time to hear asad story get a drink😆

Continue

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Oh humera...stalking...asad...and now waiting for his story...

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Cute version of asad zoya
Hmm they both have baggage
Interested to read what it is
Great writing!

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...parth...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#700

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y did u stop here BANOOO

Ughhh

Plz UPDATE Sooon 😭

u 😈