Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17 - Page 36

Originally posted by: treasure11

Really 3'Oclock??🤓

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As I said earlier it had to happen 😭...If not this thn something else terrible would have taken place but this is something very horrible!!!!!!!!!!!!!😒

But it was needed for the story

And hats of to Zohura facing it so strongly and emerged as a shinning starr

Now she had nothing else to loose and so she set out make something out of her life !!!!👏

Am more proud of her and so will be Asad 😳

Very well written Bubbaaa...you made me cry 👏

Nisha must have broken all ties with her mother na...

And she called him !!!!!!!!!

Loved it and Love ya 😳❤️

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Zoya 😭...
U made me cry on eid!!😭...
Poor Zoya!!
I jst want to kill dat Ibadat & Mrs.Saxsena!😡🤬...
Will Asad be able to knw her terrible past & make her come out of her shell??
I want Ibadat & Mrs.Saxsena punished 😡...
So she Finally called Asad!! 😊

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha the thing is that if u see the reality then u will realize that it wasn't possible for an uneducated girl with no background or family to become a superstar soo easily ,,

this is kinda harsh realities of life where I can't show a hero entering and saving her life !!

thousands of girls suffer from that !!

Aww plzz don't be soo upset I am already feeling demotivated to write the next update :(

Khair Mubarak !!

and will try my best to make it sooon !!

well I wasn't expecting any hero to save Zoya.
Zoya is educated in this FF.
Thats why I was expecting u to make Zoya act smart way & save herself from being r**ed.
I agree with u Iqra that many girls r faceing same problem,being forced&espically in India.


Anyway, Iz next chaprer is also dark one?

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Starting is sad...😔

Happy to know that zoya is thinking about giving asad a chance...😊

Waiting for nxt part eagerly so update soon...😃

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

nice update... nd horible past :( nd EID MUBARAK 2 U 2 ^_^

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha I was hell busy whole day and had to get rid of this part real sooon soo I just updated it 😆

Yup it was all in her fate but the positive thing is as u have noticed already that it made her strong overall ,,

Yup he will be deffo proud of her 😳

Aww thanks !!

It means alot to me ,,

did u really cry ??

well I am still undecided about Nisha's mom lets see whats in her fate 😉

Love you tooo ❤️

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 update

feeling very bad for zoya

omg zoya call asad excited for their talk

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: asyafreva

I definitely can't say a wonderful update cuz it was quite painful and horrifying but i'll definitely say beautifully written cuz i'm sure all of us felt the pain she must have gone through...!

Eid Mubarak to you too!!

And you better update soon...!!

Finally things will be fine soon cuz d ending was d best!!

Originally posted by: potternerd

Wow bubble great update...sad but great

That one incident changed zoya's life..her behaviour..attitude everything !!!!

Loved the way you wrote about her emotions and everything

Hate hate hate Saxena 😡

Aw man she feels Asad doesn't deserve her

Thank God Nisha is making her think straight !!

And yay She calls Asad 😃

At least the update ended with a happy note 😊

Hope you had a lovely Eid 😊

Originally posted by: sasir

I hate Mrs.saxenan ibadh shah

I am scared of this part only coz I can't take it

but I must say u made it less painful but still it is paining

y zoya thinks its her mistake

she is not at fault here

hope there are no more painful parts n I can njoy a lot of asya in future

I had a req

can u update any other story I mean is,TS,ss or ff in ur style where there is nok-jhok