SS: Summer Camp - Chapter 10 Pg 102 (Complete)

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Aww.. dat was soo cute..
lovd d last scene. !! :)
Ty for d pm..:*

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Wow Saima you brightened up my Sunday 😊

It's been pouring crazy here in Mumbai😕

Update was so lovely

Enjoyed reading

Love how asad always comes to know what's going on in zoya's mind

And omg he already told his parents...super😃

They kissed omg they finally kissed yay

Super cute 😳

Just realised this is a SS and not FF

Anyhoo continue soon please 😃

Can't wait 😉

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Saima, I loved the update.. Dr Khan is so loving and sweet and adorable.. Can't believe he told his parents already about Zoya.. Can't wait for each of them to meet the parents..

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

wow wonderful update

there is adventure,romance and finally kiss... loved it Saima!

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Loved it sis. Their little time together in his room was so sweet. Asad is so sweet to have doubled up with her for horse riding. That must have been so romantic

And the time at the farm picking fruits was so much fun. But the beat was their kiss. Sigh ☺️ so romantic and so hot.

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Avie

@Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Saima Di,🤗

That was a fabulous update as usual.. I am out of words now..😃😳

Asad already talked to his parents..😎

Horse-riding together..😳☺️

Their first kiss... Awesome..☺️

Do update soon..😊

Love!❤️

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Awesome update!
Loved it to the coree!!
Really loved asya part
It was just mind blowing starting from the hug till the time he confessed
I'm sooo happy that they both confessed!!
They kissed wow I'm still in a shock
Love the horse riding part as well
Beautifully written
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Awesome update!!
Loved it!!
AsYa confessed!!
Asad's parents knw abt dem & wang to meet Zoya!!
Its was superb Aapu!!

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

A charming chapter.

Here's what I loved:

'the next five days will be the best five days of our lives, I will make them perfect'.

"...oh but before I go...can I use your phone'

I thought she was going to take a picture of him. ☺️ 😆

'never...I never want you to let go' ❤️

"Zoya smiled 'I guess...but I will need to talk to my parents, I will need their approval' 'will they approve of us?' 'I am sure they will...what about your parents?' 'They already have' Zoya gulped and looked at him 'You...you have already told them' she said in disbelief 'yes I have, I never hide anything from them'."

I found that amazing, when a guy says that, gives you insight into his personality.

'No, ok maybe just a little to me anyway'

"After a few minutes Zoya started to feel bad 'Asad, I am ready to come down now' 'you sure, I don't mind honestly' 'I know but that's enough...I do actually want to eat some of this as well'. Asad looked back to see if he could see David to help him but they had all dispersed 'ok you ready...give me your hands and when I bow down a little jump off' Zoya did as he said but only a little too soon making him lose his balance and fall forward. Zoya came crashing down and Asad fell on top of her 'owww, that hurt' she said holding the back of her head. 'Let me see' Asad placed his hand underneath her head and rubbed it 'you'll live, just a little bump' 'thank you doctor Khan'.

Asad lay on top of her and continued to lose himself in her gaze that seemed to pierce straight through him. Zoya's smile started to fade as she found herself drowning in his essence, she closed her eyes as he inched forwards 'Zoya...look at me' he whispered, his warm sweet breath started creating a whirlwind of raw emotions. Zoya opened her eyes, Asad searched for the permission he was looking for but couldn't bring himself to ask her verbally. It was when Zoya put her hand around his neck and pulled him a little closer did he know that she was ok with this too.

Asad placed his lips over hers and kissed her softly, Zoya closed her eyes again as he continued with his sweet onslaught. It wasn't long before she started to kiss him back, their sweet little first kiss soon became a long passionate embrace. Both of them were left totally breathless as they pulled apart, Asad rested his forehead against hers I love you' he said.

As soon as Zoya heard those three words she felt a tear escape from the corner of her eye, Asad place his hand beneath it catching it 'Zoya...I'm sorry' he said feeling as if he may have said it too soon Zoya shook her head 'no...please...don't be...these tears are ones of happiness Asad...thank you for everything...I love you too' Asad couldn't stop smiling, he hugged her tightly and rolled over making her lie on top of him. Zoya lifted her head up and when Asad pushed back her hair he brought her lips back to meet his to kiss her again."

That was scenic and every bit lovely.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Wowww This is lovely...
horse riding 😆
they dnt even know their Mobile numbers bt loved each other a lot...my babies r so innocent
Asad... is really a sweetheart he spoke with his parents n discussed abt her further studies...
zoee u lucky gal..
the kiss is so romantic... 😳 .only 5 days left..I'm feeling sad..
continue soon saima