AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Re ankie tu soo gayi kya 🤣 🤣

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Awesome part Loved it <3

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Hola!!! (no I do not speak Spanish, only what Dora taught me)

Loving the concept of the story here, it is so simple yet well described and amazing. I am glad to see that Asad isn't the broken sort of man here, he seems normal (not that he wasn't normal in the show, oh who am I kidding?? The guy was half mental, to me that is)

Anyways back to the story, it is interesting to see the great AAK so caught up with a girl. Of course he is the same OCD kind of guy, but he seems very sweet and kind. The poor guy is so caught up with Zoey that he's beginning to stalk a girl, oh sorry NOT stalking a girl that is.

Zoya seems like very typical Zoya. She's nice, sweet, traditional yet modern and a new yorkian, if that's even a word.

I hope that Asad gets over his emotional disorder and musters up courage to at least talk to the girl. I mean don't just leave her hanging or otherwise she will really think he is a stalker.

Loved the first chapter,

Thank you for making it long, appreciate that, please PM if you can, buddy request has been sent,

Update when you can:)

- Sonny:)

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Awesome Ts...👏

Love it...😊

Update nxt part soon...😃

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Lovely start yaar

Hop you get good response & update it soon

Thanks for pm & waiting for next

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Nice start
Asad saw zoya & attracted towards her
He wanted to see her & he saw her.
Zoya saw someone hiding & looking towards her
She saw him & knew that he was not a stalker
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Asad a stalker bad
But I know asads not a stalker
Well will he make a poppat of himself ?
Well written

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Love at first sight.. Will Asad gain the courage to go up and talk to Zoya!!

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

great update

so both are attracted towards each other although they are strangers

i am excited to know how asad is going to find out her name

do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Feeling so gud to see u bck with a ts..
Nd the start was fab...
Amzng updt loved it ankie..
What a rainy rainy updt...
I personally love rain sooo mch..
Par yaha aane k naam hi nai lera *sign*

nd yes asad is not a stalker*wink*
superb prt ankie
continue soon