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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Stay beautiful!

That's about all I could manage to remember!

Love the update!!

Poor Haider got scoldings from Zoya! She's pregnant not sick!

And Ayaan staying true to himself, starts with leg pulling!!! Oh amazing chapter!!!

Mwahhh!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Started with this story jst nw...read all 8 parts in a stretch...nw waiting for the engagement...whenwill u update?...plz pm me

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

"How was your flight?", she whispered.

"Safe!", he whispered.

"How are you?", he asked.

"Beautiful!", she replied cheekily making Asad smile.

The highlight of this delightful read. 😎 😉

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

This was perfect ^^ update soon

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Zeal_18

@Zeal_18

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Hey just now I read oll the chapters nd it's really amazing. .I m eager to read ur next update..plz update it soon🥳👏❤️

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Superb update

I loved it

I am eagerly waiting for the engagement & farm trip

I like ASYA phone convos

That was so cute

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

superb update.
Luvd it.
Realy nice awsm one.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Love the update

Wonder what zoya have to talk to him about

Hope nothing bad

So love ayaan worrying about his bhai if he is happy

He is he smiles blushes

Oh so love their text their call

Can't wait for it to get more romantic

So she is scared he laughed she hung up he called she ignore

He texted she called he answer b4 first ring up 😆So cute

Oh love her and haider convo

Awww he complimented her first time so so cute

He is totally smitten dilshad happy she have to thank zoya

Haha he laughed seeing zoya baby and his desperation when he got to her house

He wants to see her love the convo when she sit by him

Waiting on the engagement and zoya talk

Continue

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Nice updates
Like how Asad n Zoya r slowly progressing in their new found relationship growing more close each day
Poor Zoya feeling nervous n here Asad making worse by teasing n laughing
Was so sweet how he was looking for her n how he lit up once he saw her n wow flirting too what a treat
Looking forward to seeing what Zoya wants to talk to Asad about got my curiousity peaked
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
"Bhai.. Aap iss nikaah se khush hai na?", he asked.

"Main khush hoon!", replied Asad with a small smile.

Ayaan and Asad scene was so lovely... perfect brotherly bond... 😃

"Ab aap mujhe aur dara rahe hain!", she whined.

"Arey.. Main kya koi Dracula hoon jo aapko dara raha hoon?", he asked.

This scene was a little cute... a little funny... a little romantic ❤️

"Zoya.. I wasn't laughing at you. I was just.. ermm.. I'm sorry!", he said.

She smiled but didn't say anything.

"I know you're smiling, now cut the fake anger.", he said.

He knows when she is angry and when faking it now... I am loving it

"Good Night Cartoon!", he said,

"Good Night Psycho!", she replied.

Haider and Zoya... perfect bond... 🤗

"Jee.. Stay safe!", she whispered.

"Stay beautiful!", he replied.

"Jee?", she asked in shock.

"Jee kya? You told me to stay safe so I told you to stay beautiful!", he replied as a matter of fact-ly.

OMG!!! OMG!! This was wow... I so loved it 😳

They reached the parking lot and Asad smiled seeing Zoya's baby and chuckled.

"Kya hua bhaijaan? Aap has kyun rahe hain?", asked Ayaan.

"Kuch nahi!", he replied quickly but the laugh did not go unnoticed by Dilshad so she rolled her eyes and made sure that she would find out the inside joke.

Asad is so adorable... Ayaan is 'Ayaan'... I am so loving this story 😊

"Allah Miya what's wrong with you? Shut up and calm down. Sab theek hoga Haider. Please relax.", shouted Zoya.

The family looked over at Zoya who was unaware of their presence.

"Aaha.. Why are you forcing San. Just let her eat what she wants to. She is pregnant, not sick. Stop feeding her dal khichdi. My poor champ will come out in this world and say, what a boring Dad I have!", she chuckled.

This was just amazing... Zoya in this avatar was just superb ⭐️

Asad glared at Ayaan.

"Ammi.. Bhaijaan ko bolo, Mukka Ahmed Khan banne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main to sirf pooch raha tha.", complained Ayaan.

Brilliant... simply brilliant... must say your writing skills have taken a whole together leap... 👏