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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

I know you didn't lift it Dhanuu.

And.

I love you too. ;)

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ariel1985

@ariel1985

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Thank you for the reply Dhanesh.. I am glad you are planning on adding your own twists...I would love to read your ff...and thanq for not taking it the wrong way...I generally do not post things unless I m really interested in the ff...pls do continue..and sorry for being mean..

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ariel1985
Thank you for the reply Dhanesh.. I am glad you are planning on adding your own twists...I would love to read your ff...and thanq for not taking it the wrong way...I generally do not post things unless I m really interested in the ff...pls do continue..and sorry for being mean..

Oh sweetheart you weren't being mean at all, as I said criticism is always welcome, and I wouldn't be writing an ff if I was worried if people were mean or not :)

Also I edited my forts post and added the author and title :) thank you for the constructive comments

Thanks for your comments , hope you enjoy the rest of the story 😊 And hope it lives up to your expectations

Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago

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sanamaahil

@sanamaahil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Wow !!! I just love this . Its awesome !

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Extremely long?!😲 THAT WAS WAY TOO SHORT!!!😭 I LOOOVVVEEE THIS!!! BUT hoe dare ya stopping there?!🤢😭 DO UPDATE ASAP!!! WILL BE WAITING!😃

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Mineee

Oh Dhanuuu!!!

He thinks she's angry!! Haha! If only!

I absolutely love it!!! Yes! Only he gas the right to know her! Hee!

I'm glad you didn't push his luck so much!! Though the peck in her cheek and that bheeghi honth close dance probably was crossing limits! And before Praguu comes and strangle me for being happy that they didn't seal the deal, lemme tell you why first!!

Well!!! If they don't do it now...they'd do it later right?? And the wait us in itself a different kind of enjoyment.

Oh D my sweetheart!!! I love it!!! Her little shivering and blushing and all!!!!! You rock!!!

And you dedicate this to us maniacs!!! Mwah mwah thank you!!! And you!! Yes!! I know how much I mean to you!! I can only hope you know how much YOU mean to ME.

So sweet of you to mention my name like that!!! I wanna high you so bad!!!! I'm like oh myyy!!!! Yes yes yes you love me and I love youuu!!

Hugs!!!!

Already looking forward to the next part!!

Is he gonna follow her...?

#can't wait!!

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

And I waited till the end with a baited breath...😆

As I was reading I realised at some point in between I was like getting more and more closer to the screen...😆😆 I even forgot, my phone rang three times!!😆

I don't know what effect HE or SHE are having on each other, but I could surely tell, what effect THEY BOTH are having on me, more precisely, YOU. Okay, i mean your WRITING, obviously!! 😆

And as you already warned me to have a glass of water with me, yes I have. I am having lemonade 😆😆Thanks for that, but no thanks, coz I already knew 😆

That. #9, was class! With a C! 😆 Awesome in every sense. You can figure out with the type of description I gave 😆

Sanam, Sanam, Sanam. The way he says her name! Who would NOT have that effect??! She should have sealed them right there! 😆

The closeness. That dance. Oh why don't they just do it already?!!😆

Oh Dhannu!! You make me asking for more!!

Sanam in this, makes me want even MORE OF HIM!☺️😆

You are my savior! (actually not!😆)

I don't even know what did that mean! 😳😆

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--Sana--

@--Sana--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Lovely update
Wow sahil close dance
Thanks for the pm
update soon

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Faruu!

I see the fasting has not stopped you from putting so much energy in your writing, 😉 Thank heavens for that!

I know I know, he kinda did cross the limit, but I wanted him to feel different about crossing the limit with Sanam than he does with other girls. You see Sanam is still this undiscovered person to him. So in order to figure out what she is and what he feels he's testing the waters 😆

And I'm glad you know what you mean to me, and yes I know what I mean to you! Oh just come to South Africa already so I can give you a huge hug!

And I don't think they'll do it anytime soon either, I'm just going with the flow of my thoughts here. And I quiet like suspense 😆 apparently I only am able to write 11 at night since that's the only time the writing part of my brain works.

Mwah!

Xxx

Pragu my sweetheart, lemonade - please send some over, it's so hot here, and not only because of SaHil but because the weather here is really ugly.

Do it already? Now now, Sanam is determined to keep everything intact - maybe, I think.😆

This ones also for you, you know for becoming a dazzler and stuff!

And not answering the phone 😆😆 , and the screen in your face! 😆

Oh what have I done to you?? What have I don't to me?? I'm dreaming about them ,😉

🤗Big hug from SA

Xoxo :*

Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago