AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Really cute chapter Ankie:). Nice concept also.
Glad they interacted :)
Looking forward to read more :)

Vinita

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Divya.S.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Unres at pg 2 and 39 😃

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sandjanarai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Lovely dear really nice
Like the way they feel so attractive
Very nice written
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
Pm me

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

I like that Asad has more vocabulary rather than just woh and actually. I know it must have taken him a hell load of courage to talk to her and I think that deserves a round of applause,👏

I'm although very surprised that Zoya didn't blow up when he talked to her, I was sure that she would take out her pepper spray and blind the poor guy,

It seems as if the weather and Zeeshan are playing cupid for AsYa in this story, I'm glad that they are, the two need all the help that they can get,

I don't even want to imagine how awkward the car ride must have been, seriously you could have even heard ants crawling if you listened in, that's how bad it must have been,

I'm glad that your taking this slow. As much as it affects the story, it bothers me when writers just poof in love to the story when it makes no sense whatsoever. Its pretty obvious that in this story AsYa are attracted to each other, now I'm looking forward to see the two move past that and develop new and stronger feelings,

Update soon:)

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Good Zoya is like a kid
Like her that way
Asad ...well is asad
Zoya omg
He is nice but I can shout for neighbors too

Edited by ican - 11 years ago

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Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

wow loved it

entirely different story

how they begin their attractions towards each other

and the ending was lovely

there are somethings which ddnt want any words how things will ned

loved it😃

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Awesome update...
Beautifully written. ...
I loved asad pov...
Asad offered zoya lift...so cute...
Paper boats..wow I loved them...
Asya are so adorable and cute...
Loved every bit of it...