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Originally posted by: --Sana--

Aahil propose sanam like way business deal
Sanam agree for her family
Awesome update
Exciting for sahil nikah
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Oh my... as if he proposed :))) Hee hee, poor Sanam thinks it's a business deal and is doing it for her family *sighs* if only she knew that in fact Aahil loves her and does actually want her to be his wife :))) Aww, the thought of that, makes me feel all lovely jubbly :)) They are sooo cute together mannn :))) Can't wait for the nikaah, please please continue soon and thank you for the PM :))) xoxoxoxoxo

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126

oh my god!!!! loved loved loved it 👏 most definitely worth the wait!

I'm so annoyed with the way the track is going as of today, with Tanu poisoning Aahil against Sanam, etc. etc. 😡 if only the writers thought more like you! update soon 😃

Originally posted by: mahwash17

Awww.. I'm so going to look forward to see what you think of it so far.. 😳
Of course the story I'm writing is nothing compared to THIS! <3

This is pure perfection. ❤️

I always enjoy reading your updates - I even end up reading all the parts, because it's so beautiful and different kind of story. I love it!

Now, coming back to your update. Woah! Aahil is proposing her? Did not see that coming - but interesting.

Loved this line when he was trying to convince her:
"You know my habits, my likes, my dislikes, my allergies. Hell you even book my doctors appointments for me."
- sure had me laughing for a bit.

Yes! She said yes. Sanam agreed to be part of his so called business deal. Lure me, if there wouldn't be something more to it :D

You've left me wanting more. I need more. Haha! I need the wedding to be all romantic and mushi 😆

You did a fantastic job!

So looking forward for the next part :)) <3 😳

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Mine!!!

Dhannuuu!!!



I don't like it charming...

I LOVE it charming!!!!! Love love love!!!


They hugged! Awww. They hugged.



She said yes...and they hugged!!




Oh goodness!! I knew he'd want her as his wife...but for him to scheme a plan and proposed! I didn't see that coming! I was so happily surprised! He knew which button to press! And worked his charm on her!! Hayyyeee!! Love him for acknowledging that she's the only one who'd do it without bothering about the property or name.


And oh she's such a sweetheart...already harbouring feelings for him...and she thinks he looks at her like an alien! Oh boy. Sanam Sanam. If only you know. He wants you beneath him...literally. And you will! All in good time!!

I totally want her point of view of the proposal! She must think it indeed is a business proposal, right? Oh mannn. Oh well!

Anddd!!!


Wedddinnnggg belllsss!!!!


Can't wait!!!!!


I love weddings!!!!


Now that they have this unspoken understanding...things would be a lot nicer!!! Anddd.



They get to do all the rituals and ceremonies and dress up and Woohoo GET MARRIED!!!!

I WANT SEXY, SASSY...AND SWEET TOO!

Plenty sweet. All nice and romantic and hayyyeee. I want him winning her.


Brilliant stuff coming up I can totally tell!!!


Charm me more Dhanuuu!!



Love you!!!


Mwahhh

Originally posted by: aman1605

Nice Dhanesh🤗

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Yayy!! Dhannuu!! Finally read it. And now commenting. Sigh! 😆

Oh I love you my maniac, for all the stuff you provide me 😆

Yes yes! This was one crackling update! He proposed, well almost! In his style baybayyh!! 😆

A proposal is a proposal. When they will be in love they would laugh on this one day actually 😆

Ahh!! I loved how he was preapring himself how to propose the deal. And he wants beneath him. Grr!! 😆 I loved how his thoughts always roam around her only.

And she. Ah. She is no less affected. She wants something "more" than love. Eh. Uh. Thats something Aahil needs to listen. You're getting him listened right? Right. 😆

Loved how he was determined to get a "yes" from her, convincing her all that he could. And she, finally said yes! He wanted to kiss her till they could barely breathe 😆 You could just give that too! Okay, I am happy with that quick hug! 😆

Yayy!! Wedding is soon! And so would be the wedding night! 😆 Can't wait! And sorry again! I love you! <33