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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Fari was this the first part of the last chapter??? Please don't do this yaar. I have always loved the story and now that it is ending, I feel sad.

Please update soon, will be waiting.

Loved the update seat.

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sanajunaid246

@sanajunaid246

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

loved the updte
whole date setting was awesome
n ayaan-zoya were funny 😆
asad is such a sweety 😳
over al loved it
hope so asad wil soon say those three magical words to zoya
thanxs for pm
updte soon

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Minahil Nauman

@Minahil96

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Love It!

Simply Amazing.

Ayyan / Zoya are hilarious.

Asad is adorable.

Bealted Eid Mubarak .. we all have been busy with roza's and eid :D So I can understand,

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

EEKS was so excited when I saw this part last night. But was too sleepy to comment then. It was as usual a wonderful read. And since it had a lingering anticipation of a confession from Asad, it had me excited more than usual. The scene when they're sleeping. When Asad's staring at her, mulling over his thoughts, the insight into them was so endearing and moving. Zoya's fleeting kiss was unexpected but got me emotional as to how Asad understood the uncertainty and hesitation in it without opening his eyes. How far have they come 😳

Imran's a great guy and the send off was really cute. Najma shall be missed

Ayaan and Zoya's banter is 😆 HILARIOUS. Didn't want it to end, but still wanted it to because I couldn't wait to read Asad's surprise.

The description of the farmhouse, the gazebo and Asad's gentleness, his tone and his gestures foreboding a confession. The words he said to her, about the Pizza OMG, I was like For him what makes her happy, makes him happy. AsYa in your FF are so so special.

Thanks for updating. Even though you've been so busy. Can't wait for the next. But you can take your time if you promise some amazing romance to us 😆 Thanks and tc 😊

Edited by Ankita.M - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Fari I am crying after reading this.
..Happiness ke tears. .

Bigger one after I wake up <3 <3

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

congratulations on the new thread.

fantastic update

Asad thoughts for zoya, their love, past, present and their future were beautifully written.

A surprise date at his farmhouse,his dream which is now realoty. its so romantic that he made zoya especial to show his dream project first.

He doesn't looked worried of zoya's visa, i think its issue is resolve.

can't ait to read beautiful confession of asad.

waiting for the next part eagerly

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Najma and Imraan leaving aswell as Ayaan and Zoya's conversation and interaction afterwards were a charming read.

Liberated Asad, is an enthralling read. He had the gazebo and pool constructed especially for the date - Remarkable! I liked the prearrangement of the entire dinner leading to his last dialogue. The release from his inner battles has been pure bliss in view of character development. - it's been nothing short of enchanting.

Highly anticipate the next chapter. Hope the update arrives soon.

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Fari, congrats on the new thread..
Loved the update, although sad there was no confession.
I'm sure when you do manage to write, you will give us a splendid ending
PS, still waiting for the Epilogue of Its Hard To Let You Go...