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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Amazing update! I absouloutly loved it
It was truely worth the wait.
Can't wait to see the reaction of the office employees when they announce that they'll be getting married soon.
Thanks for the pm and please continue soon

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: --Sana--
Aahil propose sanam like way business deal
Sanam agree for her family
Awesome update
Exciting for sahil nikah
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank you :)

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Aye12345
Oh my... as if he proposed :))) Hee hee, poor Sanam thinks it's a business deal and is doing it for her family *sighs* if only she knew that in fact Aahil loves her and does actually want her to be his wife :))) Aww, the thought of that, makes me feel all lovely jubbly :)) They are sooo cute together mannn :))) Can't wait for the nikaah, please please continue soon and thank you for the PM :))) xoxoxoxoxo

Thank you for your wonderful comments :)

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126
oh my god!!!! loved loved loved it 👏 most definitely worth the wait!
I'm so annoyed with the way the track is going as of today, with Tanu poisoning Aahil against Sanam, etc. etc. 😡 if only the writers thought more like you! update soon 😃

Awww sweety don't worry, fighting always leads to lovin 😆 So hopefully soon we're gonna see some intense Junoon moments.

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: mahwash17
Awww.. I'm so going to look forward to see what you think of it so far.. 😳
Of course the story I'm writing is nothing compared to THIS! <3

This is pure perfection. ❤️

I always enjoy reading your updates - I even end up reading all the parts, because it's so beautiful and different kind of story. I love it!

Now, coming back to your update. Woah! Aahil is proposing her? Did not see that coming - but interesting.

Loved this line when he was trying to convince her:
"You know my habits, my likes, my dislikes, my allergies. Hell you even book my doctors appointments for me."
- sure had me laughing for a bit.

Yes! She said yes. Sanam agreed to be part of his so called business deal. Lure me, if there wouldn't be something more to it :D

You've left me wanting more. I need more. Haha! I need the wedding to be all romantic and mushi 😆

You did a fantastic job!

So looking forward for the next part :)) <3 😳

Mahhuuu, you're far to kind, and all sugary and sweet with your comments, soon I'll have diabetes 😆

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoy my story that much to read all the parts again <3

Of course there will be romantic and mushi stuff, it's SaHil after all , and they're getting married!!!

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Amandeep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Nice Dhanesh🤗

Continue soon

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Yayy!! Dhannuu!! Finally read it. And now commenting. Sigh! 😆

Oh I love you my maniac, for all the stuff you provide me 😆

Yes yes! This was one crackling update! He proposed, well almost! In his style baybayyh!! 😆

A proposal is a proposal. When they will be in love they would laugh on this one day actually 😆

Ahh!! I loved how he was preapring himself how to propose the deal. And he wants beneath him. Grr!! 😆 I loved how his thoughts always roam around her only.

And she. Ah. She is no less affected. She wants something "more" than love. Eh. Uh. Thats something Aahil needs to listen. You're getting him listened right? Right. 😆

Loved how he was determined to get a "yes" from her, convincing her all that he could. And she, finally said yes! He wanted to kiss her till they could barely breathe 😆 You could just give that too! Okay, I am happy with that quick hug! 😆

Yayy!! Wedding is soon! And so would be the wedding night! 😆 Can't wait! And sorry again! I love you! <33

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Mine!!!

Dhannuuu!!!

I don't like it charming...

I LOVE it charming!!!!! Love love love!!!

They hugged! Awww. They hugged.

She said yes...and they hugged!!

Oh goodness!! I knew he'd want her as his wife...but for him to scheme a plan and proposed! I didn't see that coming! I was so happily surprised! He knew which button to press! And worked his charm on her!! Hayyyeee!! Love him for acknowledging that she's the only one who'd do it without bothering about the property or name.

And oh she's such a sweetheart...already harbouring feelings for him...and she thinks he looks at her like an alien! Oh boy. Sanam Sanam. If only you know. He wants you beneath him...literally. And you will! All in good time!!

I totally want her point of view of the proposal! She must think it indeed is a business proposal, right? Oh mannn. Oh well!

Anddd!!!

Wedddinnnggg belllsss!!!!

Can't wait!!!!!

I love weddings!!!!

Now that they have this unspoken understanding...things would be a lot nicer!!! Anddd.

They get to do all the rituals and ceremonies and dress up and Woohoo GET MARRIED!!!!

I WANT SEXY, SASSY...AND SWEET TOO!

Plenty sweet. All nice and romantic and hayyyeee. I want him winning her.

Brilliant stuff coming up I can totally tell!!!

Charm me more Dhanuuu!!

Love you!!!

Mwahhh

And I waited with baited breath for this comment!

Farruu! I love it, I mean, you just know how to gove feedback and make a person feel all mush inside with your flattery. Sexy, sassy, romance with some sweetness. Now that's defo's what I look for in a story, hopefull he'll win her over, in more ways than one ;) hahaha I think my filthy thoughts go towards them when I'm writing, which is usually late at night hahahaha I know, I'm the alien here not Sanam, oh how I wish he'd look at me like that 😆

Hopefully the next one will knock your socks off

Love you xoxo

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: aman1605
Nice Dhanesh🤗
Continue soon

I LOVE THIS!

Aman my fellow misunderstood lady ;) oh this is so cute

I love you for this picture is so smiley and hugsy and ya you know what I mean 😆

Xoxo

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Dhaneshree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Yayy!! Dhannuu!! Finally read it. And now commenting. Sigh! 😆
Oh I love you my maniac, for all the stuff you provide me 😆
Yes yes! This was one crackling update! He proposed, well almost! In his style baybayyh!! 😆
A proposal is a proposal. When they will be in love they would laugh on this one day actually 😆

Ahh!! I loved how he was preapring himself how to propose the deal. And he wants beneath him. Grr!! 😆 I loved how his thoughts always roam around her only.

And she. Ah. She is no less affected. She wants something "more" than love. Eh. Uh. Thats something Aahil needs to listen. You're getting him listened right? Right. 😆

Loved how he was determined to get a "yes" from her, convincing her all that he could. And she, finally said yes! He wanted to kiss her till they could barely breathe 😆 You could just give that too! Okay, I am happy with that quick hug! 😆

Yayy!! Wedding is soon! And so would be the wedding night! 😆 Can't wait! And sorry again! I love you! <33

Praguu! Thank you! For all the stuff you provide me with - today being the best one yet! Totally caught me off guard with all that sexy. And you know a girl can never have to much sexy right? So keep them coming!

Yes yes wedding bells and wedding night *blushes* I want to right something raunchy! Maybe soon, I'll see where my Fantasies take me ☺️

And don't be sorry! I don't care if you have to miss my every single update just to write what you did!

I know I know, I'm greedy and selfish like that 😆

Love you 🤗