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Ayesha

@Aye12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

@vaishnavi31

Yep, i ABSOLUTELY MOST DEFINITELY LOOOVED IT!! :)))))))) Hee hee :))) Awww, you're such a sweetie pie and yes you always leave a HUGE, BIG, FAT, MAHOOSIVE smile on my face, so much that my cheeks start hurting :))) Actually that's not a bad idea, i don't mind reading everyday, hahahahahaha and you're sooo thoughtful :))) Awww don't worry i promise i'll be patient and will await your updates, thank youuu and you take care tooo :))) xoxoxoxoxoxo

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Omg!!!! This was damn cute, emotional and full of feelings.. <3 My heart is exploding by all the beautiful feelings I'm having after reading you story. :))

It was so heartwarming and beautiful. Most lf all it was heartfelt. :))

I laughed out loud by the: "Is my kurta a napkin?" 😆
Oh, I could easily see the scene in front of. Please, let there be a few of these in the upcoming/future episodes. <3 That would be perfect!

Also where they are saying goodnight to each other is EPIC! ^__^
Love! Love this OS! <3 You did a great job! :)

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126
This was such a thoughtful, well-written, and believably emotional piece. I actually found myself going back to read it a second time after I finished it once. I could almost see this scene taking place in my mind, you deserve so much credit for remaining true to the characters and plot. I would LOVE to see something like this actually happening in the show!
Please do PM me when you write something new (especially if it's on Sahil 😳)

Thank you sooo much! Read it a second time hm you must really like it😳

Once you can visualise it properly, I know I did something right😉 Awww thanks soo much, gawsh I'm blushing now☺️

You're too kind😳

Well I don't know about in the show but here, you will get some more sweet stuff on Sahil!

And just accept my buddy request na😆

Thanks🤗

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mahwash17
Omg!!!! This was damn cute, emotional and full of feelings.. <3 My heart is exploding by all the beautiful feelings I'm having after reading you story. :))

It was so heartwarming and beautiful. Most lf all it was heartfelt. :))

I laughed out loud by the: "Is my kurta a napkin?" 😆
Oh, I could easily see the scene in front of. Please, let there be a few of these in the upcoming/future episodes. <3 That would be perfect!

Also where they are saying goodnight to each other is EPIC! ^__^
Love! Love this OS! <3 You did a great job! :)

I tried to make it realistically heartwarming, Ahil and Sanam are some quite complicated characters, but so happy you guys loved it. Especially form your reply I can tell it was really warm but not too unbelievable😆

Thanks sooo much🤗

hahahahaaha Sanam is like a little bacha, wiping her nose on Ahil Abbu🤣

But yes we can only hope we see some intense scenes that end in something light and warm like this. Maybe better than this👍🏼

Where they say goodnight, its like saying good morning to a new day, a new life😲😲

Thanks again!❤️