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Posted: 11 years ago
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But I gotta.


Risque.


Getting me all turned on. All naughty and raunchy and RED SPICY HOT.


PROVOKED!


That was a real seductively steamy and overpoweringly arousing piece of work.


And can we just for a second talk about that chest.


Okay.



What was that?



I mean.


Yo.


Aaloo demanded mocktail... I think I need some iced cold water splashed on me...and still I don't think I'd get up from this stupor.



Raunchy raunchy raunchyyy!


Bartender.


That's all we need now.


Effing gorgeous bartender and yes. A sex on the beach. A bloody sex on the beach.


Sexy you say?



Some said to have water while reading.


And what was that...? breathe in breathe out?? What even.



I bloody collapsed after all that sand on the beach. Eh. I mean...



You know what I mean.


And stubble. What. What.




No.


I didn't get a good action.


I got a bloody Screaming Orgasm *italicised*



And for that alone Imma give him a special Angel's Tit.
But what about all the sex on my face? How do I return that?


*****




I don't recognise myself.


Praguu. Your next OS better Mountain Dew Me.


******




Can someone turn the A/C up a little.


Oh we're outdoors.



;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Farry! Okay, I was gonna include "Screaming Orgasm" too! But I guess its better this way! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Pragguu...

I can't breath. I repeat, I can't breath. I need someone who can perform CPR..

I NEED IT!

The beginning was so beautiful. It really set the atmosphere at where we were. ^__^

God! Aahil is making me hard to concentrate..
I mean bartender? A hot bartender. I already got lost by just reading those lines...,

Okay, I'm back now (I think ๐Ÿ˜†)

This line totally made me shudder:
"Sanam closed her eyes as soon as his light stubble made contact with her delicate skin between her shoulder and neck. She could feel the hair rise on the back side of her neck at his touch."

You're such a talented and beautiful writer. You have the knowledge to use the right words to add depth. And that's something I adore! <3

"Ugh Ameerzaada" - Epic line! Could totally picture her saying it when she's annoyed :D

"As they got back to senses they opened their eyes almost at the same time and stared into each other's with an equal fire, intensity, and desire. Their eyes were glistening with a new heat they were in now." - Omg, I can't breath!

What. Was. This. You're. The. Best! Does. This. Make. Any. Sense? Probably not, because there's a few commas missing.

.. Okay! Focus! .. ๐Ÿ˜†

Omg! This was damn HOT! I was blushing like mad but then I thought of Aahil and I lost it again. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

That chest! That smirk. That gaze of his. That STUBBLE! Grrr.. Making me restless... <3

This was beyond perfect! As always! <333

Praguu, my maniac - I love you so much and I love your incredible stories! <3
Edited by mahwash17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

UnRes'ED!

OH! OH! OH! OH! OH!

Kiss me hard before you go
Summertime sadness
I just wanted you to know
That, baby, you're the best

I got that summertime sadness,
S-s-summtertime, summertime sadness (madness) ;) ๐Ÿ˜†
Oh, I so love this song man! <3
I was actually gonna name it "Summertime Madness" ๐Ÿ˜†
YOU CALLED IT - Wild Caress!
I imagined it as "A SCREWDRIVER!"

Screwdriver?!! Ohkay! I seriously din't expect it would do THIS! ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you Julia!!! Thats another Cocktail! ๐Ÿ˜†
OH BABY! OH! OH! OH!
What was that ! Pragu!!!
I know not who the guy is on the show but boy oh boy! My lava melted and flowed for sure. I want this Aahil, two day old stubble,right here, right now, No boxers, just him hard and strong and drizzled and coated in beach sand. His thigh, his hamstring, his calf, His Biceps! Abs! CHEST! All brown mass of lust, tossed and rolled on white sand. On his knees first, then on his back and then on his fours doing his sweat breaking push ups.
OH GOD! HE SCREWED ME BAD!

