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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Fari i know I need to reply but trust me It's gonna take a few more mins.. maybe hours now :p

Take all the time you need 😆

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: volatile

Hey Fari,

I know youre disappointed that Asad didnt get to confess in this chapter, so you are not satisfied with it, but trust me, for us, this update was more meaningful than you think.

From Asads little explanation about his changed behaviour and how he could finally relax around Zoya, to him finally finding his name in her palm...including little details make your story so poignant and beautiful.

And what can I say about Ayaan, Najma and Zoya? They are like a crazy bunch of siblings, all of them adored by Asad in their own way. I loved their interactions at the airport, and its looking like Imran is making his way into the crazy team!

Also, thanks for letting us know that its not only Asad who will be devastated if Zoya leaves, but Dilshaad and Ayaan also will be very hurt, cos Zoya has made her way into everyones heart. I dont think I have seen a cuter bhabhi devar combo than Mona and Raabert!

And the last scene...wow! AAK sure knows how to romance a girl! I love his last line to Zoya...and although I was sad the update ended there, the anticipation of the confession will keep me going till the next time you decide to make an appearance!

I have said it many times..but i will say it again. I luuurve your AsYa and I will miss them so much when your story ends. Your AsYa are one of those couples who make you believe in love and happy endings!

How do you do this yaar? I mean how? How can you make me feel good about every single update of mine? No wonder I love you so much ❤️ 😆

TBH, I absolutely adore writing the Ayaan, Najma, Zoya and Imran scenes. They are so light and most of the time just unimportant ramblings because friends and siblings do talk like that 😆

Yes Zoya will be leaving quite a lot of broken hearts if she left. Lets see what happens 😉 And Asad's confession is something everyone's waiting for and I'm nervous as hell about writing it 😆

I love you. Bas ❤️ 😃

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Take all the time you need 😆

I DONT WANT TO I'LL FORGET OTHERWISE.. 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

'Cause am getting SHIT BUSY from tomorrow 🥺

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

ho ho i am finally am getting to write the comment now.. ho ho ho 😈

Santa clause is coming tonight riding on a sleigh yeah!! 😆

YAYAYAYAYA someone I remember has UPDATED HOHOHOHO 😲 👏 👏

How lucky I am I read it as the first thing in the morning

And THIS UPDATE.. I though was gonna make me cry but fortunately I FELL ASLEEP AGAIN SMILING A BROAD ONE

HOE I LOVE THE PART THAT ASAD IS NO MORE IN DENIAL AND FREELY AND PROUDLY PROCLAIMS THAT HE LOVES ZOYA NOW

ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE FACT that he kept on admiring her while she was asleep on his chest.. << I LOVE SUCH SCENES SO MUCH ☺️

haiyee Asad found his name

😭 Zoya.. I feel sorry for her 😭

IMRAN 🤣 and the whole scene was so 🤣

Comic relief much much very much 😳

Especially when he says 'VALUE ME YAAR' 🤣 🤣 🤣

MABURT 🤣 🤣 🤣

How much i miss these two.. 😭 😭 😭🥺

The Date ❤️

Awaiting for the confession ❤️

THIS IS TRULY SUCH A BRILLIANT UPDATE.. Now take your timewa and then updatewa but haan in this thread only okay 🤣 😆😆

p.s. MADE IT 145 😉

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

p.p.s : I LOVED THE FACT THAT U ENDED THE CHAPTER MID WAY CAUSE I DONT WANT THIS FF TO EVER FINISHH NAAAHHIII *screams on the top of the lungs from the TV TOWER* 🤣

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

i have no complains abt the z update!!! it was awesome as always!

i dont knw y u seem to underestimate urself so much every time!😳

it was beautifully written...all the emotions were felt in each n everyscene, conversation...❤️

the setting for the date is like one of my dreams...so thnk u for that!

eager to read the next update!👍🏼

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Wonderful update Fari!! 😳

Loved it!! although I was anticipating the confession!

but you take your time!!

we will wait!!

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Lavina

@volatile

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

How do you do this yaar? I mean how? How can you make me feel good about every single update of mine? No wonder I love you so much ❤️ 😆

TBH, I absolutely adore writing the Ayaan, Najma, Zoya and Imran scenes. They are so light and most of the time just unimportant ramblings because friends and siblings do talk like that 😆

Yes Zoya will be leaving quite a lot of broken hearts if she left. Lets see what happens 😉 And Asad's confession is something everyone's waiting for and I'm nervous as hell about writing it
😆

I love you. Bas ❤️ 😃

Dont be nervous Fari, just write from your heart! I am sure the words that come will be great! You are such a fab writer, that even on a bad day, whatever you pen will be awesome! 😛

Sigh...all good writers are sometimes their worst critics...and you silly girl, are sooo guilty of that! 😕

Anyways, hope you get inspired by all the comments and start writing your ass off soon! 😉

And btw, thanks for the eidi! Better late than never right? 😆

Edited by volatile - 11 years ago