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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

No moving on Only AsYa...😡

Haider and chutki hi ache lagte hai... 😡

No couple except AsYa.. Yeh hume Qubool nahi hai 🥺

P.s : the moment I played 93.5FM this song was played so I heard ot throught out while reading the update



thank you niya...

in real life u got to move on...

let see... though...

really the song played on... that is really nice
Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu


That was amzng updt
I knew that zoya also had to hv sum feelings for asad..
Dono sch mein dumbheads hai...
Teek se pyar k izhaar karna bhi nai pata...

Haider.,.. I dnt knw I like him r hate him..

He said he ll help her to move on... With HIM !!!??

Hell nooo...

''LOVE..
He said it will happen in time... I wish I could scream at him... that I love him already...''. I wish the same ...

Continue soon






thank you gowtu..

haider is not to be blamed... it is the dumdasses... who cant spell it out...😉😉

let see...
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Posted: 11 years ago

I know I am suppose to reply... will do soon.. hopefully... Thank you so much for all the love and support for this story of mine...

Part 8/last part:

Farooqi House:

The morning dawned, both the family assembled and were expecting reply from their children, haider and zoya came in front of them..

G: so... what is ur decision..

H: uncle... don't u think u r in hurry... we both are just 24...

HF: when miyaa and biwi razi.. kya kaarega qazi( ssrj)

H: who abbu we both are still young...

R: what is matter beta.. is there anything wrong...

H: who... Actually..

Z: ammi.. there is nothing wrong... U go ahead with preparation...

H: zoyaaa...

G: beta... do u have problem with this alliance.. u can tell us...

H: no uncle nothing like that.. I am getting my bestie as my partner... but..

G: zoyaa..do u..

Z: no abbu... I know u will do the best for me...

R: thank u.. dear... i was scared for a moment... God keep u both happy... and she blessed...

As the elders discussed within themselves, haider pulled zoya to her room, and closed behind them..

H: what r u doing..

Z: what..

H: I am getting u some time... to decide.. but u acting in a rush...

Z: haider...

H: don't haider me...

Z: ok.. what do u want me to do..

H: tell asad that u love him..very simple...

Z: that simple.. really..

H: ok.. I will talk with him...then..

Z: No...

H: but why...

Z: if he felt something for me.. he would have told me. When I went to him and informed about it.. but he just advised me... so I don't think there is anything there... and it was my mistake to dream about something which was never in my destiny...

H: but.. wont u feel bad not knowing...what he felt for you..

Z: some story are bound to be uncompleted... what he thinks bad about me...

H: zoya..

Z: just be my bestie... now.. and help me move on... did u saw how happy our parents were... our elders know what is best for us.. don't u think...

H: may be...

Z: I know my heart is broken... but I don't want to break their heart too.. saying NO..

H: hmm..

Z: after all I am getting my bestie as my partner... and tears rolled down her eyes..

Haider hugged her.. and she cried over her lost love in his arms... and he held her in arms...

After sometime...

H: this is not right... I am going to speak to asad..

Z: no.. I want this to stay just between us... u wont ...please...

H: but there is a possibility that he too felt something for u.. but didn't say anything.. in the given circumstances..

Z: then we are not destined for each other...

H: zoya..

Z: I am so sorry..for u too.. that u r struck with me... I felt I am not doing the right thing with you...

H: zoya... u r bestie...i will be there for u always...

Z: but.

H: I will wait for u.. buddy.. u know time is the best healer... don't worry about me.. god knows when I will starting seeing as my would be.. u r my bestie for life.. and I will be the shoulder to lean on...

Z: thank you..

H: now dry ur tears.. we don't want our parents to think anything wrong..

Z: ok..

Both of them came down, and family informed that they will have a simple and small wedding with family and friends... and the wedding will be 10 days.. as these 2 of have only 15 days leave..a simple wedding card was selected the same and printed ..

5 days before wedding:

Asad house:

Haider came inside the house, with asad and najma sitting in the hall.

N: come in..

H: me and zoya are getting married.. I am here to invite for wedding..

N: congrats... in 5 days.. i.e quick...

H: parents want a simple wedding.. so..

N: so u were in love with zoya..

H: not exactly.. she is my bestie for life.. when parents came up with that proposal..i didn't find any reason to say NO.. he explained looking at asad.. and waited for his reactions..

A: congrats haider.. and he took haider for a hug...

A: u r lucky to have zoya as ur partner...

H: thank you.. do attend the wedding...

A: yeah sure...

Haider came out the house confused, he almost wanted to confess to asad.. but asad face it didn't show any sadness.. and he was actually happy for them...was it all one sided from zoya...

Inside:

N: how u can u be happy asad..

A: why shouldn't i..

N: the person with whom u wanted to spend the rest of life is getting married to someone else...

A: she is getting married to a wonderful person appi.. who will keep her happy... so I am happy for her... I don't want my sadness to affect them...

Haider informed zoya that he has invited asad...so zoya decided to call him...

Z: hello..

A: congrats... haider is a lucky guy...

Z: thank you...

A: all the best.. for ur new journey...

Z: thank you..

Someone called zoya, and she ended the call with a heavy heart.. and so did asad... one thing both of them realized that they are should not be in touch with each other.. like the past.. as the life has taken a new mode... only the distance will help them move on..

A day before wedding:

Z: thank u for coming alia...

A: when u called me.. how can I say no...

Z: come inside..and she introduced her to the family members.. and they settled in zoya room..

Al: haider is one lucky guy..

Z: thank you..

Al: u r welcome...

Z: alia.. why don't u tell asad how u feel about him..

Al: zoya..

Z: I know what u feel for him... Ur status in still single... time and tide wait for none.. why don't u just confess,..

Al: scared if he rejects me...

Z: why..

Al: I don't know...( alia knows what asad feels for zoya... she was surprised when she came know zoya is marrying haider...she didn't want to tell the truth now, and assumed zoya and haider love each other)

Z: now u r here.. u should tell him..will you...

Al: I will try..

Z: I don't want u regret u in the future...

Wedding day:

The wedding was taking place in farooqi house.. a small family function...asad came and wished haider and he stood at one corner..

Alia along with humi brought zoya down... and zoya was sitted... and zoya nudged alia at asad directions.. asad was standing at the each of the screen.. away and at the center.. alia went and stood him..

Al: hai..

A: u didn't come home.. u came here straight.. now zoya is ur bestie...

Al: hey.. she is getting married.. she is priority..

A: when r u getting married...

Al: when u say yes...

A: alia..(asad knows alia is in love with him for a long time. He came to know through his friends.. but he never said anything at the time...)

Al: I know asad...that u don't love me... that u love someone... but...when that person in not in ur life anymore..

A: I need time alia...

Al: I know... I will wait..

A: I know that too...how come u r saying all this now..

Al: zoya asked me to confess..

A: hmm...

She stood next to him.. hoping with time.. he will say yes.. as zoya turned and looked at her she showed a thumbs up sign.. and zoya smiled...

She didn't get her love... but was happy herlove is in the company of a person who loved him..

When the qazi asked haider for his acceptance.. he looked at zoya through the screen.. and she nodded... And then he gave the consent... and then zoya gave her uttering qubool hai...

Love is not just being married to the person u love.. but also want the person loved to be happy and loved too...

Though their love never reached their destination.. they were happy they fell in love... and also happy that their love is safe and happy in the care of someone who loved them... they went to lead a happy life with their respective partners... when they prayed... a dua went up for the wellbeing of their first love...always...

End of a Kind..

I know most of u r not happy with the ending... but I have to justify the title I gave... It was "an Affair to remember..."

Not happy at all...

let me quote SRK.. picture abhi bakki hai mera dost... scroll down to the next post...only after hitting a like here...


Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I did hint in my note about.. every coin having two sides.. I meant this I want to explore the ending...one more ending to this story. Ofcourse the happy ending...

Prologue again:

Present:

The thud of the window brought him to present.. and he looked at the wedding card to see..

Zoya farroqi weds asad ahmed khan.. his face beamed... the heart the happiness... and joy...

Actually I kind of like the first end... so I let you decide

... Give 120+ likes..😉


then I will start writing this side of the coin...

To give u a idea of what to expect...

Teaser:

As they parted outside the coffee shop.. zoya hugged him one last time.. asad held her one last time... as she moved, asad pulled her back... and held her infront of him.. and his hands automatically cupped her cheeks.. and looked at the eyes.. the eyes spoke.. and his lips moved forward..very slowly.. and her lips came forward. And brushed his lips... and tears flowed... and she crashed on him... and he crushed her in his arms...never letting her go...!!!!!!!!!

I am not sure of whether I am going to write this side of the coin...

So here goes the vote of thanks:

To silent readers... for reading it...

To readers who leave their like... thank you ur acknowledging ur like.. and letting me know..

To my lovely readers who leave ur their comments and feedbacks.. and encouraging me to write this story...

Thank you so much... bcoz of ur ideas and feedbacks I was able to shape up this story..

Love

kalyani

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love the update
Oh zoya zoya zoya u were in love and know u were in love from the very start
Y y didn't u speak up u r a fighter u don't go down quietly
At least u would have know u tried
Can't wait to see how u will get them together
Is it gonna be all movie like and dramatic like he comes to her wedding and she can't stop crying seeing him and so forth 😆
Oh poor poor zoya and asad they both love each other so immensely and no one speak up
So haider is a great friend he loves her as a friend or more
He will help her get over her first love not possible first love never dies
Oh he was ready to go talk to asad but she stopped him
Oh can't wait for more just a quick question is their age 22-26 presently or 4 yrs back
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww ! ❤️ even though it wasnt a happy ending, it was a realistic one ! 😳 i'm glad u wrote this beautiful story and i would love to read the epilogue ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok very sadden when I found chapter 8
Not what I expected so u did not unite them
Zoha married
Asad attended u brought Alia for asad no
He knows Alia loves him he never reciprocate
Alia knows he loves zoya but she thinks zoha loves each other
Oh so complicated
Oh u answered the age question
I scrolled down I saw nothing 😭😭😭
Oh sorry just found it
I am not mad at ur first ending but I am a love struck romantic crazy lady and for me love have to conquer all
I understand u wanting to see the person u love happy but how can they be happy if they can't be with you the person they love
I
And I believe parents would want to see their children happy don't matter what
I would love to see the other side to the coin
The ending I was dreaming about asya together forever
So come on people 120 likes loves do people plz
Edited by anopama - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kalyani to be honest I am not happy with the update but happy its not the endding.
Just hopeing U to get 120+ likes
And I love the way u blackmail. Its kinda cute.
Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this was such a sad ending😭
aliya proposes to asad upon zoyas encouragement
zoya n neither asad couldnt confess to each other😭
but again it happens in real life too where some ppl who love each other cant get together😒
and when i read the note😲
im glad there's another ending to the story!
looking forward..

Maha
Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful message conveyed
But I didn't like the idea of Haider marrying Zoya...
Will be waiting for the other happy ending which I guess AsYa are united!
Thanks for the pm😉

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