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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely update...
a sad one ofcourse...
zoya backed off completely...
she blamed asad for all this just to hurt him so that he stays away from her...
i m feeling bad for asad ...
i guess there is a huge reason...
the flashback... i was feeling very dukhi while reading it...
Nishas mom... i hate her already... u were ryt more than i eva despised razia...
next part... m i going to hate that part... m having strong bad wale intutions... bad vibes coming...
plz dont make it that painful that i cry...


Thanks Aarzoo 😊
glad that you liked it !!
Yup she did but u know about her feelings soo deffo its not a mistake
yeah running away is always a bad decision I guess ,,
yup u r gonna hate that one or might be mee too ,,
OMG I am hell nervous to write it even 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

cruel!!!
this wasn't what i was expecting!!!
i am sad now...
n the fb made me sadder!!

continue soon


I know it didn't turn out to be how anyone expected ,,
but this is how the story is
Will deffo try updating sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kajenilious

Hiii frrt of sry fr nt cmntng n updates
actualy xms tnsn internals,xtrnals bla bla
Nd i may nt gve lngcmnts until august lst
nw cmng to d stry i jus lvd d way it was prgrsng
asad zoya spndng time togthr nd asads cnfsn in germny
oh nd d party whle scene was awsm xcpt lst scene
lvd d kises nd rmnce dat was beautiful hw dey want to b clse to ech thr
Nd obviously d f.b reveald nw nd v knw wat mite hapnd wit zoe tat nite
so dis was d reasn fr hr dark life
waitng fr ur update
cntnue soon nd p.m me pls pls


its ok buddy concentrate on ur studies 😳
yeah they r in love ,,
Thanks !!
I am glad that you liked it !!
yup she is probably having the worst past
Will deffo pm u ,,
r u in my buddy list ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: vyshu9

Oh my god...zoya with that old man.
Plz nooo.make her run away in ur next update


she can't run away from every place na
Thanks for commenting !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Wow...the kiss...it last very long n went too ahead than that...

Awww this prasad... I want to kill him...for interruption
As expects, zoya ruined everything...but I guess she has a reason for it...
But feeling bad for asad,
Feeling so bad for zoya, no one in her life was good to her for a while
Since she was in car, I was feeling. For worst
Hope you won't harm her to that level
By the way Congo for new thread


haha even Asad wants to kill him 😆
Yup and don't worry she will be fine ,,
yeah he didn't expect that
I will try my best to not make it much painful ,,
but this is how it is supposed to be
Thanks !!
and glad that you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


This is soo funny Maha 😆


Long time se pending
Bubblura is updating😳😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: maha2012

DJ nu bulwadooo😳
Bubbluraaa is updating😎
Twitter pe hai trending😳
Bubblura is updating😎
now that was a hott kiss☺️
both were lost in the moment n poured all their feelings in the kiss
but that ukp insaan prasad had to land up there😡 making zoya conscious n asad to move apart🥱
but then zoya's emotional outburst n declaring to asad that everything was a mistake😲
asad was abt to confess in English finally
zoya leaves from there crying😭
n then the flashback😲💔
Mrs.Saxena is the biggest bitch ever..worse than Razia😡
zoya trusted nisha's mother😭
but abt she cared abt was money😡
sending her to a 50 year old so he could satisfy his lust😡🥺
but it is a cruel reality of this world🤢😭
zohura got everything but lost her soul😭
i kinda knew that something like this is bound to happen but was shocked in this update😭
was disturbed after reading it😭 reminded me of asya in italy days💔
now presently zoya is helping nisha na despite the shit her mom did😲??
i hope asad's love cures our zohura😭
i want her to get married to asad n leave this cruel media😭
Mrs.Saxena n the budda ughh hope they burn in hell😡
bubblu u're an exceptional writer👏
and kitni dafa bataon that i love yah😡😳🤗

Mahuu😎


haha see I made sure that they enjoy the moment fully 😆
now its not my mistake that they ruined it later 🤔
everyone hates my poor Prasad --- why Mahuu why ?? he was just doing his job 😭😆
yeah but u know her feelings na soo it wasn't any mistake for sure 😉
well thats all people care about in today's world
Aww don't be sad everything is gonna be fine ,,
its a happy ending 😳
Yup Zoya is helping Nisha with her career ,,
haha everyone gets there punishment when right time comes 😊
Aww thanks !!
It means alot to me 🤗
haha love you tooo MAHUU ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: maha2012


Long time se pending
Bubblura is updating😳😛


Long time ?? I just updated two days back and today tooo 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
That kiss❤️ :)
That was..hot ;)
But the result was a hot mess. I know zoya has her own reasons for being this way which were about to unfold if you didn't end it here :/ but poor Asad he feels so sad and guilty about it. I feel him too ;(
That Buddha >:/
Update Soon!

Aliza❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


haha see I made sure that they enjoy the moment fully 😆
now its not my mistake that they ruined it later 🤔
everyone hates my poor Prasad --- why Mahuu why ?? he was just doing his job 😭😆
yeah but u know her feelings na soo it wasn't any mistake for sure 😉
well thats all people care about in today's world
Aww don't be sad everything is gonna be fine ,,
its a happy ending 😳
Yup Zoya is helping Nisha with her career ,,
haha everyone gets there punishment when right time comes 😊
Aww thanks !!
It means alot to me 🤗
haha love you tooo MAHUU ❤️


yeah they fully enjoyed☺️
bcz prasad is a khotaaa😡 kebab mein bone😡
i knw but jis tarah rashid got forgiveness in asya in italy.. it better not be the case here..plzz can Mrs. Saxena burn to death?😡 or can pigs eat the budda?😡
zoya shouldnt help nisha🥱
see i encourage writers with comments right?😳🤔 or am i bashing🥱
love u😳❤️

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