New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Now don't tell me they r going die 😭 plz keep them alive n suparb update plz continue soon n plz buddy me 😳

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

Omg!...full on action...

Super excited...

Brilliant narration...
I thought you can portray emotions well...but the action...wow..good job

Ayans part n zoyas anger was awesome...

But ways it at the end...they died or what...

Don't kill them yaar...

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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

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Fabulous Update Rada

Hope both Asad&Zoya will be fine

Continue Soon

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

OMG...

what an update yr...

loved it...

asa ayan banged on...

love zoya's action...

hope akram didnt hurt asya...

plzzz pm me for nxt part...

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arpita14godara

@arpita14godara

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#885

hi finally you update. thankyou so much for powerpack update.thanks for pm. so lets talk about update i dont thing last gunshort asad par tha.i think ya akram par tha at least indian police ko itna tho creadit milna chahiya am i right??????? so bye plz iss bar update karna bulna mat.

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

cliffy

awesome

u portrayed emotions beautifully

emotional

loved it

i have faith in u that u wont let anything happen to asya

plz update soon

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

very heart breaking part it was Rada

Akram made her propose him🤢🤢🤢

Zoe is still stupid not got any maturity

she didn't thought that Humi was not present there, just like he fooled her 2 bring in d factory he again fooled her so that she agrees 2 marry him.He's smart villian actually & Zoe is dumb heroine.😉 Btw this is funny cuz she was far better & talented in d work level i m saying in context wid how she was excellent & better than Akram when he worked in DC.😉

She was ahead him there & he's ahead here. Equal equal😆

Suraj man is useless🤣 this shows d pathetic state of Indian security he was doing everything so slowly like Akarm will keep d phone on so that he can track him.😆 1st he lost Asad's phone's signal😆 than Zoe's😆 & than also Asad gave him clue 2 look 4 abondened factory & he traced according 2 that😆. I feel more than Suraj Asad would have been brilliant agent🤣

D reason why Zoe didn't threw d sim was that video otherwise she would have cuz in this updt in fb she was feeling that it can't b Asad but still did as told😲

Ayaan was under veil it was so funny😆😆

Ayaan's idea impressed Asad & he became happy that he's getting married 2 humi, it was funny they were connecting in such tough time.😆

& another stupid move by Zoe she was so blinded by emotions that she left Akram & his man there while she & Asad was busy kissing😆😆

so both r shot i know happy ending hai & u said u r sadistic writer😆 but iska matlab ye zaruri hai 2 make Asya get so brutally injured😭 & a trip 2 heaven & back.😆

I'll leave you to rot behind bars for the rest of your pathetic life. So now, give me Zoya.

Btw i m thinking 1 thing why putting behind bars is considered such a gr8 punishment😆🤔, Asad wanted 2 put Akram behind bars 4 all d pain & tortre he fed them 2, Being in jail is not too big punishment thoda toh beating honi chahiye Akram ki by Asad😆. But i get it u didn't wrote that cuz Asad was not in that state 2 beat him right.😉

This was totally filmy part Rada but very nicely penned👏😆

PS- & yes 1 last line i feel Zoya truly matured in emotional level from part 1 till now but in matters of mind she's still immature 😆😆

some awesome lines😛

Asad never begged anyone, but today, he was ready to give his soul to save her👏👏👏

-you broke my nose, you broke my nose, you are totally insane, he said in panick.🤣 🤣

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

omg wow you updated

superb part

asad is able to save zoya gr8

omg zoya is superb

shit akram shoot asad came in between

i hope asya are both fine

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

Stunning update. Wow. Kya action, Kya emotion.loved it.

I hope they will b fine.

N plz update sooner n don't take so much time.

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#890

omg omg omg omg omg

ye kia tha rada...

update ya rollercoaster

they met finally but wht was tht happened at the end...😭

i want them alive n together plz

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