SS: Summer Camp - Chapter 10 Pg 102 (Complete) - Page 73

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

beautifuly written...

luv it...

asad n zoya went back to their houses...

zoya told everything to gaffur n razia n they approve the relationship between n asad n zoya...

zoya came n surprise asad on his birthday...

beautifully written...

razia gaffur dilshad n razia agree about their relationship...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: p_s05

A charming update! - Absolutely loved it, the parents were also amazing.

Life sometimes gets in the way, I may not do justice with a descriptive comment so I would just quote what I adored:

Part A

"Asad kept to his word he held Zoya so close it was impossible to tell if there were two bodies or one..."

"They finally made it to the hill top and sat down, Asad looked out into the open and all that he could see was darkness, there were small pockets of lights scattered indicating that there were small communities residing down below but other than that there was nothing 'Zoya...what are we doing here...I can just about see my own hands'. Zoya pulled out the torch and switched it on 'there now you can see your hands and my face' Asad chuckled 'ok...but you still haven't told me what we are doing here'.

Keeping the torch held in one hand Zoya shuffled closer to him and then for the first time initiated a kiss, Asad placed his hand on her back and pushed her that much closer to continue kissing her back 'because you wanted to kiss me' he said against her lips Zoya started laughing 'no...well yes but that's not the only reason...this was the place when I realised what it is I felt for you, the place where we met that man that I believe came because I asked Allah for guidance...this is the place where we came together as one...and if this is our last night together then where better to spend it...and sitting here looking out to what is nothing but darkness, that is where the sun will rise from and I want to see the sun rise with you...I want to remember this night and the morning to come forever Asad'

Asad cupped her face 'did I ever tell you how much I love you' 'no...I don't think you have' she said with a twinkle in her eye 'well then it's about time I did' 'I agree'. Asad held her face close to his and then slowly moved forwards making Zoya lie back on the cool grass beneath. Asad positioned himself so he was comfortably lying next to her and then kissed her tenderly, as their kiss deepened Zoya rolled him over and lay on top of him making sure that their lips never parted.

Asad lay with his arm out letting Zoya rest her head against it. 'The minute you get back home, you tell your parents about us...' 'I will, and even I don't my sister will make sure I do...well at least the majority of our next academic year matches...so I can come to see you over Christmas and you can come over Easter' 'And then I can come to your graduation'.

Staring into the night sky that was filled with the most shiniest stars Asad and Zoya talked until the first ray of the sun finally rose. Siting up hand in hand they watch the sun in all its glory light up the sky and give beauty to the valley around them, they had never witnessed anything of its kind, they were left totally mesmerised by Allah's natural creations.

As they stood up they looked deep into each other's eyes, Zoya placed her hand over his heart 'this is mine...and will forever remain' Asad placed his hand over hers and then put it against her own chest 'and this is mine...I love you Zoya' Zoya kissed him one last time before they went back to camp."

"Asad turned around and cupped her face 'you ok?' Zoya shook her head 'don't go...please' she said as she tried to stop herself from crying 'I am not going anywhere Zoya...I will see you soon...promise, you look after yourself and remember I want a call a text every single day...I love you' at this moment in time Asad didn't really care who was looking he moved forwards and placed a soft kiss against her lips causing a lot of whistling and clapping in the back ground. Zoya started laughing through her tears 'I love you too' she said before she kissed him again 'now go...before I make you run way with me' Asad winked at her and ran towards his coach."

Part B

"Zoya looked into his eyes and felt her stomach churn 'Abu...I...at camp...I mean...' Ghaffur walked towards her, he looked at Humera who understood that she needed to move away. When she did Ghaffur took her shaking hands into his 'Zoya, you have never hesitated in saying anything to us beta...is something wrong, did something happen' 'no...no Abu...nothing is wrong...I'm sorry I just don't know how to tell you'.

