AsYa SS-WALLBANGER!Round 9 - Pg 98, 4th Aug! - Page 63

Originally posted by: jas91

So miss Jules is back🥳

with a compensation chapter since u couldn't write d long one 😆

U like Zaffer he is nice guy that is ok but surely Zoe is 1 dumb girl😡

Asad is absolutely right she still sees him wid d glass of past👎🏼

Just cuz of 1 MU she readily jumped 2 kiss Zaffer🤢

Their is no trust factor from d start from her side

She needed this verbal slap on her face😈

I loved NAjma's reactions lovely sassy girl

Love u jules🤗

waiting 4 nxt part😳

Plus I want 2 know did she shared Asad past about his escort thing 2 Zaffer if so that's horrible. He sahred it cuz he loves her but she went on saying this side of his life 2 every1 very bad.👎🏼

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Whoa Jas! Take a breather, my friend.🤗

kaise Karun jab tak tujhe explain na kar lun

I am going to consider that you probably missed a few lines on this particular update and also the last few ones. OR I am the amateur writer to fails to explain things correctly, so here is my second change to narrate things right.

No yaar u r great writer but galti meri side se bhi toh ho sakti hai samjhne main. I feel here d writer reader relation we have we can ask any query or part that we could not understand that was my intention only.

Of course there is no trust . My characters are flawed like me because I am human, I don't write stories of perfect man and woman ever. They grow to perfect their own love story as the story progresses. If you tell me trust comes with every relationship then I am very surprised cos I know for a fact - Trust needs to be earned. At least in my relationships.

And u r telling as if I m new reader😆 I have been reading ur stories since d start & loving as well. And I 4 a fact know that nobody is perfect in real life or in ur stories. Always Asad & Zoya have had flaws. And yes I know trust is earned not something which comes free wid any relation. Trust comes later in any relation.

Ok so to clarify. NO! of course Zoya didn't disclose Asad's past. If you read she tells him nothing, but Zaffar senses something wrong. He knows Asad as her neighbor, when they reach her apartment she keeps looking at Asad's door. So he knows Asad messed something up or something close, hence he asks "Do you want me to beat him up." And she replies, " And Let him know I care. No sir."

That was d only qstn in my mind which I asked u & now its cleared. I was not sure cuz u wrote she tells him about Asad I thought did she told about his past life as well. And about nxt day I knew why Zaffer Zoya & Assad reacted that way cuz any1 who is such close frnd 2 her can guess this thing seeing her behaviour.

She doesn't want to disclose her feelings for Asad. She does not want Asad to know she is in love and make this whole mess( which is in her head thanks to a very unclear voice mail) even more difficult to let go. What is wrong in that? She kisses Zaffar because she is impulsive from the start, like in this entire story and she wants Asad to know she has moved on, or that Asad was nothing serious to her.

I know she's impulsive even Asad has reacted same way here

Plus, she keeps telling herself she is a good girl. And suddenly falling for a guy like Asad is not easy for her. She heard him f**k next door for god sake. He himself declared he continued sex even with out the money. She is the sweetest, simple girl who lives to please her parents, who has never stepped out of line.

I can definitely understand that as I myself come from such family but I m not being biased 2wards any1 btw Asya cuz Asad hasn't cheated her he told his dark secret 2 her even b4 their was anything serious btw them & she has fallen 4 him knowing it so now she should not blame or take his past against him.

And puhlease, Asad f**ked randomly and he is OH SO HOT! I am ready to have his babies because he is now hitting on Zoya and Zoya is his epicenter . And that just makes him the best man any woman can have.😡

And Zoya kissed the one guy she crushed on all her life that too to make this awkward relationship easy to end and she is 🤢. What double standards. Atypical ! But hello! I beg to differ.

Haw what accusation I never said that Jules I myself don't like any girl falling 4 such person if he's insensitive selfish jerk & kissing Zaffer or even sleeping wid him was not any issue wid me. Plz don't make me feel such a horrible person

It's not like Asad told her that he loves her, it's not like Asad said he wants to marry her and that he was never going to sleep with any other woman again. It's not like he made it clear that he wanted more than sex from Zoya. So why is Zoya not allowed a kiss. I think Asad bloody well deserved to witness that kiss. He needs to experience what insecurity really means. The poor girl is insecure. Yes he is sweet but why is he making a big deal about it, why is he not straight forward asking her right questions and what gives him right to jump to conclusions when she was trying to explain, He just couldn't bear to see competition.

I know Asad has not yet revealed his feelings & yes it doesn't bind Zoya 2 stop 2 consider Zaffer's proposal. What I meant was that since d time she got 2 know his past she judged him seeing him wid d glass of past. Like in d party seeing him dance wid his exes she kept thinking wrong Than d way she insulted him throwing money on his face & now again Misunderstanding his voice mail all these MUS are due 2 his past some way or d other. She's not ready 2 see that he might have changed now. If she's judge him 4 his past always how can this relation ever work out.

