ASYA UNITED WE STAND #4 PART 22 EPILOGUE PG 94 (31/8)

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Ibeauty

@Ibeauty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Congrats for your fourth thread.

Sad dilshad died .

After so many emotions finally asya's happy moments.

Asad going to new york again asya's separation.

Hope this separation make them confess their feelings and love for each other.

Loved the poem it was beautiful and she is brilliant to descripe full of story

just in single poem.👏

Enjoyed reading pls continue soon.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

congrats on the new thread...

wonderfull n amazing...

beautifully written...

asad is getting better...

asad n zoya are so cute...

asad is a very good painter n he receive a scholarship...

asad will have to go new york...

wonder wat will asad n zoya do now...

luv it...

fabulous...

mindblowing...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Tunailuvsahil

@Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

nice updt i really love it. cong u reached theard 4.now asad is fine😊but dilshad is no more i m really sad

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Beautifully written poem
Remind everything from start till now
Ur friend really a wonderful writer.
The way ur friend wrote, I thought I was reading an update
Plz thanks ur friend on my behalf & pass my good wishes
Thanks

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Amandeep

@aman1605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Congo Srashti🤗🥳

Waiting 4 the next part

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Awesome update
Dilshad was no more & both asya were heartbroken
Both came out of this sadness together
Asad wanted to do something for zoya
He felt guilty when he saw her tired
Zoya wanted to see what asad was painting, she was shocked to see asad work
He told her that she was looking very beautiful on their nikkah day
Azaad told asad to pursue his career with his brush & colours
His paintings was highly appreciated & he offered scholarship
Ur friend said right that seperation became lovers closer & they realise their feelings but I don't want in asya case but if it is for asad express his love than it's ok
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice Part.

Dilshad was no more thats so sad,its so bad seeing ASYA(KABHI) crying for her.

Asad(KSG) and Zoya happily living ,it was so nice.

Zoya wanted Asad(KSG) to be fit,it was so nice.

Asad(KSG) caring for Zoya when she feels tired,it was so nice.

Asad(KSG) said qubool hai to Zoya,it was very nicely explained.

Zoya was surprise to see Asad(KSG) painting talent,thats so nice.

Azad encouraged Asad(KSG) for painting,it was so nice.

Asad(KSG) painting exhibition part was so nice.

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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647704

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awesome update dear

Finally everything is normal..

But now asad is going to newyork

Continue soon

Sorry 4 short comment.. Net connection is very weak

Dont knw post hoga bhi ke nahi

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Congrats on new thread

Oh no u r separating asya but as they say absence make the heart grow fonder

So asad an artist so nice a scholarship in NY

Love asya moments they r beautiful but they r not moving forward they r stuck

He can't live without zoya but he need her but he don't know if he loves her yet

So the time for them is almost lapsing to 4 yrs

So I guess he will go away for abt 1 yr

I guess dilshad didn't die bcuz tht has to be the woman he was talking to

He wants to take care of zoya now so she don't have to work anymore

Love their qubool hai bit 😊

Continue soon

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Simran

@-Jugni-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Another amazing update :D
So asya have not yet consummated their marriage even after Asad is normal but the sexual tension ks on between them.
The way you started made me think something else only.LOL
Asad felt guilty for letting Zoya stress herself so much.
Azaad suggested him to use his talent as his earning source and a New York based company has asked him to come there.
Lets see what happens.
Thanks for the PM