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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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my god this was d perfect end 2 d awesomest story👏

I loved this journey 2 d bits it was mind-blowing⭐️👏

what Heena said above its d same case wid me 😉

I also was a silent reader for a very long time & many time my comnts were not regular😳

I remember after 7 parts u took a break & i used 2 come back again & again 2 see if u updated

Sachi this story is very uniqui & i just loved❤️🤗

I m not good wid words so plz don't mind😆😳

& yes I want epilogue plz 1 proper closer wid happy Asya some romance & there babies or wid Khan family back 2gather

D updt was superb👏

Loved Zoya's tearful goodbyes 2 Ayaan & Dillu😭

Zaroon was a great great frnd so selfless👏

Zoya's letter was so touching❤️

& Asad's ILU at d airpot was a cherry on top

2 good it was👏

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Ressy messy Lionel Messi

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Fair Fars aakhir kaar u ended this FF

What abt ur SS which u were saying to start soon 😳

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Oh I think I know. I haven't been replying to comments lately 😳 *embarrassed*
Oh yes I hated Kashaf's father. I loved how she doesn't forgive him easily 😉
Humsafar's coming soon too 😃

Yes u gotcha now 👏 😆 toh kya socha hain agli bar reply nahi karne ka bahana 😡

Same here kahi zimeedari li nahi jab beti officer bani toh aa gaya muh utha ke 😡 🤬

Thats good quality that she didn;'t made suffer her mom n sisters when his father left 👏

Yup promo's r out Fair Fars 🥳

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Amulya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

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unres

omg last chap ...😭 how could u do this fari 😭😭..

this is one of my most most fav FF ..

only god know how many times i re read updates of this FF ...😳

im gonna miss this story alot ...

ur an amazing writer ...i love d way u narrate every minute emotion n tiny details abt the dress of zoe in this FF..

i love ur qubool hai mania n this STory d most ...im crazy fan of ur stories

coming 2 update ...

i always love the bonding ayaan n zoya share ..

asad confession in airport is lovely ...

aww zaroon ..cutie pie cancelled his seat n gave it 2 asad ...

im so happy fr asya..

i really want epilogue from u ...pleeejjj

coming 2 fav scenes of this beautifull FF ...they r so many

1.the scenes where asad comforts her whenever she gets nightmare ...beautifully wriiten

2.how zoe makes him play cricket in middle of nite wth kids...

3.the scene wher asad hugs zoya all nite n burns so much of money just 2 make her feel warm .. 4. the scene wher asad isolated himself on his fathers funeral anniv day n zoya comes 2 him n asya convo on that day ..i loved it so much n read countless times ..

n list goes on ..

zarooonnn...i love him so much ..zoya n zaroon r too much fun ...

i watched zgh ...n i understood y u love fawad ...mai bhi zaroon n fawad ki fan bangayi hoon

epilogueee pleeejjj n pls do write any OS on asya whenever u get time ...

im gonna miss u pms 🤗...do pm me me whenever u write on asya

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Maha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Firstly would want to apologize that i couldn't comment on the story as much..i remember reading quite a number of parts in a go when i commented in the beginning..then u didnt update as regularly..n i kinda turned into a silent reader cuz stupid uni schedules😔

But at last wanted to appreciate ur amazing writing skills n a beautiful story u wrote for us readers👍🏼👏
the entire journey of how AsYa fall in love after marriage..asad as usual emotionally challenged😆 zaroon junaid as zoya's best friend who secretly loves her😳 but the way he played cupid n made asad realized his feelings n possesiveness for zoya😳❤️

zoya reaching home..n indirectly saying goodbyes to all..
she decides to write a note for Asad..n informs zaroon that shes leaving for new york😒
zoya n zaroons friend "Maha"😎😛 (i love the name🤣)
the way u described zaroons pain when he found out zoyas getting married n in fact zoe never found out that zaroon loved her💔 he purposely never attended zoe's wedding
the driver hands over asad the envelope sent by zoya.. which had divorce papers..her wedding ring..n the beautiful note where she described how she fell for him😳😭
"What are you waiting for? Get the car started!" asad goes to the airport to stop zoe..
zaroon convinces zoe that asad loves her n she shouldnt leave
"This is all happening way too quickly. He loves you Zoe and I know for a fact that he would NEVER want you to leave thinking that he doesn't."

when zaroon stops zoya to tie shoelaces..i knew something was fishy😆

"ZOYAAA!" 😲😳
"I love you, Zoya.""I'm here to tell you that I love you. It's that simple and that complicated." 😭❤️
"I love you so much Zoya... and I can't let you leave India thinking that I don't. Because I do. I love you with every fiber of my being." ❤️
The entire confession was BEAUTIFUL👏😭
their long awaited kiss☺️ he slipped in the wedding ring on her finger😳
but zoya had to leave anyways as her visa expired
but zaroon cancels his tickets on the last moment..so asad can go with zoe
zoya n asad go to New York together on their new journey of love n zaroon will always be remembered for his selfless love n friendship❤️

so the letter was inspired frm pyaare e afzal😆 although i didnt watch the show but i had watched the end "Jaane woh kaise log the jinke pyaar ko pyaar mila"
plzzz plzz do write an epilogue😒 a Fantastic story indeed👍🏼 just loved it❤️
hope u write more stuff.. n wish u success in ur future endeavors😳

Maha

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Fair Fars aakhir kaar u ended this FF
What abt ur SS which u were saying to start soon 😳

Abhi tou koi khas plan nahi hai 😃 Dekhtay hain 😉

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Abhi tou koi khas plan nahi hai 😃 Dekhtay hain 😉

Yeh kya matbal hua Fair Fars ke khaas plan nahi hain lagta hain apne gifts nahi chahiye 😉 😆

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Fari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Yes u gotcha now 👏 😆 toh kya socha hain agli bar reply nahi karne ka bahana 😡
Same here kahi zimeedari li nahi jab beti officer bani toh aa gaya muh utha ke 😡 🤬
Thats good quality that she didn;'t made suffer her mom n sisters when his father left 👏
Yup promo's r out Fair Fars 🥳

Hawww mein bahanay tou nahi banati 😲 😆
And yes, I like how ZGH carries a meaningful message in addition to entertainment 😉
Humsafar bhi dekhna! Did you watch Behadd? 😃