You know what I am going to tell him-" f**k head, Fight harder if you love her." He is the one ending it when he is the banger and all she did was only one f**king kiss. He is the one who slammed that door on her face.

As I said u misunderstood it kissing other guy was not an issue

And NO! she does not deserve to be slapped verbally or otherwise. EVER! I am insulted that anyone would say that for a woman. She does not deserve to be disrespected physically, mentally, emotionally for her insecurity because a man believes that she should fall on her knees and submit her life for him. I don't ever preach or encourage that. I will shove a baseball bat in Asad's ass if he ever did that remotely slap Zoya or any woman.

I explained it above why I said so she's being judgmental since d day she got 2 know his past.

By verbal slap I only meant d words which he said. He said d same thing that she doesn't trust him & she did it during d trip too when she insulted him. She again did same mistake 4 an misunderstanding punished Asad....I meant was she should know what blunder she did twice & how much she hurt him wid her words that time. She needed 2 know it last time it was not that impactful 4 her she did felt guilty but mayb she got forgiveness sooner. Sometimes when u get forgiven easily u take that 4 granted similarly Asad also forgave her easily so she might didn't took that incident seriously.

Anyways - As I said before, everything was necessary. If she just choose Asad with out completely being over Zaffar, she would always go back to thinking what if, when ever things got difficult. Now she kissed Zaffar and felt nothing and she choose wallbanger every single time. Doesn't that count for something. She kissed Zaffar to pretend to Asad that he was not important to her, which is because She assumed that Najma was his ex pregnant girl friend bearing Asad's child. She is allowed mistakes, that's how she learns to never let go of the one who truly holds her heart. And Asad will know to fight for his girl always no matter what.

I'll again say Kissing Zaffer was not a thing I felt that just cause she is insecure or lacks trust she just misunderstood Asad & was ready 2 kiss another man 4 whom she doesn't even have feelings for. She could kiss or do anything wid any1 if she doesn't do that 2 punish or proof something 2 any1 let alone Asad. I didn't wanted her 2 ruin her own life 4 punishing some1 else.

But u thought I was against it that she's kissing Zaffer.

I had to vent. The feminist in me just is very angry at the chauvinist, sexist and one sided tunnel hole vision.

U think Main aisa hun😭😭

Ps - Oher than that, Love you Jas, thanks for the comment😆

Honest hugs, 🤗

Juliet.

Jab tak u wont understand my side I wont hug back😭

I hope I was able 2 explain my POV about my comnt now 2 my best level. Still if I failed 2 explain plz forgive me 4 making u so offensive about it

Originally posted by: jas91

Aaaja First Jhappi lele! 🤗

No, I never said or thought you are a horrible person. I wasn't describing you, I am just pointing the judgmental audience on this forum who would do anything to have Asad's babies. And yes Asad's babies is a joke my vain attempt to make you laugh.😛😆

I hold a very dear opinion of you, You are this adorable person who always says very nice things to me and has always supported me as a writer- big time and I am honestly grateful to you for that. This is why I was extremely offended and shocked when I read "verbal slap". I truly didn't expect you to say that so I just jumped up and had to defend Zoya's actions and my motive as a writer.

But thank you for coming clear and explaining what you exactly meant. I see your point with that comment now and why you made a sick face for the kiss. Most certainly you can ask me any questions and I will reply always. The issue here was really the slap and the sick face🤢.

See I jump impulsively without thinking too, just like Zoya😳. I got carried away with my reply, Kranti aagayi ...feminism took over my thoughts when I was typing the response. While I am not sorry for how I explained the story and the kiss. I apologize for being too harsh on you and hurting you. It wasn't my intention.

When I said - I had to vent. The feminist in me just is very angry at the chauvinist, sexist and one sided tunnel hole vision.

Here I was addressing the readers in general who react to Zoya's mistakes. I wasn't targeting you.We as readers always forgive Asad very easily no matter what because we are so madly in love with the character, that is what I meant by sexist and tunnel hole vision. We sympathize with Asad more. But if Zoya hurts Asad, we attack her actions. Be honest, we as readers, and here this includes me too, we always are partial to Asad more than Zoya at least in my stories. I don't want young girls reading my story to think Zoya needs to be punished for her mistakes. Zoya will learn from her mistakes and rectify it herself. That is the growth in her character.

Darling In honesty, the character Asad plays in this story is not easy to trust.. Zoya hates to show her weakness in love, she is afraid what if Asad doesn't love her or want her. They still didn't commit to anything.

Anyways, thanks for taking time to explain. And I do see your point was harmless. I over reacted.

Loads of love. Hope we can move on from this.

Juliet.