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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fantastic update

Asad got caught in his own game 😆

Sorry for short comment but a lil busy :(

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

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Chappi 17

I love tis ff more now😳..

Wen I read that update whr asad lie to zoya..I really wanted zoya to catch asad lie..n finally the d-day come..

Then why does Nisha and Google doesn't agree on it ?"

I love asad expressions wen zoya asked him abt the real meaning of that line😆..

"You know I tried to praise Nisha in German as she was wearing a red shirt but look what I got to know. She is laughing at me since an hour. This is really embarrassing for me." She told him in disbelief and he couldn't control the smile occurring on his face.

Omg she complimented the same line to nisha...bechari zoya🤣..

Zoya tk a wise decision to learn german nw..othrws..she vl miss asad's words..n intimate thnking towards her🤣..

Awww..he ws missing her badly that he wanted her to say the same...

Oho..mr.OCD ahmad khan jaag utha😆..bt its late nw..as 2 gals r already there in his bedroom..

Mrs saxena is f**king bitch yaar🤬..

I dnt knw wen u vl end all this torture on zoya..it mks me feel as if its a nvr ending thng fr her nw😒..

Oh grt..that guy abhimanyu used her physically on the name of love😡..very nice😡..

He adviced her to say NO to thngs and use her own brains..n she did that...he gt hyper ..jst bcz she used his wise advc on him only..such a basterd he ws😡🤬..

Thats y zoya dnt believe in love..she dnt trust man..bcz she witnessed only harressment torture insecurity n hate only frm men in her life..rite frm her befkuf father till nw..very sad yaar..hw cn someone so unlucky..bt exception are alwys there..

I vl kill that f**king bitch😡...nw wen zoya want to raise her voice against sumthng she dnt like..she wana play a game wid her doggie beta😡..

Ya allah..Ab ye aurat kya kregi...

Bubble plz try to end tis flashback asap..I alwys feel sad aftr reading the whole situation she went thru...I knw its the part of ur story..bt she she went thru a lot..😭

Nw I cn say ..m waiting fr nxt chappi..yeeeyyy..atlst...

U knw wat..ICH VERMISSTE MEINE KOMMENTARE AUF IHRE GESCHICHTE, ABER IETZT BIN ES REGELMBIG TUN...find out the MEANING nw..🤣

Love

SHREYA😉

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I m late again

Woww...awsum👏

Lovely update...

Skype part was very cute...

Zoya and asad teasing par was wonderful..😉

And the flashback...it was very sad..

Mrs saxena🤢

Want to knw how zoya came out of that horrible life..

Continue soon..

Thnx for pm

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

beautiful update loved it

thanx for the pm

update soon cant wait to read more

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Abi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

I just want to kill that bloody b**ch.

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Divya.S.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Liked the starting a lot.. So she is gonna learn the language in order to be aware of what he says.. 😃

but.. Don't like the flashback.. Just tell me that witch doesn't succeed in her plan..

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: aniha20
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It was cute and beautiful update bubba !!!
Finally zoya takes some step and asad is happy for that..

OMG !! Zoe in asad's place that too in his bed..haha he blurts what she were wearing? 😆

so asad family came into the frame and glad siblings have great bond..

Asya in skype is she does anything nonsence or romantic 😳

Lets see is she find any clue about zosad..

Continue soon

Thanks Aniha 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha yeah he is just missing her badly I guess 😆

haha it was about his german words as u know already ,,

no she won't 😊

updated already and sorry for late reply !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: sweety003
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ooohh I got update page after so many days😃
first of all Eid Mubarak bubble🤗

very cute,sweet n naughty update it was ...I was smiling like idiot all the while😉

loved asad's attitude ...how she is slowly opening up nicely penned😳

"What are you wearing ?" cracked me up🤣 ...hilarious

Finally you introduced his family ..dilshad is busy personality here 😲

come to guessing part its really difficult to tell what exactly she wants to talk may be she gotto know the meanings of his german words n gonna blast him🤣 or to talk about sunil,really can't wait to know🤔

love you bubble❤️😳

update soon 😛

haha congo for that Anusha 😳

Aww Khair Mubarak 🤗

Thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😊

haha yeah I guess he is missing her badly 😆

Yup she is !!

haha u guessed it right ,,

Love you tooo ❤️

and updated already !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
hmmm ich dich wala... is she going to talk to asad in german... i mean some words which she might hv learnt somehow there or using a translation book!! 😕 uff... vn r u updating mjhe aur nahi sonchna... 🥱... mera grey matter already scanty hai... aur soncha to zero level pe aajana hai...😭
so reham plz n update soon... 😊

haha u can read it now I updated already 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: BeYourself

hi Bubba...i missed you more
and where were you yesterday? 😡😭
yup..dad is fine now...and my mom had a small accident...and i wasn't well too...
but we all are doing great now 😃
yup..i will be regular again...😳🤗
yeah..i thought it was 6 chapters..but then i found out that it's 8 😲😆
but my intention was never to do that 🤔😆
and i am again going to reply to all your replies 😈🤣