Razia looked deep into her daughters eyes as she stood in front of her Abu, she came to recognise the reason behind her hesitation. Razia smiled to herself before she got up and joined them. She placed her hand around Zoya's shoulder 'Ghaffur, I think what your princess is trying to say is that she thinks she has found her prince...am I right Zoya?' Zoya held her breath and turned towards Razia, Razia saw her face starting to turn the faintest of colours 'Ammi...I' 'is that true Zoya...what Razia just said?' Zoya closed her eyes before she looked back at her Abu 'y...yes'.

Everyone stood silent for a few seconds, but for Zoya those seconds of silence felt like a life time. Razia and Ghaffur looked at one another and secretly conveyed a message that they both seemed to have understood. Ghaffur cupped Zoya's face 'don't look so scared beta...will you not tell us who he is?' Zoya smiled as her eyes filled up with tears, she couldn't discibe the relief that washed over her as Ghaffur kissed her forehead and hugged her dearly.

'Ya Allah...I can't believe it...Zoya you really found someone...if anything I thought it would be Humera coming back proclaiming to be head over heels in love' Zoya started laughing as she saw Humera put her hands on her hips and pout 'Ammi...you might just want to turn around and ask her' Razia looked at her wide eyed and then turned around 'you too...what kind of a summer camp was this...wahan enjoy karne ge the ya date karne'. All four of them started laughing and then stood hugging one another."

"Asad walked into his room the minute he opened the door he stopped, he started to look around as if he could sense her presence. Zoya hid behind the curtain holding her mouth making sure that she didn't let a peak out. Asad closed the behind him, he took of his top and walked in to the bathroom. Zoya was left burning red firstly because she had been holding her breath, then she was trying to control her urge of rushing out to hug him and to top it he stood there in all his glory.

Asad kept washing his face with cold water, something inside him kept twisting, he looked up into the mirror and let out a gasp, he quickly turned around but there was no one there 'stop going mad Asad, she is not here' he said to himself.

Asad came out the bathroom and walked towards his cupboard to get a clean top out when he closed the door he saw her standing right there before him. Shaking his head a little he walked off. Zoya looked at him not believing he had just seen her and walked away 'unbelievable you're going on to become a neurosurgeon...you need your own head examined...talk about hallucinating' Zoya started laughing at him as he continued to talk to himself.

Zoya walked around him so the minute he turned around she was standing right in front of him again I am not a hallucination Asad...it's me...Zoya' Asad looked at her ' oh man...this is bad, I can't believe I am talking to a figment of my imagination...really you are here...in Delhi, in my house, in my room?' He said to what he though was an imaginary Zoya '...seriously Asad get some help' Asad was about to walk off when Zoya held her arm out, she tried to supress her laughter 'I am here in Delhi, in your house, in your room...I am real' Asad sucked in a breath he felt a cold wash over him, slowly picking his hand up he went to poke her but then stopped 'if you are real...then kiss me' Zoya looked at him with her mouth wide open 'Asad' 'if you are real, kiss me' he repeated. Thinking he had lost his mind Zoya started to step forward, with every step she took towards him he took one back until he hit the cupboard behind him.

As Zoya tip toed up and closed the gap between them Asad closed his eyes. Smiling at his child like face Zoya placed her lips onto his and kissed him softly. In an instant Asad opened his eyes Zoya started laughing and stepped back seeing his face, he stood there in total shock. Zoya turned around to run off when he caught her hand and pulled her back. Zoya fell against him making them both back on the bed 'I can't believe it is you...you are really here...' Zoya cupped the side of his face 'yes I am...am really here...' Asad didn't waste any more time thinking how, why and when he dived straight in and claimed her lips and kept them locked with his for as long as he could.

Zoya explained everything that happened from the moment she told her parents to the moment that Humera made her hide in his room 'this is unbelievable...so this is the surprise present Ammi was talking about...and those...I mean it's your parents that I just met downstairs?' 'Yes...come on they are all waiting for us' Asad and Zoya came out hand in hand, their smiles mirrored those of their parents who were waiting for them at the bottom of the stairs. As they hugged one another Asad heard his name being shouted out, Humera came running towards him and hugged him almost making him fall back 'I have to apologise for my daughter Dilshad, she sometimes forgets how old she is'."

I felt their pain or rather Zoya's when they were scandalized by their parents.