It was all that I wanted โ˜บ๏ธ
Yes!!! Grr!! His stubble. His chest. Sweaty. CHEST! White Boxers. Bartender. Oh I am feeling it all over again. It made me sooo...wet! Damn you Aahil!!! โ˜บ๏ธ
I imagined it all just now, but I will shamelessly say "Who is this Sanam again?" He just was with me.

Oh yes! Sanam was just a "name" here ;) ๐Ÿ˜†
I did it all! Drank it all - "Good Action!, Great n Plenty! Nutty Indianman! Hot and Creamy!"
OH BABY! OH! OH! OH!
Damn those cocktails had me! Ugh.
#THAT CHEST#
Oh, that silky hair of his! Grrr!!
then Smooth chest again. And Abs!
Then came BOXERS! I realized we have our own brands but Aahil, White and Boxers always have our same intentions! I am so doing briefs next time. Or Commando! Even better no?
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Yes! Yes!! All that you said!! I want that..C word!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ And the brands, I thought all were "used", So. ๐Ÿ˜†
"Nuts and Berries" โ˜บ๏ธ
yes I read all the names of cocktails too but I was so very sated to quote, I am exhausted.โ˜บ๏ธ
Heaving heavily, breathing heavily. AND MY HEART BEATS ARE NOT IN RHYTHM!
Note to self - Never read Prags +16 content in the mornings and if you do, read it alone in a locked room.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oh god!! Stahp it girl!! That was such a sexy comment!! I am blushing now!! Thank you thank you THANK YOU JULES!! <33
Cheers! To the first and many more to follow!
Splendid it was Babe!
Love ya!
Juliet!


That was such a lovely comment!! Juliet! I can't thank you enough! I was like so turned all the while writing it ๐Ÿ˜† And have read it so many times. I swear I couldn't sleep last night, I am still yawning ๐Ÿ˜† Thank you so much for so much love towards me!!
Yes, others might come too!! I just need a good Cocktail ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you again! Love ya too!! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Res

Unres


Prags my hun bun!

This was SO hot! I loved the addition of the cocktail names ๐Ÿ˜ณ. I never, ever drink cocktails, but the names crack me up, and the way you used them just added to the heat of the story!

I was in a horrible mood last night and Farz told me to make sure I read this before bed. I am so glad she did that because it certainly put a smile on my face :-)

More... I want more.

You maniac, you โค๏ธ

๐Ÿค—Lotsa love
#18


Myhhrahh!! My choco pie! ๐Ÿค—
This maniac loves you too! <3
You're awesome! Thanks for leaving such lovely comments! Yes cocktails man! Who would have thought? ๐Ÿ˜† I got to know so many names, which I din't know before! It would never be the same again...๐Ÿ˜†
Farru is a darling!! She is the sweetest!! <3 Glad that she made sure you read it, and glad that it made you smile too!
More!! Yes me too...MORE!!! Ugh,
I love you.
Okay I gotta tell this man. I was actually wrote "Myhhrahh!!" once instead of "Sanammm!!" And then I was like..HUH?!! ๐Ÿคฃ Sorry man! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

But I gotta.


Risque.


Getting me all turned on. All naughty and raunchy and RED SPICY HOT.


PROVOKED!


That was a real seductively steamy and overpoweringly arousing piece of work.


And can we just for a second talk about that chest.


Okay.



What was that?



I mean.


Yo.


Aaloo demanded mocktail... I think I need some iced cold water splashed on me...and still I don't think I'd get up from this stupor.



Raunchy raunchy raunchyyy!


Bartender.


That's all we need now.


Effing gorgeous bartender and yes. A sex on the beach. A bloody sex on the beach.


Sexy you say?



Some said to have water while reading.


And what was that...? breathe in breathe out?? What even.



I bloody collapsed after all that sand on the beach. Eh. I mean...



You know what I mean.


And stubble. What. What.




No.


I didn't get a good action.


