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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenilious

😳k wil b waitng dee!!!!


Jyada wait mat kar...!! Mera soon bohut dair main ata hain...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks again for the 2nd version...
beautiful..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Jyada wait mat kar...!! Mera soon bohut dair main ata hain...😛


😆aur ye tumari vala soon real soon ho ne mein kitna waqt lag ne wala h???abtak tho apki soon ka adha waqt hogaya hoga i guess😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for making it more clearly...

with all the angle...

awesome ending...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno




Hello Sara🤗
I am overwhelmed after reading your comment!!
Well you know why I guess😆
Yes I was cursed from the moment I posted this chapter.
And I am happy that at least one person like it truly...!
Well I am not going to disappoint my readers as I am going to update the alternate chapter here. You can read it or cannot...!
I prefer sad ending more...!
For me it is unique and more reliable!!
You did not miss anything.
Zinia's truth was on the epilogue which I wrote but you will find it in the alternate ending too...
Really glad to know that you loved my work!!
Thank you so much!!



Hey swapno 😳
Hahaha I have a vague idea I guess 😆
Lol u know what cursing bashing n al is fine..par emotional blackmail is something else altogether..sigh!
But you know I can truly relate to all the readers..no one likes sad endings..especially then when the leads were killed in the serial...we are both readers n writers so we can relate to the readers need for a happy ending ...but I feel the readers won't b able to relate to our idea of sad endings because they won't have the knowledge of an authors imagination or the plot of the story..hence the non acceptance of a sad ending 😊
You prefer sad endings?I prefer happy endings..
Going to read and uncover zania's truth now,Kya hai woh raaz? 😆
I really did luv ur work...I want to read a happy,funny and cute love story from you now..I guess you've started another story,I got ur ...will check that too..
Loads of luv
Sara 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okies finally I read the ending...
First of al plz don't tell me I was the only one who liked the sad ending-everyone will think m heartless n what not 😆 Your last line of the note-this is dedicated to all the readers who bashed me left right ,up down,everywhere-rofl swapno your seriously hilarious 😆

Coming to the update,
I luuuv Mona and Rabert scene..their hug..clearance of all the misunderstandings
N humi Ayaan ...Ayaan 'a sheepish smile n finally we come to know about zinia
Asad is so damn cute n he loves Zoya so much

I liked Gaffur Zoya scene as well
For me the emotional scene was Dilshaad n Zoya's hug scene ..I loved that scene
N Asad Zoya's confrontation...how Asad hugs Zoya...adooorable 😳
And Asad,zinia,Zoya bedroom scene was sweet as well..

I liked how you showed ayra looking at them dreamily

And not to forget the small details of Asad keeping all Zoya's belongings safe n Zoya surveying her cupboard...it adds emotions to the story..somehow making it seem real.. 👏

Loved how you ended it 😳

Between the happy and sad ending -I undoubtedly (hands down) choose happy ending simply because it felt complete,whole and there was a sense of 'awwwness' to it..n obviously we love happily ever after 😊


You know,some say happy things remain with them for a long time,some say sad things remain with them for a long time...for me it's funny things..The other day I was just sitting and asya's first meeting(from your story) flashed through my mind all of a sudden-lik how Asad actions and Zoya' s reaction afterwards..and I started laughing remembering that scene...And my sis is looking at me from the corner of her eyes giving me..are you crazy look...

I guess asya's first meeting(funny one..)
Diary scenes(very amazingly written n emotionl)
Asya's parting scene(in the car,last second part)
Dilshaad Zoya scene(end part-hug)
Asad Zoya scene(dying scene-remember me once zoya)
And the happy walla ending scene(last part -Asad kissing Zoya)

These r my mossttt fav scenes from your story...it's like I have actually seen these scenes in read rather than reading it...

Thank you for such a lovely story...enjoyed reading it 😳

Loads of luv
Sara 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww the epilogue was very cute 😃

Loved the mukka part-Asad n Ayaan are adorable

Best part was babuni and abbuni...chooo cuuuttee

And Ofcourse shayaris 😳

Cuuuttee epilogue 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saadia, how did u forget me sending PMs,
I read like so many chapter to get back to the ending, Sad but very intrigued, 👏


Zoya is the hasty one , chatty one, seems illogical to most but for me , she finds ways in different ways.She is seeker of solutions.Love her in that avatar.Asad is the one who is opposite, calm, paced, organized and much more but he is the one who falls for her as alway.

Idk about you , but I liked teh ending...some how it suited the story.

Girl, your note is hilarious...😆

Thank you


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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks all of your beautiful comments..It really means a lot!! I am blessed with you all the awesome readers and it keeps me to go on and on!!
Thanks for that and accepted my writings although it has so faults!! Love you always folks.

Swapno 😳

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