Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Pasya

@Pasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

what sunil doing there????
so short but its ok...
waiting for tomorrows long update...

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

chotu sa update...
but something is better than nothing... school mai bola tha be happy with wteva u get... so mai b happy...
lovely update...
flashback is awesome always...
for nisha's mom ---- Buri Nazar Waale Tera Muh Kaala...
i think i m gonna hate her equal to razia if not more...
so razia is going thru her bad tyms nowadays... but zoya is feeling bad fr humaira... wel she is the only good memory in the name of family...
ye saiqa ki shaadi kisse hui... kuch to gadbad hai yaha!!!
kon hai wo... i hope it has nothing to do with anything which vl interfere with zoyas happiness...
finally aamna saamna... asad n sunil...
may asad control his temper, n if not, thn may god bless sunils soul...
waiting for next part already...
p.s... mood kyu kharaab hai... mummy ne daanta kya????

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

wonderful update!!!

Im really happy abt razia and saiqa situation and the punishment they got! Good for them! 👍🏼...just a little sad for humeira!

how on earth did zoya dare bring sunil to the party?!😡😲

Poor Asad...its gonna be tough for him..already he is sad that zoya is leaving for 10 days!!!😒...

update soon! will be waiting!

Hope that ur mood gets better!😃

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

Nice update
Nisha mom character was something fishy
Razia suffering what she did to zoya but zoya was sad bc humeira suffer without any fault
Confused abt saiqa marriage
Zoya came to party with Sunil
May god bless him for asad
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

A short one though but good.

Why nisha's mom was giving her weird looks :s

Why she brought sunil there, now jelly asad will be treat to read.

My like button not working so count it .

Hope ur mood gets better :')

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Nia12345

@Nia12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

U won't believe me but my sister who don't read your stories know ur name because I can't stop telling them how great ur stories r wen I think u can't write a better story then the one ur wrote before u prove me wrong I just love ur WRITTING n think that actually I'm sure that life would of been boring without ur writing n am lucky to get as buddy like u

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Hey Bubble

I was getting to it so much and then it just ended lol...

Very well written chapter, felt bad for Humera

And Asad's reaction to Sunil 😆

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Awesome part!!
Zoya-Humeira met!!
Nisha's mom picked zohura!
Humeira & raziya suffering
... Why so suspense wid whom sadiqa got married?
Did something bad happened wid zohura after dat?
Asad waiting for Zoya!!
sunil too came wid her!!
i understand!!
Its ok!