I got a bloody Screaming Orgasm *italicised*



And for that alone Imma give him a special Angel's Tit.
But what about all the sex on my face? How do I return that?


*****




I don't recognise myself.


Praguu. Your next OS better Mountain Dew Me.


******




Can someone turn the A/C up a little.


Oh we're outdoors.



;)



Farruu!! I am actually replying properly to you, now! You make me feel good. No serioulsy you do. Uh. I mean, you comments eh? ;)
Your comments are so that I look forward to. You make it all the more special. Thank you for all the love! I love you #4 <3
I am sure you did get your "A Bit Of Russian Honey" ;)
Yes bartender ARI. Ugh. In white. On beach sand. 50 Shakes Of ARI. I was gonna name his bar too! And this awesome idea Dhannu gave to me! ๐Ÿ˜†
THANK YOU MY MANIAC! I love you even more!! You're awesome!! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath


Myhhrahh!! My choco pie! ๐Ÿค—
This maniac loves you too! <3
You're awesome! Thanks for leaving such lovely comments! Yes cocktails man! Who would have thought? ๐Ÿ˜† I got to know so many names, which I din't know before! It would never be the same again...๐Ÿ˜†
Farru is a darling!! She is the sweetest!! <3 Glad that she made sure you read it, and glad that it made you smile too!
More!! Yes me too...MORE!!! Ugh,
I love you.
Okay I gotta tell this man. I was actually wrote "Myhhrahh!!" once instead of "Sanammm!!" And then I was like..HUH?!! ๐Ÿคฃ Sorry man! ๐Ÿ˜†


No, you're awesome! Seriously. You really are.

Eek, I know the names of cocktails, but they are bloody dangerous... They're all so yummy, it's like you're drinking soda, but then you have like three and stand up and then you swoon clutching your head. ๐Ÿ˜† Dangerous, deceitful, pretty little things.

Me? I'm a red wine or whiskey girl.

Write Myhhrahh!!!
Don't be sorry - I am sure Myhhrahh won't mind โ˜บ๏ธ

And yes... Farz is awesome! But she knows this already โค๏ธ
Edited by Tamara27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath



Dhannuu!! My awesome maniac! <3 I love you for all..that ๐Ÿ˜†
And first of all I am sorry, I haven't read your update, I was quite busy in this you know? ๐Ÿ˜† I needa had all my senses writing this cocktail mix ๐Ÿ˜† I'll be reading it tonight, and leave a long comment okay? :)
Now, thank you thank you thank youuu!!! You're a darling! You couldn't breathe. Good. Thats what I wanted ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes this crazy idea pf Cocktails, was sexyy! I was gonna name the bar too! And you gave an awesome name! 50 Shakes Of ARI ๐Ÿ˜† Wow! I am gonna edit that now! Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜†
I got to know so mannny names of cocktails, wish I could incorporate more ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes he is a Bartender man! Ugh. So hott!
Thank you so damn much for so much love! I love you! <3


Awww you named the bar 50 shades of ARI

Aahil is like sex on legs in this story, I mean literally SEX on legs.

I want that! I want him! I mean who doesn't?

Sexxxay, hotness, it's getting a bit hot in here can you tell?

I'd like some champagne and ice please or maybe a whiskey on the rocks? Double!

Or just every single cocktail made by the hot bartender himself ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath


That was such a lovely comment!! Juliet! I can't thank you enough! I was like so turned all the while writing it ๐Ÿ˜† And have read it so many times. I swear I couldn't sleep last night, I am still yawning ๐Ÿ˜† Thank you so much for so much love towards me!!
Yes, others might come too!! I just need a good Cocktail ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you again! Love ya too!! <3

Love the song too.
And all truth. Loved it every bit! Hugs!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
wowzers.
ive been away for, what, like a week?

and when i come back, i come back to this.

what even.

wow.

wow.

there will be a proper comment once i fix my brain.

it sort of melted on me here.

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