SS: The Nawab of Bhopal. Part 11 preview, pg 43!!! - Page 16

Oh Maryy!!! That was just gorgeous stuff!! I am SO SO sorry for not unreserving my comment for last update. I AM really sorry!
Okay, so now this one. Its so good! They are back to their cute little banters and bickering, juts like they were, back to square one. Nothing can and absolutely NOTHING can stop them from fighting with each other 😆
And they are "they" just like that! It just completes them, cute little babies! <3
I loved that nightmare part! Oh man! My poor baby! I can imagine him crying like that :'(( He had such a terrible childhood Sanam was SOO CUTE in that! Loved how she consoled Aww!! <3
And the Dilshad-Aahil part was so good! Loved that interaction.

The dresses part was just beautiful! How he was left stunned everytime she wears a dress Lol. Lovestruck he is! <3
And Anwar part hahaha 😆

Amazing update Mary!! Can't wait for the next one!! :D

Originally posted by: noor j

its amazing and whats really nice is that you are showing growth in Sanam, unlike the show where she kinds of moves on to the same point o, but here you are showing her falling in love in a much more realisable way, which is really good.

Thank you, that means a lot if I was able to show some progress. 😳

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

This was soo good!!! I loved it! Badi Ammi has a nice sense of humor lol The Anwar part was so funny XD cud imagine Sanam getting ready to fight Anwar poor guy lol but yes wud love to c that on the show! Anwar needs to pay for what he did! Aww Aahil and his nightmare! No matter what he does, I feel for him when he has his nightmares, seriously no one deserves that! I love how Sanam cared for n assured him! Its so touching! Would love to c him opening up to her about it later in the show when they reach that comfort level! Lmao sexually tensed bed ;) abhi se yeh haal so what will happen once they put the bed to better use ;) The shopping scene was cute too! Love their evolving relationship and super excited for Sahil and Arhi again in next part! Amazing update and plz update (or post a preview lol) soon :) :)

In my story he only admitted the child abuse. Child abuse victims cannot help but take it defensively. He won't be able to explain it emotionally because it is his hardest emotion. It is very hard for victims to raise that voice, especially against parents. Sorry, got serious.

Thanks for this review. I am glad you enjoyed it. They are cute!

Hey Mary! I FINALLY got a chance to read this. I was out of town the whole day yesterday, so didnt get to do any reading. Then busy when I got home! Bane of having two little kids. Then I updated my SS, coz I just had to! :) Hope you like it BTW!

Originally posted by: namrutha

Enjoyed reading it!! Badi ammi and Aahil conversations were interesting..but why didn't Aahil question Badi Ammi when she said Sanam is not safe? ..I wonder will Aahil ever know that his house once belonged to her.

Sanam wake up!! a man who loves to shop for his wife is a keeper 😃

By the way nice outfits, especially 2nd,3rd and 4th.

It's going to be so much fun to read Aahil's journey of figuring Sanam's inner feelings. Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Aahil was too lost talking and complaining about Sanam. I tried not to make him over analyze it because he doesn't know everything like we do. So it is a small detail to him that he misses.

Aww, my favorite is the first one. I wish I could own it! It costs like $1300.

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Aahil was too lost talking and complaining about Sanam. I tried not to make him over analyze it because he doesn't know everything like we do. So it is a small detail to him that he misses.

Aww, my favorite is the first one. I wish I could own it! It costs like $1300.

Originally posted by: namrutha

OMG!!

If at all I break the bank, the challenge will be to find an event worth wearing that to.

Agreed and Aahil bought it all for his wife. The fourth one actually has an obscene price tag.

i read this just now and it is awesome

I love the humour and constant back and forth of one upmanship.

very good going...continue soon..👍🏼